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2021-4-2920XX年复习资料

教学复习资料

班级：科目：

2021高考英语读后续写讲练结合（八）

Partone小试身手

读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

abandonedbuildingstherewerehisplayground.

Jamiemovedawoodenboardfromthedoortooneofthebuildings.

entdownthe

vendarkerdownthere,ldings

'dneverfoundanything

aliveuntilhefoundSharon.

“Sharon,I’mhere!”Jamiecalled.“Ibroughtacandle,too.I'm

goingtolightitsoIcaneyoubetter."

ircleoflight

litupthedarkness.

“ComeoverherewhereIcaneyou,”Jamiesaid.“Pleadon’t

beafraid.I’outhat.”

Thecreatureslithered(滑行)boutJamie’s

dandbodywerecoveredwithdarkgreenscales(鱗片).Inthelight

ofthecandle,ature’yesglowed

red,suddenly,trils(鼻孔)flared,givingoffheat.

’swhy

he’edtogiveabeautifulname

tohisnewpet.

“Gee,Sharon,”hesaid,“’tknow

,dreallylikeyoutotellmehowyougot

here.

Thecreaturedidn’th

houghtitwassmiling.

“Well,”saidJamie,"Ihopeyou’htyouachicken

sandwich.”

Thecreaturelookeddownatthesandwich,thinkingaboutsomething

el,butmadenomovetoeatit.

“I'lljustleavethefoodhereforyou,"Jamiesighed.“Iwish

nmycarightnow.I’dhelpher.

I’llcomebacktomorrowafterschool.”

注意:

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;

4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1:

Jamieturnedtogo.

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Paragraph2:

WhenJamiegothome,hismotherlookedangry.

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Parttwo知识及技巧分享

1月亮出现了片刻，她的月轮略带点血红色，半遮着脸：她似乎向我投去一个迷茫、沉闷的

目光，然后立刻又把自己埋在了深深的云朵里。

2然后，月亮在其其优雅的白色光芒的映衬下出现，照亮了无云的天空；最后，它慢慢地移

动，在河面上投下一大片光，像无数星星一样闪闪发光。

3曾经泛着红紫色的天空转变成了乌黑得一大片，黑夜吞没了整个城镇，黑暗的海洋中出现

了明亮的星星。

4.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。

5.被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗吞

噬了一切。

6.夜晚带来了一片无情的黑暗，包裹着他们的眼睛和嘴巴，把他们浸没在一片没有星星的

天空下。空气变浓了，温度下降了，没有一个地方有令人欣慰的声音。

亮点词汇

unrelenting持续的;不缓和的;势头不减的;不留情的

wrapped包，裹;用…包裹;用…缠绕;wrap的过去分词和过去式

burying埋葬;安葬;丧失;把掩藏在地下;埋藏;bury的现在分词

thickened变厚，变浓，变稠;thicken的过去分词和过去式

nowhere无处;哪里都不

参考答案：

1Themoonappearedmomentarily,herdiskwasblood-redandhalf-overcast：sheemed

tothrowmeabewildered,drearyglance,andburiedherlfagaininstantlyinthe

deepdriftofcloud.

2Thenthemoonappearedinallitlegantwhiteness,lighteningupthecloudless

sky;finally,movingmoreslowly,itcastonthesurfaceoftheriveralargeparch

oflightwhichglitteredlikeaninfinityofstars.

3Theoncereddishandpurpleskytransformedintoavastexpanofjet-blackthat

yofluminousstarsmaterializedamongsttheoceanof

blackness.

geringsunlightwasobliteratedbytherapidlyfallingnight，rembling

apitch-blackcurtaindrapedoverthesky.

nundersiegebystarsemedtolightenthenightbringingforthstars

erendingblacknessconsumedeverything

htbroughtanunrelentingdarknessthatwrappedtheireyesandmouths,

hadthickened;thetemperaturedropped

andnowherewasthereacomfortingsound.

技法讲解：融情于景——如何在环境中融入人物的内心状态

不难发现，1所表达的气氛沉闷萧瑟，可以推测出主人公内心的烦躁、不安或是迷

茫；2所表达的气氛静谧安详，可以推测出主人公内心的喜悦、宁静或是欣慰，同样是写夜

晚的月亮，却传达出不同的情感，这就是环境描写之融情于景的威力，那么，这是如何做

到的呢？

我们并未直接写1中主人公内心的沉闷、烦躁、无所适从，而是说（Themoon）throwmea

bewildered,drearyglance（月亮向我投来一个迷茫、沉闷的目光），表面上写月亮迷茫、

疲惫，实际上是在说主人公内心沉闷迷茫或是困乏疲惫，andburiedherlfagain

instantlyinthedeepdriftofcloud.（然后立刻又把自己埋在了深深的云朵里）其实

也反映了主人公内心世界的孤闭。

相反，注意2中用词：elegantwhiteness（优雅的白色），cloudlesssky（无

云的天空），thesurfaceoftheriver（湖面），aninfinityofstars（无数星点），glittered

（闪闪发光），这些词都十分宁谧、祥和、优美，可见主人公也是十分享受这月夜的景色，

其内心必定是欢乐、安宁的。

参考范文

Paragraph1:

creatureraiditsheadandwatchedhimcarefully,anditsmouthopenedslightly

Jamiedisappearedinthedistance,thecreatureslitheredbackintoitscorner.

Paragraph2:

WhenJamiegothome,bbedhim,andasked,“Oh,

myGod!Annoyingguy,andvou’avevoubeen?Youmademeso

worried!Why,justlastweekalittleboydisappearedonhiswayhomefromschool.

"However,hereallydidn'tlisten,insteadheemedtobethinkingaboutsomething

el.“Mommy,whynotbuyapetforme?I'mlonely,soIranout.”Hearingthis,

Jamie'smothersmiledbyherlf."Okay,okay,I’llthinkaboutitriously,but

eedaplaymate.”Jamie

huggedhismotherhappily."Oh,.I'lltellSharonthegoodnews

immediately!"Jamierushedout.