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V作文篇

[题型概述]

四级考试中作文占试卷总分的15%,旨在考察学生运用英语进行书面表达的能力.要求考生在30

分钟内写出一篇不少于120词的短文,做到"内容切题,表达清楚,意义连贯,文理通顺,语言正确".作

文内容涉与日常生活、科技、社会、文化等方面的一般知识,通常由汉语提纲、图表、关键词等形式

加以限定.

四级作文评分标准：

四级作文采用总体评分方法,从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判,既考

虑作文是否切题和充分表达思想,也考虑语言错误是否造成理解障碍.阅卷人员就总的印象给出分数,

而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分.

13-15分：切题.表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好.基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错.〔几乎全对〕

10-12分：切题.表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误.〔对中有错〕

7-9分：基本切题.有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重

错误.〔对错相当〕

4-6分：基本切题.表达思想不清楚,连贯性差,有较多严重的语言错误.〔错中有对〕

1-3分：条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误.〔几乎全错〕

0分：白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想.

注：字数不足应酌情扣分.

[解题思路]

作文是整个考试过程中要求考生首先完成的题目,因此考生须注意把握好答题节奏.考虑到时间

紧张,不推荐考生打草稿再誊写的答题方式,建议考生采用以下答题步骤：

1>在1分钟内完成审题,确定文章思路.

2>在头脑里大致拟出文章提纲.

3>下笔成文.

此外,考生须注意以下事项：

审题细致：内容紧扣主题,涵盖提纲要点.

表达清楚：结构一目了然,句子完整,句子间逻辑明朗、层次清晰.

语法正确：用词得体、恰当,句法结构正确,避免重大语言错误.

定位合理：7—9分只需切题和大致正确；10—12分需少犯语法错误,且具备一定的句式变化；

13—15分需要内容丰富,语言准确,有亮点.

卷面整洁：字迹清楚,尽量避免错误连笔、草书或涂改.一定使用黑色字迹的钢笔或中性笔书写.

[考点剖析]

很多时候,真题最能显示命题规律和趋势.回顾历年四级作文真题,其话题侧重考生熟悉的校园热点

和社会热点,题型大至可分为以下5类：

A、观点对比型

此类作文题目要求学生针对某一事物或现象从正反两面分析其利弊,或通过比较两种不同观点来

阐明自己的观点,表明自己对该事物或现象的看法.如：

SpringFestivalGalaonCCTV<2006年12月CET-4>

1.许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会

2.但有些人提出取消春节晚会

3.我的看法

ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourism?<2005年12月CET-4>

1.名校校园正成为旅游新热点

2.校园是否应对游客开放,人们看法不同

3.我认为……

IsaTestofSpokenEnglishNecessary?<2000年6月CET-4>

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1.很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试,理由是……

2.也有人持不同意见……

3.我的看法和打算

ReadingSelectivelyorExtensively<1999年6月CET-4>

1．有人认为读书要有选择

2.有人认为应当博览群书

3.我的看法

B.问题阐释型

该类型作文的基本模式是,提出一种现象,要求对其加以分析、或阐释该现象带来的问题,并提出解

决方法.重心通常在对现象的分析这一环节,要求对问题的成因或后果做比较详细的阐释.如：

CreatingaGreenCampus<2009年12月CET-4>

1.建设绿色校园十分重要

2.绿色校园不仅指绿色环境

3.为了建设绿色校园我们应该……

FreeAdmissiontoMuums<2009年6月CET-4>

1.越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么

2.也会带来一些问题

3.你的看法

LimitingtheUofDisposalBags<2008年12月CET-4>

1.一次性塑料袋曾被广泛地使用

2.造成的问题

3.限制使用的意义

WhatElectivestoChoo<2007年12月CET-4>

1.各大学开设了各种各样的选修课

2.学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课

3.以你自己为例……

C．图表描写型<4,9>

四级写作要求单纯描写的可能性不大,但完全可能结合说明、议论等多种体裁进行考查.图表描写

型作文题目要求学生看懂图表含义,描写图表呈现的内容,分析图表所表现出的问题或规律；最后得出

结论或对其趋势做出预测.如：

StudentUofComputers<2002年6月CET-4>

1.上图所示为某校大学生平均每周使用计算机的时间：1990年〔2hours〕、1995年〔4hours〕、2002

年〔14hours〕,请描述其变化；

2.请说明发生这些变化的原因〔可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明〕；

3.你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题.

