读后续写写作主题“人与动物”讲义
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A heroic dog
Like most dogs who homes are situated on large plots of land，one New Zealand dog regularly went off exploring through the farmland around his home for hours at a time.
But as Louie，a sheepdog rescued from a shelter when he was just a puppy，got older，his trips got shorter and shorter. Now that Louie is 12 years old，he choos to stay clo to home and hardly ever goes out to explore any more，which is why his family was so worried when he recently disappeared and didn't return home as usual.
“My mother was a little upt as he had stopped his wandering，” said Marolyn Diver，who parent sown Louie. “We were very concerned that he might forget where his home was.” But thankfully，Louie turned up at the hou a few hours later. “He looked so tired and had basically just collapd(崩溃)，”Marolyn said.“We were concerned that someone
might have hurt him. But then we realized there was a small note attached to Louie's collar. After reading the note，I felt complete relief and relaxed，and then my heart melted.”
“Louie is the hero of the day，” read the note，which was written by a neighbor about a mile away. “He led me to Maddy in distress stuck under a pile of branches．Cheers，Rob．” “According to Rob，Louie was waiting for him at his hou and demanded to be followed. Rob said that he was 100 percent sure that Louie knew what he was doing，and leading him to Maddy was his pure focus，” Marolyn explained.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
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Once Rob found Maddy，Louie helped him dig her out.
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“That night we were very worried about Louie，” Marolyn said.
【参考范文】
Once Rob found Maddy，Louie helped him dig her out. According to Rob，Louie pulled at branches and dug her out of the ground. Rob said that as soon as Maddy was free，both dogs ran to a nearby pond and jumped into it and began to drink water. Then he gave Louie a huge handful of dog biscuits as a thank-you. He knew that Louie might get in trouble for being late for home，so he thought he would write a small note to explain why Louie was abnt.
“That night we were very worried about Louie，” Marolyn said.“He could hardly walk and l
ooked terrible. We were concerned that he might not make it through the night.” Thankfully，Louie was back to normal the next morning when Rob came by with Maddy for a visit. Marolyn said，“It has changed the way I look at him. And I think my parents feel the same way. I'm so proud of him.”
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
It was one of the hottest days of the dry ason. We had not en rain in almost a month. The crops were dying. Cows had stopped giving milk. The streams were long gone back into the earth. If we didn't e some rain soon we would lo everything.
I was in the kitchen making lunch for the family when I saw my six year- old son，Billy，walking toward the woods. I could only e his back. He wasn't walking in his usual way. He was obviously walking with a great effort，trying to be as still as possible. Minutes after he disappeared into the woods，he came running out again，toward the hou.
Moments later，however，he was once again walking in that slow and purpoful step toward the woods. This activity went on for over an hour：walking cautiously to the woods，then running back to the hou. Finally，my curiosity got the best of me .I crept out of the hou and followed him on his journey.
He was cupping both hands in front of him as he walked；Being very careful not to spill the water he carried. Branches and thorns slapped(拍打)his little face but he did not try to avoid them. He had a much greater purpo. As I leaned against a tree to spy on him，I saw the most amazing site.
Several large dears appeared threatening in front of him. But Billy walked right up to them. I almost screamed for him to get away. And I saw a baby deer laying on the ground，obviously suffering from heavy loss of water and heat exhaustion，lift its head with great effort to lap(舔饮) up the water in my beautiful boy's hand.
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When the water was gone，Billy jumped up to run back to the hou. Paragraph 2：
And later I knew what was going on.
【参考范文】
When the water was gone，Billy jumped up to run back to the hou. My curiosity once again drove me to follow him back .After he reached the kitchen，he turned on the tap. As he was trying hard to cup both hands to receive the water，it was still running away through his fingers. And he also had great difficulty turning off the tap with hands occupied. He emed to be so sorry and lfcondemned for his wasting of water. Wearing a note of upt on his face，he carried it carefully toward the woods.
And later I knew what was going on. It began to make n to me why he wasn't walking in his usual way. I stood on the edge of the woods watching the most beautiful he
art working so hard to save a life. As my tears began to hit the ground，they were suddenly joined by And more drops. It was as if the nature itlf was moved by the great effort made by my son and began to weep with pride.
