上海环球雅思老师于君星今天为大家带来的是雅思小作文中静态图表必备考点解析。雅思A
类小作文的图标题其实是非常有用的,对考生之后出国留学过程中,大家写论文的时候是经
常会碰到的。所以说能写得一手好图标解析的小作文是有很大的作用的。
一、何为静态图
静态图表可以为所呈现的信息,只有不同数据之间的对比,无时间变化的图表。主要常见
的静态图可以分为:柱状图,饼状图,表格以及对比式的地图题。
二、静态图表的例题解析
(一)图表
Youmayspendabout20minutesonthistask.
Thechartbelowshowsthedifferentlevelsofpost-schoolqualificationinAustraliaandthe
proportionofmenandwomenwhoheldthemin1999.
Summaritheinformationbylectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonsif
necessary.
Youshouldwriteabout150words.
(二)范文分析
1、Part1:Introduction
Thebarchartherereflects5differentlevelsofpost-schoolqualificationsaswellastheproportion
ofqualification-holdersaccordingtogenderinAustraliain1999.
(1)表示开头段介绍句的句型
Thebarchartherereflects5differentlevelsofpost-schoolqualificationsaswellastheproportion
ofqualification-holdersaccordingtogenderinAustraliain1999.
(2)该句可以做成句型:
The图表名称+(given/here/provided)+describe/demonstrate/depict/details/display/illustrate/
indicate/reprent/reflect............
(3)该句可以改写成:
Giveninthe图表名称istheinformation/arefiguresregarding/concerning/about/on............
Aglanceatthe+图表名称+provided/here/given+reveals/indicates.........
2、Part2:MainBody
MainBody1:
Apparently,thereisastriking/remarkablecontrast/gapintheproportionofbothgenderswho
ecily,meninthislevelreached/accountedfor90%,
+
,whichisninetimesasmuchastheirfemalecounterparts.
,andwomen’spercentagewasonly10%.
,ninetimesasmuchasfemales.
+Whatshouldbeemphasizedisthatbothdatarankedthemostandtheleastamongfivelevel.
(1)主体段落开头必备
副词
clearly,.../obviously,.../apparently,.../evidently,...
短语:
Accordingtothetable/data,.......
Inaccordancewiththetable/data,.....
That从句:
Itcanbeenfromthe+图表+that......
Wecanefromthe+图表+that......
Itappearsfromthedatathat......
Itindicatesfromthetablethat.......
As从句:
Aswecanefromthedata/table,......
Aswecanefromthedata/table,.......
Asisreflectedinthetable,......
(2)主体段落写作必备
表示平级/倍数/比值关系的句型
meninthislevelreached/accountedfor90%,whichisninetimesasmuchastheirfemale
counterparts.
该句可以做成句型:A+be+(表示倍数或比值的数字)+as+形容词的平级+asB
其他变通例句:
Canadareceived/had/welcomedmorethantwice/halfasmanyforeignvisitorsasMexico.
ThenumberofvisitorstothetwocountriesfrombothUKandUSAwasthesame/similar.
NorthAmerica(16%oftheareaand8%ofthepopulation)andSouthAmerica(12%ofthearea
and5.5%ofthepopulation)havepopulationqualtoabouthalfofwhathasbeenexpected.
MainBody2
However,/Converly,/ontheotherhand,thepercentageoffemaleswassomewhere65%and
55%(respectively)atthelevelofundergraduatediplomaandBachelor’sdegree,Itshouldderve
mentioningthatthehighestfemales’percentageandthelowestmales’percentageoccurredat
thelevelundergraduatediploma.
表示比较级的句型
thepercentageoffemaleswassomewhere65%and55%(respectively)atthelevelof
undergraduatediplomaandBachelor'sdegree,+说法1:surpassing/outweighing/exceedingthat
ofmales(approximately35%and45%).
+说法2:,bothofwhichwere(30%and20%)higherthanthatofmales
by(30%and20%).
+说法3,withmales’30%and20%lower.
其他例句:
Francereceivedalargertotalnumberofforeignvisitorsthananyoftheothercountriesonthelist.
Africa'spopulationisaboutathirdsmallerthanwhatwouldbeexpected(20%oftheareaand
13%ofthepopulation).
Alsoisthefactthatmenarefarmorelikelytooffendthanwomen.
Alsomorepopularin1995wastalkingwithfriends,at26%comparedto21%adecadeearlier/a
previousdecade.
Ascanbeefromthechart,thecarwasamuchlesspopularhouholditeminthe1960sthanit
istoday.
表示最高级的句型
Whatshouldbeemphasizedisthatbothdatarankedthemostandtheleastamongfivelevel.
Itshoulddervementioningthatthehighestfemales’percentageandthelowestmales’
percentageoccurredatthelevelundergraduatediploma.
其他最高级句型:
Europeistheconddenstcontinent,occupied7%ofareasand12%ofpopulationintheworld.
(会改写一下吗?)
Asiahasthelargestpercentageofthetotallandarea(30%)andOceaniahastheleast(6%).
ThesparestcontinentisOceania,whichhas6%ofareaand0.5%ofpopulation.
Asiaisthelargestcontinentintermsofbotharea(30%)andpopulation(61%).
ItisnoticeablethatMiddleEastproducedthebiggestamountofoil(22.2millionbarrels),which
wasnearlyfivetimesoftheamountofthedailyoilconsumption.
Clearly,watchingTVwasthenumberoneleisureactivity/themostpopular/wasthemost
favored/enjoyedthegreatestpopularity/wasthemostwidelyenjoyedinbothyears,at32%in
1985andaslightlylower30%in1995.
WatchingTVwasregarded/ratedasthemostenjoyed/favored/preferredinbothyears.
However,by1995thisfigurestoodat27%---thecondhighestoverall.
Itcanbeenfromthethirdchartthatactionsgameswerebyfarthebestllinggenre,
constituting42%oftheelectronicgamesalesinKorea.
Finally,Egyptiswherethemoststrikinggenderdifferenceisfound.
MainBody3:
Whatisinteresting,atthehigherlevel,thepercentageofmaleswhogotpostgraduatediplomaand
Master’sdegreeroughlydoubledthatoffemales(75%vs.30%,60%vs.40%respectively).
3、Part4:Conclusion
Ascanbesummarizedfromtheoverallcomparison,theproportionoffemaleswhopossd
undergraduatediplomaorBachelor'sdegreeismorethanmales’,whileareverdtrendinother3
levelsistrue.
(1)表示结尾段的句型
Ascanbesummarizedfromtheoverallcomparison,theproportionoffemaleswhopossd
undergraduatediplomaorBachelor'sdegreeismorethanmales’,whileareverdtrendinother3
levelsistrue.
结尾的衔接结构还可以写成:
Inconclusion,......;Insummary,……;Toconclude,……;
Byandlarge,Ingeneral=generally,overall
Itcanbeenthat……
Ascanbeenfrom……,……
Itindicatesthat…….
(2)表示数据对比总结的句型:
theproportionoffemaleswhopossdundergraduatediplomaorBachelor'sdegreeismorethan
males’,whileareverdtrendinother3levelsistrue.
还可以写成:
females’proportionintermsofundergraduatediplomaorBachelor'sdegreeismorethanmales’,
whilethetrend/picture/story/situationinother3levelsisjustcontrary/opposite/rever.
三、结尾
小作文静态图表总体难度相对较大,这就要求考生在备考时,多加练习,充分理解静态
图表中数据写作的顺序、数据对比的主次、数据信息的取舍以及句型结构的变化四个大点,
并能够做到触类旁通。因为几乎所有的图表都是从表格演化过来的。
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