D．图片描述型

这一类型的作文首先要求考生首先要简短描述图片内容,找出图片中的重点.

其实,要求考生能就突出的这一重点发表自己的见解.如modeltest2的作文题：

根据要求,可以列出如下Outline：

第一段：简短描述图片内容,引出主题：学习基本技能重要

第二段：多角度出发,论述为什么要学习基本技能.

第三段：再次呼应主题,强调其重要性.

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E.分析型〔modeltest6〕

这一类考题,要求考生能理解某一观点与其引申出的主题,做出进一步的阐述.其特点通常为onsth.如6

中Onmaintaininigtrust翻译成中文为：论建立信任.

审题的步骤应该是：为什么要建立信任？因为要维持一段良好的人际关系.也就是建立信任的重要性.

如何才能建立信任？这就是本文的主体部分how要求考生能从多角度出发,论述自己的对于如何建立

信任的看法.最后,总结全文,再次突出其重要性.

[谋篇布局]

写作文,谋篇布局非常重要：怎样提出问题,怎样说明前因后果,怎样承上启下,又怎样下结论,提建议,

表达自己的看法.每一种类型的作文都有相对固定的论证方式与句型.这就像画一棵大树.整体的框架

句型好比一棵树的大树干和大树枝；段落中用于扩展句子的连接用语,好比大树枝上的小枝条〔如举

例说明、逐项阐释、描述图表等〕；而文章的具体内容就是叶子、花或果实.如果能把握四级作文的基

本命脉,熟记几套不同的框架句型,应试时就能花更多心思在内容上,使其丰富、充实,并尽量避免语言错

误.尽管添加的叶子可能有枯萎的,花也不很漂亮,但掌握了文章谋篇布局的规律,有了框架句子作底,好

比一棵大树的枝干已竖于眼前,写作时就能从被动到主动,把"望而生畏"的作文变成轻松愉快的"填空

练习".基于上述对作文题型的划分,以下分别对每种题型的常用句式予以归纳,并给出了模版示例,供参

考：

观点对比型作文常用句式

开篇句型：

1>Recentlytheproblemof________nsvaryfrompersontoperson.

2>Thereismuchdisagreement/aragingdebate/anargumentamongpeopleconcerning/over/asto/on

_________.

3>Nowadays,thereisagrowingconcernover________,whilepeoplearedividedonthequestionasto

whether…

4>Whenaskedabout_________,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentanswers.

5>Theissueofwhether__________hasbeenwidelyargued/debatedcurrently.

6>Inrecentlyyears,theissueof_________hasbeenbroughttopublicattention,butattitudestowardsit

differfrompersontoperson.

陈述正方观点的句型：

1>Obviously,tothegeneralpublic/tothemajorityofpeople,__________.

2>Somepeopleargue/suggest/appreciate/maintainthat________.

3>Somepeopleareinclinedto/tendtothinkthat________.

4>Thowhoadvocate/areinfavorof_________believethat_________.

5>Therecanbenodoubtthat_________hasitsadvantages/positiveeffects.

6>Itgoeswithoutsayingthatthisbenefitsusinmanyways/y,______;condly,______;

lastly,________.

陈述反方观点的句型：

1>However,hocriticize/objectto/oppo_______deemthat

________.

2>However/But/Yet/Nevertheless/

insist/argue/prefer/claim/believethat________.

3>Onthecontrary/Incontrast,therearestillmanypeoplewhodonotagree,andtheythink________isa

betterchoice.

4>Butwhileweadmittheadvantagesof______thing,

________;foranother,________.

5>Meanwhile,superioras________is,thereexistsomeside-effectswhichweshouldpaycloattentionto

/beawareof.

6>However,thenegativeaspectsof________arealsoapparent/obvious/nwith,________.

Tomakematterswor,________.Worstofall,_________.

