第二次 改进句子结构
1. My mother is a responsible nanny/ mother.
（1）She cooks delicious meals for me with love.
（2） When I get sick, she takes me to hospital as soon as possible.
2. css是什么Besides, my mother is a clo friend.
（1） She invites me to libraries so that we can enjoy reading together.
（2）No matter how busy she is, She helps me with my Math.
3. What is more, my mother is a wi teacher.
（1）She tells me not to give up when I have difficulties.
（2）If I want to give up half way, she suggests I have another try.
【总结提炼】作文优化技巧：善用定语，副词和连词，进行适当地扩词和扩句。
过渡方法：
1. 那就是(说)…；亦即…
That is to say, … = That is, … = Namely, …
例：我们生活需有规律。也就是说，早睡早起戒除烟酒。
We need to live a regular life. That is, we can keep good hours and refrain from smoking and drinking in the daily activities.
2. (A) 基于这个理由 For this reason …
(B) 为了这个目的jou For this purpo, …
例：基于这个理由，我已决定把行医作为未来的职业。
For this reason, I have decided to take practicing medicine as my future career.
3. 我们有理由相信…
We have reasons to believe (that)...
例：我们有理由相信体罚应该严格禁止。
柔和的意思
We have reasons to believe that corporal punishment should be strictly prohibited.
4. 事实上
As a matter of fact, … = In fact, …
例：事实上健康才是最重要。 As a matter of fact, it is health that counts.
5. (A) 例如 For example, …
(B) 拿…做例子 Take … for example.
例：例如我们盲目地提高生活水准，却降低生活品质。
For example, we elevate the living standards blindly, but lower the quality of life.
华尔街英语的价格6. 此外我们不应忽视…
Besides (In addition), we should not neglect …
例：此外，我们不应忽视每个人都想要一个温馨祥和的社会。
In addition, we should not neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society.
7. 相反地…
on the contrary, … = by contrast, …
例：相反地少数学生似乎还在鬼混。
On the contrary, a few students, it ems, are still fooling around.
8. 另一方面…
On the other hand, …
例：政府应严格执法，另一方面大众也应该培养减少污染的好习惯。
The government should enforce laws strictly. On the other hand, the public also should develop the good habit of reducing pollution.
9. 然而很可惜的是…
However, it is a
例：然而很可惜的是他总是临时抱佛脚。
However, it is a pity that he should always cram at the eleventh hour.
10.换言之…
in other words, … = to put it differently
例：换言之我会尽最大的努力达成我的目标。
高中生留学 In other words, I will try my best to attain (gain, live up to) my goal.
11.别人可能认为这是事实，但我不是。我认为…
It may be true as assumed by others, but I don't. I
例：别人可能认为这是事实，但我不是。我认为如果你有很大的决心和毅力，成功最后一定属于你。
It may be true as assumed by others, but I don't. I believe that if you have strong determination and perverance, the success will certainly come to you in the end.
12.从此之后我已发现…
Ever since then, I have
例：从此之后我已发现，在日常生活中，微笑是避免冲突最好的方式。
Ever since then, I have found smile the best way to avoid any possible conflicts in our daily lives.
13.这样说来，假如…当然毫无疑问地…
In this light, if…, there can surely be no doubt (that) ...
例：这样说来，假如我们能善用时间，当然毫无疑问地我们会成功。
In this light, if we can make good u of time, there can surely be no doubt that we will get somewhere.
14.更严重的是…
ari What is more rious is (that)...
例：更严重的是我们不珍惜野生动物。What is more rious is that we do not cherish the wildlife.
weed15.鉴于社会的实际需要…
In view of the practical need of society, ….
例：鉴于社会的实际需要，愈来愈多人对学英语有兴趣。
In view of the practical need of society, there are more and more people interested in learning English.
16.如果能实践这三点…
If one can really put the three points into action (practice), …
例：如果能实践这三点…。
If one can really put the three points into action(practice), he will surely be able to live a healthy and happy life.
学习英语的重要性
