admittedly

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考研英语写作常用表达同义替换

1.动词（词组）：

absorb－>assimilate

吸收

agreepartly－>agree

withrerve有保留

地赞同

arou－>ignite/stimul

ate/spur/motivate引

起；鼓励

change－>alter改变

consider－>takeinto

account考虑

devoteto－>dedicate

to把……奉献于；专

注于

emphasize－>accentua

te强调

expect－>anticipate期

望；预期

explain－>interpret/illu

strate解释；说明

getintochaos－>with

chaonsuing陷入

混乱

handin－>render提

出

join－>participate参

加；参与

leadto－>contributet

o/conduceto/resulti

n导致；产生……的

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结果

limit－>stress/hinder/h

amper限制；阻止；

阻碍

operate－>manipulate

操作；操纵

provide－>lend－>offe

r提供；给予

publicize－>propagand

ize宣传；公布

繁荣（的）（词性不

同，注意使用正确形

式）

sway－>vacillate影

响；摇摆，使摇摆

think－>contemplate/m

u/meditate/retrospect

思考；考虑；想起

thrive－>palmy(a.)/flou

rishing(v./a.)/prosperity

(n.)

undermine－>sap/ener

vate/debilitate破坏；

使衰弱，衰竭

u－>employ/utilize

使用；利用

want－>intendto/tend

to/beinclinedto希

望；倾向于

wantto－>desire想

要

2.形容词/副词：

first－>primarily首先

（ad.）

hardly－>merely－>ba

rely几乎不（ad.）

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hurt－>vulnerable受

伤的；易受攻击的

inevitable－indispensa

ble必然的；不可缺

少的

infact－>actually/virtu

ally事实上；实际上

（ad.）

key－>crucial/vital/con

quential关键的；

重要的

large－>miraculous/ma

rvelous大的；不可

思议的（表程度）

maybe－>probably也

许；大概（ad.）

moreandmore－>inc

reasing/growing越来

越多的

obvious－>conspicuou

s明显的；显著的

old－>ancient老的；

古老的

proper－>apposite适

当的；合适的

persuasive－>thorough

/sound/specific/convinc

ing有说服力的

true－>accurate正确

的；准确的

vague－>gratuitous/un

warranted/oversimplifie

d模糊的

well-known－>outstan

ding著名的

3.名词（词组）：

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bias－>prejudice/discri

minate偏见；歧视

bigcity－>metropolis

大都市

chance－>alternative

机会；选择

character－>trait/indivi

duality/idiosyncrasy/pe

rsonality品质；特

性；个性

child－>juvenile孩

子；青少年

clash－>conflict/collisi

on/rencounter冲突

custom－>convention/t

radition传统；习俗

delegate－>reprentat

ive代表

detail－>specific细节

lawmaking－>legislatio

n立法

offspring－>descendan

t后代；子

value－>merit价值

4.其他：

although－>albeit/notwithstanding尽管（con

j.）

becau－>inthat－>since－>eing因为（co

nj.）

but－>nonetheless/nevertheless然而；但是（c

onj.）

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through－>intermof/via通过（prep.）

tosum－>tosummarize/inconclusion总之；

最后

1.随着经济的繁荣withtheboomingofthe

economy

2.随着人民生活水平的显著提高withthere

markableimprovementofpeople'slivingstand

ard

3.先进的科学技术advancedscienceandte

chnology

4.为我们日常生活增添了情趣addmuchsp

ice/flavortoourdailylife

5.人们普遍认为Itismonlybelievedthat…

6.我同意前者(后者)观点Igivemyvoteto

theformer/latteropinion.

7.引起了广泛的公众关注ud

widepublicconcern./Sthhasdrawngreatp

ublicattention.

8.不可否认Itisundeniablethat…

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9.热烈的讨论/争论aheateddiscussion/d

ebate

10.有争议性的问题acontroversialissue

11.就我而言/就个人而言AsfarasIamco

ncerned,/Personally,

12.有充分的理由支持besupportedbysou

ndreasons

13.双方的论点argumentonbothsides

14.发挥日益重要作用playanincreasinglyi

mportantrolein…

15.对…必不可少beindispensableto…

16.正如谚语所说Astheproverbgoes:

17.对……产生有利/不利的影响exertpositi

ve/negativeeffectson…

18.利远远大于弊Theadvantagesfaroutwei

ghthedisadvantages.

19.导致，引起leadto/giverito/cont

ributeto/resultin

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20.复杂的社会现象aplicatedsocialpheno

menon

21.责任感/成就感nofresponsibility/

achievement

22.竞争与合作精神nofpetitionandc

ooperation

23.开阔眼界widenone'shorizon/broaden

one'svision

24.学习知识和技能acquireknowledgeand

skills

25.经济/心理负担financialburden/psychol

ogicalburden

26.考虑到诸多因素takemanyfactorsinto

consideration

27.从另一个角度fromanotherperspective

28.做出共同努力makejointefforts

29.对……有益bebeneficialto/beconduc

iveto…

30.为社会做贡献makecontributionstothe

society

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31.打下坚实的基础layasolidfoundationf

or…

32.综合素质prehensivequality

33.致力于/投身于bemitted/devotedto…

34.应当承认Admittedly,

35.不可推卸的义务unshakableduty

36.满足需求satisfy/meettheneedsof...