结论句型：

1>Inmyopinion/Asforme/Frommypointofview/AsfarasIamconcerned,bothsidesarepartlyright

/thereissometruthinbothsides.

2>Tome,theformeropinionismoreattractiveinthat____________.

3>Formypart,Ithinktheadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages.

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4>Takingintoaccountallthefactors,Iaminfavorof/onthesideof___________.

5>Fromwhathasbeendiscusdabove,wemayreasonablycometo/drawtheconclusionthat

___________.

6>Inspiteofalltheproblems,Istillhold_______hasmoreadvantagesthandisadvantages.

模版示例：

Formanyyears,there’sgrowingconcernover_____________,.Peopleholddifferentideasfrom

ongtho_____________thereisnocompleteagreementastowhether

______________________.

Forsome,itis________.Othersemtobelievethatitis________,andstresstheinfluence

of____________upon____________.Theymaintainthat______________________________.

Asfarasmyopinionisconcerned,onlyafterwehavetakenintoconsiderationallaspectsofthe

ewhoargueagainst____________arecorrect,theproblems

asolution,________mustpaycloattentiontotheproblems.

问题阐释型作文常用句式

开篇句型：

1>Currently,theproblemof____________hasaroud/captured/drawn/caughtworldwideattention.

2>Itisundeniable/Thereisnodenyingthefactthat__________hasbecometheutmostconcernamong

peoplenowadays.

3>Inthepastdecade/fewyearstherehasbeenagrowingtendencythat_________.

4>Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofpeoplecometorealizetheimportanceof_____________.

5>Inrecentyears,manycities/nations/peoplehavebeenfaced/troubledwiththeriousproblem

of___________.

6>____________isverycommonlyeninourlife,andmoreandmoreattentionhasbeenfocuduponthe

problemof____________.

阐释原因或后果的句型：

1>Itisnoeasyjobtofindoutthereasonsfortheproblem,

onehand,_______________.Ontheotherhand,_______________.Finally,______________________.

2>Anumberoffactorscouldaccountforthechange/decrea/increa/success

/failure/developmentin__________.First,__________.Moreover,_________.Lastbutnotleast,

______________________.

3>thing,_____________.Foranother,

________________.

4>Themostprimaryreasonisthat_______________,and_________isalsopartlyresponsibleforthe

problem.

5>Clearly,ifweareblindto/turnadeafeartotheproblem,theconquencesof____________wouldbe

rious.

6>Theimmediateresultitproducesis___________,andanypersonwhoignoresitwouldpayaheavy

price.

结论句型：

1>esomemeasuresthatmightbe

takenimmediately.

2>Byandlarge,thereisnoeasyapproachtothisissue,but__________mightbehelpful/beneficial/ofsome

help.

3>Asthisproblemisverycomplicated,y

whenwe_________canwe____________.

4>Itishopedthatgreateffortsshouldbemadetocontrol/promotethegrowthof____________.For

example,bydoing__________,wecannotonly____________,butalso_____________.

5>Thereisnodenyingthatconsiderableattentionmustbepaidtotheshortage/decrea/change/declineof

__________.

6>Allinall,wedonothaveaperfectsolutionatprent,butaslongaswedoitwithourbrainsandhands,

wewillresolvetheproblemeventually.

模版示例：

____________ghithasbroughtconvenienceto

us,manypeoplehavebeguntorealizethatitisthesourceoftroubleaswell.

tributeitto__________________.Othersplacetheblameon

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___________________.Stillotherscomplainof___________________.Inmyopinion,perhapsthe

principalreasonisthat____________________________.

However,itemstomethatnoquicksolutioncanbeathandtotackletheproblem,butthegeneral

awarenessofthesignificanceofitmightbethefirststepintherightdirectiontowardschangingthe

situation.

图表描述型

常用句式

开篇句型：

1>Ascanbeenfrom/isshowninthechart/picture/diagram/graph/table,_____________.

2>Thepurpoofthischart/picture/diagram/graph/tableistoshowthat______________.

3>Fromthechart,wecaneinthesurvey/poll,________________.

4>Thebarchartshows/indicates/displays/reflects/revealsthat_____________.

5>Itisclear/apparentfromthepiechartthat________________.

