专题11 读后续写
一、（福建省龙岩市第二中学2021-2022学年高三期中）阅读下面文章，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整短文，续写词数应为150左右。
My great-grandfather, my grandfather and my father are farmers, and so are all my family. My father has a fixed idea that I would become a farmer too. Although I respect him and am indeed skilled at doing some farm work, I don’t agree that I should automatically follow in my father’s footsteps.
When I was a teenager, my father happened to take me to an airport which belonged to one of his friends. It was the first time I had en an aeroplane in real life. Knowing that I had never been on board, my father’s friend Tom offered me an opportunity to fly with him in his small aeroplane. I quickly accepted his offer! When we took off, I felt nervous but thrilled. Being up in the clouds and looking at the view below was unlike anything I had ever felt. I was just enjoying it. I assumed being a pilot would be the most awesome thing in the whole
world. From that day a thought crept into my mind that I wanted to become a pilot, but I doubted whether my father would support me. After all, it was a totally different path from what he had planned for me. Therefore, I put the thought to the back of my mind, becau I knew he would still insist on holding onto his previous idea.
Anyway, besides helping my father on the farm, I would frequently visit Tom’s airport. Gradually, I got familiar with every button and switch on the aircraft and I learned a lot about planes, such as how to fill the plane with fuel, how to check the engines and so on. But what I had learned just left me wanting more, so I decided to go to college to become a professional pilot.
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This time I would not hide my desire any more.
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At the graduation ceremony, with my father prent, I, as “Best Pilot”, had to deliver a speech.
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【答案】Possible version:
This time I would not hide my desire any more. Determined to follow my heart, I explained to my father how I felt. I told him that I wanted to go to a college to learn to fly instead of being a farmer. After saying this, I waited nervously for his reaction. To my surpri, he approved my request, and he told me he was moved by my perverance. With his support and my efforts, I was admitted into my ideal college.
At the graduation ceremony, with my father prent, I, as “Best Pilot”, had to deliver a speech. In my speech, I shared with the audience my story about how a teenager realized his dream. Faced with difficulties, I took a path that led me do something that needed passion, training and practice. I also owed my success to my father’s support. Wi
thout his understanding, I couldn’t have pursued my dream. At the end of my speech, I spotted my father’s watery eyes, and said, “Dad, I made it!” His face lit up with pride.anklet
夜雨寄北翻译【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。文章讲述了作者不想成为农民，而梦想成为一名飞行员的事情。surfairness
【解析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，因为家里祖祖辈都是农民，父亲认为子承父业是很自然的事情，但我却不这么认为。一次偶然的机会，爸爸带我去了他朋友汤姆拥有的飞机场，第一次坐上了飞机的我，非常兴奋，并暗下决心成为飞行员。于是，我常到汤姆叔叔的飞机场帮忙。越了解飞机的知识，越想成为专业的飞行员。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：这次我不再掩饰我的渴望了。所以接下来应该围绕我向父亲表达了想成为飞行员的梦想。根据第二段已给信息得知，我说出自己的想法后，父亲应该同意并支持了我。在本段应描写我的心理活动及父亲的做法和状态。第二段开头是：父亲出席了我的毕业典礼，我作为“最佳飞行员”必须发表演讲。本段应围绕我演讲的
内容，描述为实现梦想付出的努力。最后可以描述父子之间感情的升华，如父亲为我实现梦想而骄傲等。
最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右，注意语言通顺，符合逻辑，不要出现单词拼写和语法错误。
【点睛】
本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：approve, instead of, understanding, to one’s surpri等高级词汇；文章恰当的使用了宾语从句，如“I told him that I wanted to go to a college to learn to fly instead of being a farmer.”和“To my surpri, he approved my request, and he told me he was moved by my perverance.”使文章表达更加地道。
二、（福建省南平市高级中学2021-2022学年高三期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150 左右。
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It was a hot July day in Philadelphia. The five boys I was with had been sick of playing m
arbles and burning holes in dry leaves. So when little Ned suggested climbing the cliff, the rest of kids all agreed excitedly, except me. I hesitated. I longed to be brave and active, like them, but I’d been a sickly child most of my eight years and I actually wasn’t as strong as the other boys.
hammer是什么意思“Come on!”Called Jerry, my best friend. “Just being sick is no reason to be a coward（胆小鬼）.” “I’m coming!” I yelled, and ran along after them. Through the park and into the woods we went, finally we stood beneath the near vertical（垂直的）wall of the cliff, about 60 feet high. To me it looked like the very symbol of the Forbidden and Impossible.
One by one, the other boys climbed upward, finding handholds and toeholds on rocks. I hung back until the others were partway up; then trembling and sweating, I began to climb. A hand here, a foot there, my heart pounding in my skinny chest, I made my way up and up. At some point, I looked back and was horrified. The ground at the ba of the cliff emed very far below; one slip and I would fall. But the boys were talking loudly and happily above me. In a few minutes they started up to the top while I still struggled and crawled, far behind.
