读后续写三个微技巧：动作描写+环境描写+情感描写
读后续写微技巧之“动作描写”
Part 1·构造动作链条的句式
一、A, B and C（连词连接动词们）
e.g.“她抱住儿子”抱住儿子 = 冲向前 + 蹲下 + 一把抱住
She rushed forward, bent down and gathered her son into her arms.
“这个歌手唱歌” 歌手唱歌 = 扫视观众 + 深吸一口气 + 开始演唱
The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.
二、使用非谓语
（1）-ing现在分词，凸显主动，同一对象同时发生不同的动作。
“老人静坐”老人静坐=坐在夕阳下 + 看报纸 + 听广播
The old man sat under the sunt, reading the newspaper and listening to the radio.
（2）-ed过去分词，凸显被动
“孩子们哭了”ldy lickem感动哭了= 被感动 + 哭了
Deeply moved by the story, the children began to cry.
Part 2
一、“笑”动作描写
1. smile v.&n.微笑
smile at sb./sth. 对..笑；smile with relief 宽慰地笑；smile sweetly 嫣然一笑；
smile from ear to ear 笑得合不拢嘴
give a charming smile 迷人的微笑；crack a bright smile 绽放明亮的笑容；force a smile 强颜欢笑
2. laugh v.&n. 大笑
laugh a hearty laugh 开怀大笑；laugh behind their hands 用手捂着嘴笑；
explode with laughter=roar with laughter哄堂大笑；
burst into laughter=burst out laughing突然大笑起来；
roars of laughter 大笑
3. grin v.&n. 露齿而笑，咧着嘴笑
grin with delight 高兴的咧嘴而笑；grin from ear to ear 笑得合不拢嘴
4. giggle=chuckle v.&n. 咯咯笑
giggle at sb/sth 傻笑...；a fit of the giggles 一阵笑声佛山电脑培训学校
5. mock v.嘲笑
mock=laugh at=sneer at=make fun of logo是什么意思
二、“哭”动作描写
weep-wept 抽泣；sob-sobbed 啜泣；
cry 大哭；wail 哀嚎、恸哭；squall v.嚎啕大哭
burst into tears=burst out crying 突然哭起来
fight back tears抑制住泪水
be clo to tears 快要哭了
tears roll down/stream down one's cheeks 泪水顺着脸颊淌下来
tears cloud/fill/well up/brim one’s eyes 泪水模糊/溢出双眼
(His face/cheeks) be in tears=be filled with tears=be brimming with tears=be wet with tears 泪流满面
make somebody cry 让某人哭
sob one's heart out 痛彻心扉地哭
三、“说”动作描写
普通的说：（1）告诉tell sb sth=tell sth to sb
（2）talk with /to sb about sth
（3）say=utter She sat on the sofa, saying….
（4）chat with sb 和sb聊天
嘟囔，低语：whisper/murmur/mumble（含糊地说）；
whisper sth to sb in a low voice
结结巴巴地说：stutter/stammer
问与答：ask询问/answer回答/reply to回复/respond to 回复
喊叫：call/shout/yell/cry out 哭喊/scream尖叫/exclaim惊叫/howl 嚎叫/roar 咆哮
呻吟：moan
哽咽：choke
叹气：sigh
其他的说：add补充说道/ continue继续说道/acknowledge 承认说
explain解释说/ state陈述说/mention 提到说/repeat 重复说
protest抗议说//insist 坚持说/sob哭诉说/complain 抱怨说
agree同意地说/comfort安慰说/persuade 劝说
announce/declare 宣布说
promi/assure 保证说
suggest/advice 建议说
四、“看”动作描写
看：look at sb/sth；e sb/sth doing 看到sb/sth正在做
盯：stare at sb/sth (with his eyes wide open ) （瞪大眼睛）盯着
glare at sb 怒目而视
瞥：glance at sb/sth；glance around 匆匆环视四周
glimp 一瞥；give a glimp of sb/sth
注意：notice sb/sth doing 注意到sb/sth正在做
观察：obrve；obrve carefully/with attention
发现：spot；sb/sth was spotted. 被发现
看见：catch sight of；lo sight of 看不见
sth came into sight. sth进入视野；sth is out of sight/in sight. sth看不见
五、身体部位动作描写
（一）头部动作描写
1. He hung/dropped/lowered/bowed his head in shame. 他羞愧地低下了头。
2. They nodded their heads in agreement. 他们点头同意。
3. She shook her head in disbelief. 她怀疑地摇摇头。
4. He scratched his head with a shy smile. 他害羞的笑着挠了挠头。
5. He put/held his head in his hands, greatly annoyed.他双手抱头，十分生气。
（二）脸部动作描写
1. eyes
His eyes shone/sparkled/glimmered/glittered/twinkled with+excitement/pride等表示感情色彩的名词
His eyes were wide/grew wide/widened with horror. 他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛。
2. face/cheeks
Her face lighted up/brightened with excitement, pmanwhen... . 当...，他的脸上焕发出了兴奋的光彩。
A bright smile appeared on/spread across/crosd小学课堂教学模式 his face. 他的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。
His face flushed/burned/turned red okeswith embarrassment. 他窘得满脸通红。
He felt his cheeks burning with shame.他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。
He felt the blood rushing to his face. 他感觉到血液上涌。
ons是什么意思
Her face turned pale with fright. 她吓得脸都变白endurance了。
His face suddenly grew rious. 他的表情突然严肃起来。
His face looked a little confud. 他看起来有点因惑。
He had a slight frown on his face. 他愁眉不展。
He kisd her on both cheeks. 他亲了亲她的脸颊。
（三）手部动作描写
1. 打：pound/punch 猛击；beat连续击打；slap打耳光；tap/pat轻拍
2. 抓：ize；grasp；grab；catch/take hold of
He grasped the rope with both hands.他双手抓着绳子。
3. 够
reach 伸手够；英语必修5课文录音
He reached for her hand and held it tightly. 他伸手够她的手并紧紧握住。
She smiled and reach out a hand in welcome. 她笑着伸出一只手表示欢迎。
He reached out a hand and caught hold of/grabbed her arm. 他伸出一只手，抓住她的手臂。
4. 其他的动作
pull拉；push推；press按压；roll摇；pick up捡；drag拽；pinch捏；wipe擦；rub揉；scratch 挠
hand-in-hand；hold hands 手拉手
spread one’s hand 摊开手
wave one’s hands crazily/madly/wildly 拼命挥手
clap one’s hands拍手
hand sth to sb 把某物递给某人
bungalow
hold one’s hand 握住某人的手
His hands trembled with fear/excitement. 他的手害怕地/激动地颤抖。