6>Accordingtothefigures/statistics/datagiveninthechart,____________________.

描写数据的句型：

1>Onthetopof/Atthebottomofthelistis___________,whichaccountsfor/takesup50%.

2>________isrankedfirst,followedby_________at20%and_________at15%.

3>Thefigurereachedthehighest/lowestpointin___________.

4>During2000-2010,therewasasudden/rapid/dramatic/substantial/sharp/considerableriinthenumber

of__________from________to__________.

5>Thetenyearsfrom2000-2010witnesd/sawasteadygrowthof___________from_________to

_________.

6>Thenumber/rateof_______wasabout/approximately/almostdoubled/tripled,asagainst/comparedwith

thatin2000.

7>Thenumberof__________incread/ro/fell/dropped/declined/decreadby15%.

8>Thenumberof___________in2010was3timesmorethanthatin2000.

结论句型：

1>Fromtheanalysisabove,wecanconcludethat____________.

2>Fromthedatawegatheredfromtheabovechart,wecanreachtheconclusionthat__________.

3>Accordingtotheinformationgatheredabove,wemaycometotheconclusionthat___________.

4>Wecandrawaconclusionfromtheabovethat_____________.

5>Judgingfromallevidenceoffered,wemayreasonably/safelyarriveattheconclusionthat____________.

6>Theanalysiswehavemadeconfirms/supportstheviewthat___________.

模版示例：

Accordingtothechart,aninvestigationconductedby__________indicatesthat____________has

reached_________inthepast10yearscomparedwith____________allyinrecent3years,

thenumberrodramaticallyfrom_______to_______.

Inmyopinion,nwith,

__________________.Secondly,__________________.Lastly_____________.

Alltheresultin_______________.

Fromtheabovediscussion,

trendinthechartwillcontinueforquitealongtimeandwecanimaginethat_________________.

[错误示例]

四级应试作文可以没有什么华丽的词藻,但一定不能有严重的语言错误.作文评分标准注重语言的

准确性,某些看似可原谅的错误累积起来也会直接影响最终得分.因此,考生在力所能与的范围内应尽

可能地避免语言错误,拿到本该属于自己的分数.下面所选的语料均源于考生们在作文中中常犯的基

本语言错误,望大家引以为戒.

时态错

[误]IstudiedEnglishformorethan10years.

[正]I’vebeenstudyingEnglishformorethan10years.

[误]Whentheaccidenthappened,therewasalmostnoothercarsontheroad,sothedrivermustbedrunk.

[正]Whentheaccidenthappened,therewasalmostnocarontheroadatthetime,sothedrivermusthave

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beendrunk.

错误解析：随意使用时态,如将过去时与表示一段时间的词连用,或用现在时描述过去发生的事情,使

得句意不合逻辑,令人费解.

语态错

[误]Shewasveryangryatnottellingthetruthwhenshelistenedtohisaccount.

[正]Shewasveryangryatnotbeingtoldthetruthwhenshelistenedtohisaccount.

[误]Thebookhastoreturnattheendoftheweek.

[正]Thebookhastobereturnedattheendoftheweek.

错误解析：混淆被动语态和主动语态的使用.

词性错

[误]Freshairisbenefittoourhealth.

[正]Freshairisbeneficialtoourhealth.

[误]Theoldmanwasknockeddownbyacarwhenheacrossthestreet.

[正]Theoldmanwasknockeddownbyacarwhenhewascrossingthestreet.

错误解析：混淆词性.

代词错

[误]SolongasyouhavetheInternetaccess,anyonecanreceiveeducationwhereverhelivesin.

[正]SolongasyouhavetheInternetaccess,youcanreceiveeducationwhereveryoulivein.

[误]Ifthehumanswanttoleaveagoodimpressiononothers,we’dbetterfollowtherules.

[正]Ifthehumanswanttoleaveagoodimpressiononothers,they’dbetterfollowtherules.

错误解析：代词指代不明或随意转换.

介词错

[误]Despiteofadvancedyears,heislearningtodrive.

[正]Despiteadvancedyears,heislearningtodrive.

