热点5 校园欺凌
校园欺凌无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了负面影响。今天，选择的2020年中考英语写作预测话题是：校园欺凌。
【预测题目】
（一）
近日，“校园欺凌”（bullying in school）已经成为社会热点话题，阅读完上面的帖子后你有何感想？请你根据下面的写作要求，写一篇演讲稿谈谈你的看法。内容包括：
1.“校园欺凌”对我们有什么危害？
2.碰到此类事件，我们应该怎样做？ 请提出两点建议。
3.人人有责保持校园安全，并呼吁同学们抵制“校园欺凌”。
英文自我介绍面试作文要求：
1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
flash 音乐2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数，不必抄写在答题卡上。
Good afternoon, everyone .
Today I am going to talk something about bullying in school._____________________________________
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That’s all. Thank you
【参考范文】
Good afternoon, everyone .
Today I am going to talk something about bullying in school. In my opinion, bullying can make us feel unsafe and unhappy. It makes us hard to learn at school and get on well with others. No one has the right to hurt us. If someone bullies us or we e bullying happening, we shouldn’t be afraid to stop it .First, we should trust ourlves and tell them it’s not right to do like that. Second, we can ask teachers and parents for help.
It’s everyone’s duty to make schools safe. I hope all of us should be friendly to others and say no to bullying.
That’s all. Thank you.
【解析】2012年四川高考分数线
这是一篇给材料作文，写一篇演讲稿谈谈你对“校园欺凌”的看法。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Today I am going to……，It makes us hard to……，If someone bullies us……，It’s everyone’s duty to……，
I hope……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我演讲稿的目的是谈论“校园欺凌”，接下来介绍“校园欺凌”的危害以及如何面对这个问题，最后呼吁同学们抵制“校园欺凌”。此处talk about, in one’s opinion, make sb do sth, get on well with sb, be afraid to do sth, ask sb for help, be friendly to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
hungry （二）
请结合下面两幅图片所示内容，以＂How do you behave at school?＂为题写一篇短文。
要点：
1）请简要描述两幅图片；
2）如果你受到欺负时，你该如何应对(至少 2 点）；
3) 针对这些校园欺凌现象，谈谈自己在学校应该如何做(至少 2 点）。
注意：
1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）文中不得出现考生真实的姓名和学校名称；
3）100 词左右，已给出的部分不计入总词数。
（1） （2）
riyu参考词汇：beat, kick, respect, harmonious(和谐的), stop bullying (欺凌)
How do you behave at school?
There is something unpleasant happening at school. In Picture One,__________________________________
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【参考范文】英语外教上海
How do you behave at school?
There is something unpleasant happening at school. In Picture One, we can e a group of students holding sticks. They are beating and kicking other students. In Picture Two, an elder and stronger student is asking for money from others. This is called school bullying.
If I meet bullying at school, I will first obey their orders and give them my pocket money to
protect mylf. In this way, I can keep mylf safe. Safety is always the first. Then, I will tell what happened to both my parents and my teachers so that they can help me. I won’t keep it to mylf becau maybe the bad guys will go to you next time.6级成绩查询
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As a student, I think we should respect each other. If we have different ideas, we’d better discuss instead of fighting. Besides, we should help tho classmates who are in trouble. Let’s stop bullying and build a harmonious school.
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作，请结合下面两幅图片所示内容，以＂How do you behave at school?＂为题写一篇短文。要点：1）请简要描述两幅图片；2）如果你受到欺负时，你该如何应对(至少 2 点）；3) 针对这些校园欺凌现象，谈谈自己在学校应该如何做(至少 2 点）。2.例文点评：例文采用第一人称，时态采用一般将来时为主；本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的
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表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语： a group of students；asking for；protect mylf；keep mylf safe；so tha；instead of fighting；instead of fighting。
句型：宾语从句If I meet bullying at school, I will first obey their orders and give them my pocket money to protect mylf. I think we should respect each other.目的状语此句Then, I will tell what happened to both my parents and my teachers so that they can help me.原因状语从句I won’t keep it to mylf becau maybe the bad guys will go to you next time.
