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bjt 第二节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A warm scarf
I was a proud mother of three children, my last little one being delivered in the middle of this pandemic. She was born in August and her name is Aida.
Shortly after having Aida, my mother-in-law showed me something she learned from her friend’s mother in an art class she attended weekly. She had showed me how to knit a scarf. She showed me stitches and gave me her half done project.
I spent a lot of time breastfeeding my sweet little girl, so I had some extra time to do something with my hands throughout the day. I enjoyed making the scarf so I purchad tons of yarn since it was winter. I wanted to make scarves for my three children as Christmas gifts.
There was a new family that moved in down the street. The only daughter of the family was Jane, a shy girl, aged 14, the same age of my oldest son David. It emed that she came from a financially disadvantaged family, for she always wore old clothes. Wor still, in such cold days, she had no more clothes to wear and trembled with cold.
Due to the pandemic, society was thrown into crisis mode. Schools were clod, food supplies and deliveries were suspended and children were stuck at home. In such discouraging times, however, they became good companions, talking and playing at home or around the hous.
It was dreadfully cold this winter. Every time David came back from outside, with red face, he always cried, “Mum, it’s freezing outside!” then he came over to e whether I finished the scarf. I could tell how impatient he was to wear my scarf sooner! I had to speed the project to satisfy his expectation. But David comforted me saying he could wait a few days. What a kind and considerate boy he was! Then my great project finally was accomplished on the morning ahead of Christmas.
Para 1: I wrapped the scarf around David’s neck._____________
Para 2: Later that day David came back saying Jane also derved a scarf._______
Possible version
I wrapped the scarf around David's neck. David's face lit up with joy. Stroking the scarf softly, David excitedly kissd me in the neck, beaming at me”Thank you, Mum. This is the best gift I have ever received.” Before I could say anything, he dashed out to join Jane with a spring in his step. I felt relieved and content as a mother, eing David play happily outside, with the scarf shelting him to brave the bone-chilling wind. Wearing a smile on his face, I continued my chores that morning.
Later that day David came back saying Jane also derved a scarf. Obviously, David noticed Jane could hardly bear the freezing weather with worn-out clothes. “Can I give this to Jane as a Christmas gift?” David ventured in a low voice. Smilingly, I nodded. Seei
make it to the endng David rush into Jane's hou with the scarf in his hand, I felt a burst of pride. I was happy that both of them received the best gift for Christmas. For Jane---a scarf to keep warm and for David---a taste of happiness of giving.
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6个场景句式提升+语料补充
Plot 1: his reaction to the scarf
普通版：He was happy .
升级版1. 学化妆培训学校现在分词作状语，独立主格; 描写他的脸；比喻手法描写他的眼睛
低头看着我刚刚完成的围巾，他乐不可支,他的脸照亮了整个房间，黑色的眼睛像钻石一般闪烁。
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仿写：He was surprid. ( with复合结构；夸张修辞)
升级版：He was surprid , _____________________________________________(眼睛睁的大大的，好像眼珠子要瞪出来).
升级版2. 形容词短语做状语；细化动作；
不能抑制住他的高兴和激动，他一下子扑到我的怀里，喃喃道：妈妈，辛苦了。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________ 仿写：He was angry.
升级版：He was angry，________________________________________________________(他咬着牙，拳头攥的紧紧的，一句话也说不出来)
语料补充： 各种“笑”
•※用“笑”来体现高兴：bedove
•1.____________________ 愉快的微笑big bad wolf
•2._____________________ 满意的微笑
•3. 平等互利______________________甜蜜的微笑
•4. _____________________天真的微笑
•5._____________________ 突然大笑起来
•6._____________________笑得灿烂
•7._____________________快乐地笑
•8._____________________疯狂大笑
•9._____________________ 咧着嘴笑
※用描写高兴的短语来呈现：
1._________________________________喜出望外
2.__________________________________既兴奋又开心
gumdrop3.________________________________对……很高兴
4._______________________情绪高涨
5._______________________对……很高兴
6.________________________心情放松
7._______________________ 使某人心情愉快
※用描写高兴的句型来呈现：
1.______________________________________她流下幸福的泪水。
2.________________________________________当他们紧紧相拥在一起他们留下了激动和欣慰的泪水。
. 3. ______________________________. 她高兴得心怦怦直跳。
4. _______________________________. 他的眼睛因高兴而闪烁。
5.____________________________________.他黑色的眼睛闪动着骄傲、爱和兴奋。
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6.___________________________________. 她对我露齿一笑,眼里闪烁着光芒。
7. ____________________________________.当我给他礼物时他的脸绽放出了光彩。
8._____________________________________.她内心深处洋溢着喜悦和幸福。