[误]Intheotherhand,scienceandtechnologycanalsobringaboutsomedisasters.

[改]Ontheotherhand,scienceandtechnologycanalsobringaboutsomedisasters.

错误解析：介词或介词短语的搭配错误.

比较级错

[误]Withtheadvancementofscienceandtechnology,Ibelievethatwewillbecomemoreandmore

happier.

[改]Withtheadvancementofscienceandtechnology,Ibelievethatwewillbecomehappierandhappier.

[误]ChinaislargerthatanycountryinAsia.

[改]ChinaislargerthananyothercountriesinAsia.

错误解析：重复使用比较级,或将主语含在比较对象中.

从句错

[误]Ifanyonewantstogobacktoancienttimes,whichhadnoelectricity,clothandroom,almosteveryone

wouldsayheiscrazy.

[正]Ifanyonewantstogobacktoancienttimes,inwhichtherewasnoelectricity,clothorroom,almost

everyonewouldsayheiscrazy.

[误]It’sthemajorthingaffectspeople’sfriendship.

[正]It’sthemajorthingthataffectspeople’sfriendship.

错误解析：关系代〔副〕词漏用或误用.

赘述句

[误]Forthepeoplewhoarediligent,moneyisjustthethingtobeudtobuythethingtheyneed.

[正]Diligentpeopleumoneyonlytobuywhattheyneed.

[误]Wehadariouscrisisatschoolyesterdaywhenourchemistrylaboratorycaughtfire.

[误]Wehadacrisisatschoolyesterdaywhenourchemistrylaboratorycaughtfire.

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错误解析：表达不简洁,语意冗长累赘.

悬垂句

[误]Todowellincollege,goodmarksareesntial.

[正]Todowellincollege,astudentneedsgoodmarks.

[误]Togetreadyforthetrip,allthethingssheneededwereputintoasuitca.

[正]Togetreadyforthetrip,sheputallthethingssheneededintoasuitca.

错误解析：句首短语和后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清.

连动句

[误]Therearesomepeoplethinkoneshouldneverhesitatetosayno.

[正]Therearesomepeoplewhothinkthatoneshouldneverhesitatetosayno.

[误]Themostimportreasonistheylosttheirstuffchotokeepsilent.

[正]Themostimportreasonisthatthowholosttheirstuffchotokeepsilent.

错误解析：简单句中连续使用两个或以上的谓语动词,如therebe句型后直接跟动词原形.

破碎句

[误]efrequentjob-hoppingwillgonowhere.

[正]Theyobjecttochangingjobfrequently,becaufrequentjob-hoppingwillgonowhere.

[误]Butcloneisalsoatwo-edgesword,ifusimproperlywillbedestructivetohumanbeing.

[正]Butcloneisalsoadouble-edgedsword,whichmightbedestructivetohumanbeingifudimproperly.

错误解析：句子缺乏主语或谓语,如用becau引导独立句子等.

流水句

[误]Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,thecostofacarisloweringdowninrecentyears,manyfamilies

couldaffordaprivatecar.

[正]Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,thecostofacarisloweringdowninrecentyearssothatmany

familiescouldaffordaprivatecar.

[误]Therearemanybookspoisonoustoourmind,weshouldnotreadthem.

[正]ldnotreadthem.

错误解析：两个或以上的独立句子用逗号相连.

汉式句

[误]Themainreasonsforthiscarcrashhavetwopoints.

[正]Therearetwomainreasonsforthiscarcrash.

[误]Itmademecannotforgetmygrandmother.

[正]Itmademeunabletoforgetmygrandmother.

[误]Atcollege,weshouldlearnasmuchknowledgeaspossiblesothatwecanbewellpreparedforour

futurecareer.

[正]Atcollege,weshouldacquireasmuchknowledgeaspossiblesothatwecanbewellpreparedforour

futurecareer.

[误]Leftaloneinthejungleatnight,shefeltverydangerous.

[正]Leftaloneinthejungleatnight,shefelttthatshewasingreatdanger.

错误解析：受汉语表达习惯影响而出现的不规范英语或不符合英语文化习惯的英语.

