[考研英语]商志英语作文模板
翻译一定要写满，而不要在乎句子是否完整通顺。当然别忘了标点符号，最后别忘了句号。
小作文顶多120字，要在第一页写完，不要拖到页面2，切忌～
页面2用于写大作文，220字左右，相当于B5纸的一半，一定要认真练习适应～
大作文
单号版:
What a compelling and thought-provking drawing it is! As is vividly prented in the
interesting and instructive cartoon above, ……(句1),in contrast,……(句2)。What on earth does the drawer really attempt to convey?
注释:thought-provking 中间的是连字符，不能去掉，不管它是位于同一行还是两个不
fucking是什么意思同的行。
Compelling and thought-provking 两个ing 押尾韵，俗称绝句
Interesting and instructive 两个押头韵
in contrast 路标性词汇，前后形成对比。
句1一般用来简单描述漫画内容，句2和句1形成对比
mcc是什么意思例如:06年的一个小男孩。。。。。。另一个小男孩(两个矛盾方面描述)
04年起点也是终点
穿中国服装的美国女孩。前一句写漂亮，后一句子转折写穿中国服装。
00年世界捕鱼(以前怎么样，现在怎么样)
温室花朵(温室里面花朵怎么样，外面花朵怎么样)
On earth:究竟 加强语气
australia是什么意思中文Drawer=作者。不能写author显得俗气
Really:可去掉，但不丰满
第二段
恩底弥翁Simple as the image is the implications(启示)mirrored(反映)are apprantly far-reaching(深远的)。Initially such a phenomenon as revealed in the picture has aroud wide-spread social
concern(关注)。Nowhere in the history has the issue of sth(其中of sth也可省略不写)been
talked about so much as in our society today(历史上任何时刻都比不上我们的时代这样关注这
件事情)
In the cond place, the painting reveals an uptting story(事情)and similar events happened and happening are heared or reported in nearly all aspects of our life.(27字)Additionally,the painter intends to convince us that a package of programs(一揽子项目，
计划，方案)should be initiated to rever the grim stuation----(此处是破折号)lauching(发起，发动)a nationwide education campaign,tting up relvant laws and regulations,and the list goes on.(36字)
三段
To conclude,it is high time that much importance were attached to such cas .And it is imperative
(necessary)actions be taken to curb(扭转不好的趋势)such practices(综上所述，结论如下:
早该重视这种现象了).There is reason to believe that as long as all the society ,the authorites and
the mass media and every one involved ,make concerted effort to strive hard,such uptting stories
will ultimately be ended or at least reduced.
注释:
All the society,the authorites and the mass media and every one involved 是用来扩充用的，如果
自己觉得空间不够，可以省略1，2个不写
“There is reason to believe that ”可以删除，句子意思不变
第一段双号版
What on earth can we derive from(从什么中获得)this interesting and instructive drawing?It goes without saying that (=There is no denying the fact that 毋庸置疑)what the painter virtually aims to convey is profound. Primarily ,we can learn that such cas are far from being (=not) rare and monster歌词
uptting (令人心痛的) parallels (类似的事情) can be found any there from our neighborhood and around the world. What’s more,there has been a growing (=more and
more) society would be like years later if this pervasive trend (肆虐的趋势) goes unchallenged (放任下去)。
Additionally ,to rever (扭转) the grim situation,effective measures should be entailed (定制)
by al parties concerned .Enhancing people’s awareness of such practices (行为) and tting up
relevant rules and regulations ought to be top priorities (首要任务) of the agenda. (议事日程)
注释:在第二段中几乎没写东西(指考生完全用的板子，没添加任何东西就可以用)，希望
考生能够自己根据能力修改，删除，增加一些东西。
第三段
Judging (非谓语动词) from all argument offered above ,we may safely arrive at the conclu
口福的意思
sive that it is high time that such stories were terminated or at least reduced.I’m strongly convinced
that only when such happenings (事情) come to an end,can we maintain a happy ,healthy and harmonious society (和谐社会) as well wish.
呵呵。。。。。。好了，我们现在已经有个大致的骨架了，剩下的所有东西我们都是在这个基础
上建立起来的(站在巨人的肩膀上)
强调两点哦:
首先把，部分考生担心射门雷同卷，这个担心是多余的，没必要哦。因为一般人多多
少少都是会修改的。
其次，物以稀为贵，东西多了就不值钱了。所以呢各位牛人高手可以在这个基础上采
取各种方法对其进行修改(替换词语，换句型，被动，主动，强调句，定语从句如此种种，
添加一些自己的宝贝)。
dfg
下面单刀直入，切入正题吧。
讲述可能出现的一些新情况:
3个万一:
万一大作文漫画是2幅而不是1幅
万一作文时非讽刺类的呢
万一作文时“图表类”呢(如97，99)柱状，曲线，饼状
triggering下面我们针对单双号分别展开
单号
1. 双漫画
神探夏洛克第二季1所有的单数改复数，当然有一些地方时不能修改的哦
2. 讽刺
“Additionally到末尾”删除，我们将其修改为举例(例下)
Let’s come to an example concerning .an acquaintance of mine ,which rves well as a good 阿卡索英语课程
example to the point……
第三段句子中的curb修改为ensure
第三段最后一句“such uptting 。。。。。。”全删，修改为
We can maintain a happy ,a healthy and harmonious society as we all wish.
双号
非讽刺修改
1. 第二段中primarily句中删除uptting
2. 第二段中what’s more 一句删除，“worning”
3. It’s hard……if we fail to guasp such cas and can’t put them into pratices
4. 把Additionally——段尾换成“举例“
To make the point even clearer,let’s come to an example regarding
An acquaintance of mine
That it is high time all parties concerned took effective and efficient measure to practice .
