短文改错专项训练（五）
【专项突破】短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处right是什么意思,多者(从第11处起)wonder不计分。
Passage1
My grandparents live in a town twenty kilometers away from where I live. But I can’t e them frequent becau of my studies. Only through the phone can we be connecting. However, the 20-kilometer gap have never formed a heart gap. One day, I e a video on TV. It was a story about old man with Alzheimer’s. He put dumplings into his pocket during a meal but talked to himlf, “My grandson loves them.” Upon eing it, I burst into tears. I remembered all the beautiful memory with my grandparents. That weekend, I visited to my grandparents without telling them in advance. To their surpri, they had prepared that I like.
Passage 2
My classmates and I decide to do something for our coming graduation. After the heated discussion, we agreed on making a video to record their school life experiences.
黑龙江雅思培训 Material collecting took us a whole week—we interviewed our teachers or took pictures of almost every aspect of our school life. Edit the interview videos and pictures were tough. We debated about what to put into the video. Some compromis and arguments
were unavoidable, but the video turned out to be perfectly. Several days later, when the video played at the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The students and teachers had a great time. That surely gave us a great n of achievements.
Passage 3
During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small hou with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big parate hou to rai dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raid fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by ll the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.
Passage 4
Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over the world, men and wom
an, boys and girls enjoy sports. Since many years ago, many adults and children have call their friends together to spend hours, even days play games. One of reasons why people like to play is that sports help them to live happily. In other words, they help to keep people strong and health. When people are playing games, they move a lot of .That is becau sports are good activities for their health. Having fun with their friends make them happy. Many people enjoy sports by watch others play.
Passage 5
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and wor years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourlf. However, my parents didn’t em to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
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短文改错专项训练（五）
答案与解析empty是什么意思
自我介绍的英文Passage 1evenso
1. ... e them frequent ... frequent → frequently
2. ... we be connecting. connecting → connected
3. ... have never formed ... have → has
4. ... e a video ... e → saw
5. ... old man with ... old前加an
6. ... but talked to ... but → and
7. ... beautiful memory with ... memory → memories
8. ... I visited to ... 去掉to
9. To their surpri ... their → my
10. ... that I like. that → what
Passage 2
My classmates and I to do something for our coming graduation. After heated discussion, we agreed on making a video to record school life experiences.
Material collecting took us a whole week—we interviewed our teachers took pictures of almost every aspect of our school life. the interview videos and pictures tough. We debated about what to put into the video. Some compromis and arguments were unavoidable, but the video turned out to be . Several days later, when the video played at the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The students and teachers had a great time. That surely gave us a great n of .
解析：
① 考査动词的时态。全文以一般过去时为主体叙事时态,故应将decide改为decided。
② 考查冠词。此处泛指“在一次激烈的讨论之后”,故应将the改为a。
③ 考查代词。此处指我们的校园生活经历,故将their改为our。
美国小学枪击案④ 考査并列连词。在肯定句中表示“托福口语计时器和;并且”要用and。
⑤ 考查非谓语动词。动名词作主语,故应将Edit改为Editing。
⑥ 考查主谓一致。动名词作主语,谓语动词用单数形式,故将were改为was。
⑦ 考查介词。动词debate后可接“疑问词+不定式”结构作宾语,故介词about多余,应删除。
⑧ 考查形容词。形容词作表语。
⑨ 考查动词的语态。when引导的时间状语从句中,主语the video和play在逻辑上是被动关系,故构成被动语态。
⑩考查名词。a great n of achievement是固定短语.意为sofa“一种巨大的成就感"。其中achievement是不可数名词。
Passage 3
答案： During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small hou with dogs, ducks, and animals. Last winter when I went again, they had a big parate hou to rai dozens of . They also had a small pond (或) they raid fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by the fish. I felt that their life had improved. At the end of our trip. I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, he agreed.