过关练习

A.观点对比型

ions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicShould

UniversitiesLowerAdmissionRequirementsforCelebrities?Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andba

yourcompositionontheoutlinebelow:

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1>近年来很多大学降低标准招收名人学生

2>人们对此现象看法不一

3>你的观点

[参考范文]

ShouldUniversitiesLowerAdmissionRequirementsforCelebrities?

Nowadays,therearemor

celebrities,especiallysportsstars,havebeenadmittedtorenowneduniversitievenwithoutanentrance

enomenonhasaroudwidespreadcontroversy.

ythatthecelebritiesdervethisprivilegebecautheyhave

provr,stillotherpeople

sistthatit’,ifapersonwhohasnotenoughacademicabilityis

admittedtotheuniversity,itwouldbeaninsultoncollegeeducation.

Ofthetwoviewsdiscusdabove,I’onehand,thecelebrities

havesacrificedmuchtimefortheirwork,soitwouldbebetterifweprovideabetterlearningchancefor

therhand,withadvancededucation,ore,Isuggest

thatpeoplepourmoreattentiontothecelebrities’effortsandcontributionsinsteadofthespecialtreatment

theyenjoy.

ions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicOnline

uldwriteatleast120words,andbayourcompositionontheoutline

Chine>below:

1>网上求职日益普与

2>分析网上求职的利与弊

3>我的观点

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OnlineJob-hunting

Currently,inaneraofinformationandtechnology,jobekershaveeasyaccesstoawiderangeofjob

uldwewelcomeitwithapplauandenthusiasm,orshouldwekeepaclear

headastotheissue?

Admittedly,job-huntinghasitsadvantagesinthatit’couldjust

stayhome,heless,the

tance,somecompaniesmayofferfalinformationaboutthe

ile,somejobhuntersmayalso

exaggeratetheircapabilitiesorevenlieabouttheircharacters.

Personally,Imaintainthatface-to-faceinterviewisamustforbothsidesdespitetheadvantagesof

stwehandletheissuecautiouslyandtrytofindabetterwaytolandjob.

ions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicShould

On-campusCollegeStudentsGetMarried?Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbayourcomposition

ontheoutlinebelow:

1>存在在校大学生结婚的现象

2>有些人持反对意见,而有些人表示支持

3>我的看法是……

ShouldOn-campusCollegeStudentsGetMarried?

ItisreportedthatChineon-campuscollegestudentsarelegallyallowedtogetmarriedbeforethey

opleapplaudthisnewthingwhileothershaveexpresdtheirconcernsover

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it.

Thowhowelcomethisnewtrendholdthatcollegestudentsdohaveadesireforanidealmarriage.

Nowthattheyhavecomeofage,,however,frownonitbecau

theybelievethatmarriedcollegestudentsareboundtohavelesstimeandenergyfortheiracademicstudy

andwillcertainlyhavemoretrivialthingstodealwith.

Weighingthetwoarguments,onisthaton-campusstudentsareladenwith

tepsintomarriagerightnow,she/hehastoworkmuchharderthanotherunmarried

riedcouple,forinstance,theyhavetorenta

roominsideoroutsidethecollege,whichisdefinitelymoney-consuming.

ions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicShould

CollegeEnglishTestBeInternet-bad?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbayour

compositionontheoutlinebelow:

1〕有人认为大学英语考试有必要采取网考的形式

2〕也有人提出异议

3〕我的看法

ShouldCollegeEnglishTestBeInternet-bad?

nsideritadvisabletoadoptthis

ropinionnotonlyinternet-badtestwillbemoreconvenientandefficient,but

alsoithelpsstudentnhancetheircomputerskills,whichareofsignificanceinmodernsociety.

Onecommonargument,however,sonisthatthisnewtestingsystem

thing,howcanthokidsfrompoorfamiliesbeasskillfulasthorich

studentsinusingcomputers?Foranother,CollegeEnglishTest,asitsnamesuggests,shouldtestthe

examinees’Englishproficiencyinsteadofcomputerskills.

Formypart,Ideemthatthenewtestwillbeconductivetostudents’s

gainingagoodcommandofEnglish,masteringsomebasicknowledgeaboutcomputerwon’

lude,Iapplaudthisnewtesting

system.

