2013年冲刺班雅思A类写作讲义
第一讲雅思高分写作思路总览
雅思写作高分：7分或7分以上
1. 申请顶级名校的同学
2. 申请对语文能力要求比较高的专业的同学：新闻、法律、MBA
3. 需要提高学术写作能力的同学
第一节的内容：
1．雅思写作的整体介绍
2．高分写作的要求
3．解决问题的方案
4．课程的总览
1．雅思写作的整体介绍 General Introduction
听力、阅读考试之后
60分钟 Task 1 and Task 2
A类和G类的区别：
task 2 议论文
task 1 A：图表作文 G：书信
评分：以Task 2 为主
二：高分写作的要求
评分标准：
Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构) Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据) Communicative Quality(交流质量)
Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)
1. 避免使用过于低级的单词
The problem becomes wor by the poor effects we made. The problem was compounded due to the ineffective measures we had taken.
They claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only an incorrect argument.
The claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only a lame argument.
People face violence and crimes on TV and films every day. People are bombarded by violence and crimes on TV and films every day.
The kind of growth may lead to very bad results.
The kind of growth may lead to dire conquences. conquence:
far-reaching（深远的）, profound（深刻的）, adver（不利的）, catastrophic（灾难的）, damaging（破坏性的）, devastating（破坏性的）, dire（可怕的）, disastrous（灾难的）, fatal（致命的）, tragic（悲惨的）, vere（严重的）,
2. 避免过分重复同一样的单词
Mothers enjoy the same right for career advancement as fathers do.
Mothers are just as entitled to career advancement as fathers.
Mothers are empowered to career advancement as fathers.
3. 尽可能展示多变的句型
定语从句：
China is the largest developing country and is enjoying rapid economic growth. As a result, in the streets of major cities in China, there are thousands of vehicles of all kinds.
As the largest developing country, China is enjoying rapid economic growth, the evidence of which can be en in all major cities who streets are teeming with thousands of vehicles of all kinds.
倒装句：
Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked by advertiment in all forms of media. Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertiment in all forms of media.伴随状语：
It is common now for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week becau they have to sit through one extra class after another.
It is common for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week, sitting through one extra class after another.
设问句：
Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between peoples, learning foreign
languages still make n.
Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between people, would there be no point in learning foreign languages? By no means.
Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)
Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but other people maintain that such evaluation and criticism may cau loss of respect for teachers and discipline. What do you think?
特朗普就职演说有人认为，为了提高教育质量，我们应该鼓励高中生对自己的老师进行评估；别的人却认为这种评估是不尊重教师、违反学校纪律的行为。请给出你的看法？
学生评价老师的理由：
1. 通过评估，老师可以知道学生究竟想些什么、需要什么
If students are not allowed to evaluate or criticize the teachers, it is hard for the teachers to find out what the students think or what they need.
2. 评价和批评本身也是一种有效的交流方式
Evaluation and criticism are themlves effective forms of communication
3. 听取学生的真实意见和想法，教师自己也能够受益匪浅Teachers will benefit a lot when their minds are open to the ideas and honest opinions of the youngsters.
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高分作文两个注意事项：
1．论据尽可能新颖：论据新颖，文字才更有可能新颖
christianity2．新颖应该让位于准确性：确保文字没有错误Communicative Quality(交流质量)
1．高分作文，在于文字和论据精彩，不在于结构另类
2．雅思作文类型固定，写作模式也固定，高分作文亦然
三：解决问题的方案
1 Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)
总结大量经典搭配，交替使用
2Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)
范文讲解附带论据整理
3Communicative Quality(交流质量)
给出固定写作思路，不求变革
四：课程总览
八节课程
第一节：整体介绍007 skyfall
第二至第七节：各类议论文的高分写作思路
1.该类议论文的写作思路点拨
2.范文讲解
3.课后作业及范文
第八节：
A类：图表作文高分写作思路
G类：书信类作文高分写作思路
要求：
1. 善于学习，由点及面
2. 循序渐进
3. 及时完成课后作业
第二节观点类雅思作文高分写作思路
范例：
Nowadays computers are widely ud in education. As a result, some people think teachers no longer play an important role in classrooms. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that machine translation is highly developed in today’s society. Therefore it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. What’s your opinion?
University should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that it is the responsibility of the government to ensure that people in the country have healthy lifestyles. Other people believe that individuals should be free to decide their own lifestyles. Plea give your opinion.
标志性文字：
Do you agree or disagree?
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
toomuchWhat’s your opinion?
Plea give your own opinion.
重点在于：就题目讨论的问题，给出自己的观点
结构构思：
1. 传统的写作思路: 第一段亮出观点，然后分段给出不同的论据，最后
一段收尾，总结全文，同时再次重申自己的观点
适宜的意思2. 高分作文，在于文字（词汇、句型、观点）方面制造亮点，不在于在结构方面铤而走险尝试新的方式
范文讲解1：
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Nowadays people can u computers to talk, learn and communicate without leaving home. There is a danger that it will cau more isolation and a lack of communication among people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
写作思路：
1.观点：电脑不会妨碍人和人之间的交流
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小提示：科技类的文章，尽量选择正观点，讲述科技为人类做出的贡献为佳
2. 论据:
(1). 不能狭隘地理解交流和隔阂，在电脑屏幕前花很多的时间不等于缺乏与世隔绝，
Communication and isolation must not be defined in a narrow n. Alienation of people is not caud by how little they talk or meet each other but by lack of interest in our fellow creatures or the world at large.
隔绝、疏远： isolation alienation
(2). 计算机让大家有了共同的兴趣，促进了人们之间的共鸣
common 共同的
Computers help to prevent isolation by bringing every possible field of interest onto the screen. You can broaden your interests and enrich your life by accessing whatever and whoever you are interested in.
(3). 不同的时代有不同的交流方式，电脑就是当今时代的交流工具之一Our mode of communication is forever changing and computers reprent the latest way of communication.carefree
远古时代： primitive primeval times shouts and gestures 呐喊和手势
后来：文字和语言 spoken and written language
现代： we prefer emails to ordinary mails, chat room, forum, tele-conference (4). 互联网让我们时时刻刻都连接在一起，一切都可以在指尖上实现The Internet keeps us linked to each other all the time. Everything is at the touch of a fingertip.
开篇：引入观点的技巧
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Some people think…. Other people think… I think ….