B.问题阐释型

ions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicPopularityof

uldwriteatleast150words,andbayourcompositionontheoutline

below:

1>当今社会,很多人热衷买彩票

2>这一现象产生的原因

3>我的看法

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PopularityofLotteries

Nowthereemstobeafeverofbuyinglotteries:welfarelottery,sportslottery,computerlottery,soon

,menorwomen,youngorold,aresomanypeople

keenonbuyingthem?

Threereasons,inmymind,ndforemost,mostpeopleare

vealong-cherisheddreamofmakingabigfortuneovernight,thus

econdplace,therearesomepeoplewholongtomake

y,somepeoplejustfollowothersforfun.

Frommypointofview,nevershouldexpecttomake

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’smore,lotteriestosomedegreearesimilartogambling,so

shell,peopleshouldremainasober

mindwhenbuying.

ions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicSelf-help

uldwriteatleast120words,andbayourcompositiononthe

outlinebelow:

1>大学生常选择"自助游"的方式去旅行

2>分析其原因

3>你的看法

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Self-helpTravelingofCollegeStudents

Nowadayslf-helptravelingisgainingmoreandmorepopularity

kindoftravel,travelersthemlvescanarrangetheroute,the

timeaswellasalltheotherissuesoftraveling,withoutanytouristguide.

Butwhydosomanycollegestudentspreferlf-helptravelingtofollowingatourgroup?Tobeginwith,

d,

tion,lf-helptravelingprovidesstudentsagood

tnotleast,theexpensinlf-helptravelingare

controlledbytravelersthemlvessothatthowhohavenotmuchmoneywillalsohaveanopportunityto

etheoutsideworld.

Asacollegestudent,nehand,Ihaveappreciatedsome

therhand,I’velearnthowtobeindependentand

communicatewithpeople.

ions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:Howto

MaintainPsychologicalHealth?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowin

Chine:

1>心理问题往往导致疾病

2>产生心理问题的原因

3>如何保持心理健康

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HowtoMaintainPsychologicalHealth

It’squiteworryingthatnowadaysagrowingnumberofpeopleexperiencekindofmentalhealth

ttacklingtheproblems,theytendtosufferfromvariouspsychologicalillness,oreven

ynotbeabletoliveanormallife,letaloneafulfillingone.

Theentsociety,

quiteafewpeopleareunderconsiderablepressure,whilemanyotherslackcommunicativeskillsandlivein

,mostpeopleareignorantofpsychologicalknowledgeabouthowtokeepmentally

fit.

Aspsychologicalhealthisofgreatimportancetoanybody,it’sadvisableforustofindsomewaysto

,,if

mentalhealthproblemsari,,

ll,ourhealthiswhatcounts

most.

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C.图表描述型

ions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionofnolessthan120wordson

hefollowingtablecarefully

hreeparagraphsto:

1>describethedifferencesoftheincomesourcesbetweenChineandEuropeanstudents;

2>analyzepossiblereasonsforthedifferences;

3>predicatefuturetendency.

SourceofIncomeParentsPart-timejobScholarship

EuropeanStudents45%40%15%

ChineStudents90%5%5%

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IncomeSourcesofChineStudentsandEuropeanStudents

Incoa,studentsget

90%oftheirincomefromtheirparentswhereasinEurope,only45%onally,

Chinestudentarnonly5%oftheirmoneyfrompart-timejobsand5%fromscholarshipwhileincome

fromthetworesourcesforEuropeanstudentstakesup40%and15%respectivelyoftheirtotalincome.

Tworeasons,inmymind,,duetotheinfluenceofdifferent

socialandfamilyvalues,ChinestudentsareudtoaskingformoneyfromtheirparentswhileEuropean

romthat,mostChineparentsdevotetoomuch

caretotheirkidsandtryeverypossiblemeanstoaffordtheirchildren’pe,however,

manyparentncouragetheirchildrentofindpart-timejobtosupportthemlves.

I’mconvincedthatwiththedevelopmentofChina,Chinestudents,inincreasingnumbers,will

ywillgooutoftheivorytowertobroadentheir

horizonandenliventheirlives.

ions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicChangesin

People’sDailyExpensYoushouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbayourcompositiononthe

outlinebelow:

1>Changesinpeople’sdailyexpensinthepast9years

2>Possiblereasonsforthechanges

3>Myownconclusion

Item20072009

Food54%50%42%38%29%

Clothing11%13%16%18%21%

Recreation5%6%7%9%12%

Others30%31%33%35%38%

Total100%100%100%100%100%

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ChangesinPeople’sDailyExpens

Thepastnineyearswitnesdsignificantchangesinpeople’owninthetable,

theamountofmoneyspentonfooddecreadsharply,takinguponly29%r,therewasa

gradualincreainclothingexpens,whichclimbto21%,thetableindicatesanupward

tendencyinrecreationexpensandotherexpensaswell.

Inmyeyes,,withthedevelopmentofagriculturein

China,theoutputofgrain,fruit,vegetablesandmilkhasincread,whichresultsinthedeclineintheir

,thefamilyincomeshavegreatlyrinsothatpeoplenowcanaffordexpensiveclothingand

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,asthestandardoflivingimproves,thedemandforavarietyofrecreationsis

growingsteadily,too.

Inconclusion,withtheincomescontinuingtori,peoplearenolongersatisfiedwithasimple,

eeagertocolortheirlifewithgorgeousclothesandinterestingentertainments.

模拟题的作文

ions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicMaking

FriendsSelectivelyorExtensively?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbayour

compositionontheoutlinebelow:

1〕人们对交友各持己见.

2〕有人赞成泛泛而交,有人认为交友要有选择.3〕我的看法.

MakingFriendsSelectivelyorExtensively

Whenitcomestomakingfriends,differentvoicesareheardconcerningtheproblemofwhetherthey

shouldmakefriendslectivelyorextensively.

Thowhodecidetomakefriendslectivelyarguethatnotallpeoplearetrustworthyandsuitableto

y

inmodernsociety,weshouldnotonlymakefriendsinourowncommunitybutalsofromallwalksoflife,

whomaybehelpfulinvariouswaysindeed.

Nomatterwhichchoiceapersonwillmake,

beginwith,we’,oncethe

lectionismade,wemaymakeasmanygoodfriendsaswecan,thusbenefitingmostfromfriends-making.

ions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicOna

uldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowin

Chine:

1>宿舍生活有时会出现不和谐

2>和谐宿舍生活的重要性

3>我们该怎样创建和谐的宿舍生活

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OnaHarmoniousDormitoryLife

etimestheharmonyinthedormitoryisdisturbedinone

mple,somestudentssurftheinternetlateintothenightandmaketholightsleepers

till,thesocksofsomestudentsaresmellyenoughtodriveotherroommatesaway.

Asiswellknown,thing,wecanhaveagood

ther,wewillhaveagoodmoodandenjoybeingtogether.

Onthecontrary,amessydormitorylifewillbequitedepressing.

Therefore,itishightimethatwetookeffectivemeasurestocreateandmaintainaharmonious

fall,wemayexamineourlifestyleandtrytodropourunhealthyhabits,ifthereare

er,whenanannoyingsituationaris,weshouldlearntotolerateeachotherandforgiveothers.

Besides,we’dbettermakefriendsandsharehappymomentswitheachother.

ions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowtoTackleFake

Diplomas?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1>目前文凭造假现象屡见不鲜

2>这种现象造成的危害

3>我们应该怎么做

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HowtoTackleFakeDiplomas

Therecentyearshavewitnesdunfavorablesocialphenomenon----fakediplomasarefloodingintothe

till,thereareavarietyoffakecertificates.

Clearly,irstplace,employersmay

hireemployeeswhoarenotqualifiedforacertainposition,s,

it’sunfairthatonefailstogetcertainjobjustbecauhiscompetitorhasafakediploma.

ll,companiesshouldcheck

detailedinformationofthediplomaholdersthroughtheinternetsothatthefakediplomascannotplaytricks.

Secondly,theonewhomakesthefakediplomasshouldbeverelypunishedandexpodthroughmedia.

Thirdly,enalltherelevantdepartments

makejointeffortscanthisproblembesolved.