37.可靠的信息源areliablesourceofinfor

mation

38.宝贵的自然资源valuablenaturalresourc

es

39.因特网theInternet(一定要有冠词，字

母I大写)

40.方便快捷convenientandefficient

41.在人类生活的方方面面inallaspectsof

humanlife

42.环保的材料environmentallyfriendlymate

rials

43.社会进步的体现asymbolofsocietypr

ogress

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44.大大方便了人们的生活atly

facilitatedpeople'slives.

45.对这一问题持有不同态度holddifferent

attitudestowardsthisissue

46.在一定程度上tosomeextent

47.理论和实践相结合integratetheorywith

practice

48.……必然趋势anirresistibletrendof…

49.日益激烈的社会竞争theincreasinglyke

ensocialpetition

50.眼前利益immediateinterest/short-term

interest

51.长远利益long-teminterest

52.……有其自身的优缺点…hasitsownm

eritsanddemerits/prosandcons

53.对……有害doharmto/beharmfulto

/bedetrimentalto

54.交流思想/情感/信息exchangeideas/e

motions/information

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55.跟上…的最新发展keeppacewith/kee

pabreastwiththelatestdevelopmentof…

56.……的健康发展thehealthydevelopment

of…

57.重视attachgreatimportanceto…

58.社会地位socialstatus

59.把时间和精力放在……上focusone'sti

meandenergyon…

60.扩大知识面expandone'sscopeofknow

ledge

61.身心两方面bothphysicallyandmentally

62.有直接/间接关系bedirectly/indirectly

relatedto…

63.导致很多问题giverito/leadto/s

pellvariousproblems

64.可以替代think的词believe,claim,maint

ain,argue,insist,holdtheopinion/belief/

viewthat

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65.缓解压力/减轻负担relievestress/burd

en

66.优先考虑/发展……give(top)priorityto

sth.

67.与……比较paredwith…/inparisonwit

h

68.可降解的/可分解的材料degradable/de

posablematerial

69.代替replace/substitute/taketheplace

of

70.提供就业机会offerjobopportunities

71.反映了社会进步的mirrorthesocialpro

gress/advance

72.增进相互了解enhance/promotemutual

understanding

73.充分利用makefulluof/takeadvant

ageof

74.承受更大的工作压力sufferfromheavier

workpressure

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75.保障社会稳定和繁荣guaranteethestabi

lityandprosperityofoursociety

76.更多地强调putmoreemphasison…

77.适应社会发展adaptonelftothesocia

ldevelopment

78.实现梦想realizeone'sdream

79.主要理由列举如下Themain/leadingr

easonsarelistedasfollows:

80.我们还有很长的路要走Westillhaveal

ongwaytogo.

下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：1.

适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观地反映

事实。句子开头不要总是用we/I(比如写结

尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用

Attentionshouldbepaidto.)举个经典结尾的例

子：Itis,therefore,hightimethatsome

applicableapproacheswereimplementedbythe

gso，its

petitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.2.

善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词

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等，作为插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、

动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如

however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入

语放在中间，一般放在动词、助动词后，两

边分别加上逗号。举例如下：Otherindividuals,

however,taketheattitudethat…3.一定要学

会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考

试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,

think,people,opinion等等)比如第一条的例子

中，applicable替换proper;approaches替换

ways;implement替换carryout;sharpenone’s

petitiveedge替换enhanceone’s

petitiveness(提高某物竞争力)。下面举一

篇某位同学写的优秀作文的例子，看看他是

如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师

上课讲的各类写作手法，精彩替换和句型都

用上了，作文有了很大的提高。Inever

forgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmy

motherboughtmeaputerasbirthdayprent,

whichexertedatremendousfascinationonmeso

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thatIindulgedmylfingooglinganarmyof

ufulinformationihadexpected,andenjoyaa

ghtIwas

sleepless,feelingthatthewholeworldbelonged

ingly替换very；（个人认为

替换成overwhelmingly更出彩）thrilling

替换exciting；atremendous

fascinationonsb替换restedinsth；

google替换arch；anarmyof替换alot

of。Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnesd

dent

withtheadvancementofscienceandtechnology,

puterspouringint0thecurrentsocietyasa

noexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmerged

bythem,inlargemeasure!

Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnesd是一个

精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么

事情；Increasingpopularity替换

moreandmorepopular；Coincident

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with…非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”

的意思，替换With…；Advancement

替换development；Pourint0(flood

int0/swarmint0)替换enterint0；Current

(currently)替换now；Appealtosb.替换

restedinsth.；Growing

individuals替换moreandmorepeople；

Itisnoexaggerationtosay经典句型，说某事

是毫不夸的。（itgoeswithoutexaggeration

that更好）Forastart,wecan,freely,

bylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,and

ourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.

Additionally,wecangethugerecreationsonline

bychatting,playinggames,ordeliveringemail.

Forastart替换Tobeginwith；Wecan,

freely,arch用了插入语的写作手法；

ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andour

horizonswillbegreatlybroadened.用了非常精

彩的被动；Additionally替换In

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addition/Besides；Deliver替换nd。

Thereisnodenyingthat,however,puterscan

functioninthedisrviceofhumanbeings,ina

way,especiallythegrowingviolence,***,porn

pictures,AV-filmmergingonthescreen,

whichleadsquietafewnetcitizenstocopying.

Thereisnodenyingthat,however,puterscan

functioninthedisrviceofhumanbeings,这个

句子有三个精彩之处，首先Thereisno

denyingthat这个句型；其次however作为插

入语；再次，functioninthedisrviceof替换

doharmto。Emerging替换appearing

(fading替换disappearing)；Netcitizen

网民，属于精彩用词。（直接用netizen更

好）Asaclassicproverbgoesthatno

doplayapositive

roleinthedevelopmentofpeople'lives,despitea

should,therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsand

enhasno

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weeds替换Everycoinhastwosides；

putersdoplay，使用do表示强调；

Positive替换important/good等；Aslice

of替换apartof；Unfavorable替换

bad；Impacts替换effects/

influences；Weshould,therefore,take

advantageof…使用插入语；Fruits

(而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/virtues)替

换advantage(defects替换disadvantage)；

Facet替换aspect。

以下是45个最经典的替换词，各位同学可

以参考一下:duals,characters,folks

替换people,ve,favorable,

rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect,

pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior替

换ul,unfavorable,poor,

adver,ill(有害的)替换bad（如果bad做表

语，可以有belessimpressive替换。）

ofcollegestudentsindulge

themlvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromance

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withgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheir

approachestograduation,asa

result,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsareless

of,anoceanof,aa

of,amultitudeof,ahostof,many,ifnotmost替

换many.注：用many,ifnotmost一定要

小心，many后一定要有词。

individuals,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat….同

理用most,ifnotall,替换of,

quietafew替换theideathat,

taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itis

widelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledged

that替换think(因为是书面语，所以要加

that)。,business,matter替换thing.

代gefruits替换

art,frommy

ownperspective替换inmyopinion.

sing(ly),growing替换moreand

more(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当

修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容

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词，副词用increasingly.)gained

ncreasinglypopular

if

anything或littleornothing替换hardly.

cial,rewarding替换helpful.

r,client,consumer,purchar替换

customer.

elmingly,exceedingly,extremely,

intenly替换necessary,

hardlyinevitable...替换unnecessary,avoidable.

ensable替换

appealstosb,sthexertsatremendous

fascinationonsb替换sbtakeinterestin/

eone'sattention替换

attractone'sattention.

,demension,sphere代

indicativeof,besuggestiveof,befearfulof代

indicate,suggest,to,leadto,

resultin,trigger替换re

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veralreasonsbehindsth替换..reasonsforsth.

替换tentionint0

替换mindthat

替换,posss替换

have(注意process是过程的意思)。28.

interaction替换nsth

替换beagainst,

nameonlyafew,asanexample替换forexample,

/virtuallyimpossible

替换nearly/almostimpossible.

ing/concerning替换about.

l/paramount替换important.34.第

一（inthefirstplace/thefirstandforemost）;第

二（thereisonemorepoint,Ishouldtouchon,

that….）;第三（thelastbutnottheleast）.

ous替换hard-working36.

arduous替换difficult

eveloped/financially-challenged替换

poor（因为poor通常含有贬义）38.

demonstrate/manifest替换show39.

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invariably替换always40.

perilous/hazardous替换dangerous(写社会类作

文时常用，说什么社会现象是不好的，有害

的)able替换difficult42.

quintesntial替换typical（举例时常用，例

如：aquintesntialexampleshouldbecited

that=forexample;forinstance）43.

distinguished替换le替换

ently,accordingly替换

so

考研英语作文高分写作经典表达素材

一句型篇

1主语从句

Itismonknowledgethathonestyisthebest

policy.

Itiswell-knownthat...

Itislf-evident/conceivable/obvious/app

arentthat...

Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat...

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2宾(表)语从句

Wecannotunderstandwhyhewassocruelt

ohisroommates.

Theproblemisnotwhowillgo,butwhowil

lstay.

Wetotallyagreewithwhatyouhavejustsai

d.

3定语从句(限定性和非限定性)

Asisshown/demonstrated/illustrated/depict

ed/described...inthecartoon/picture/graph/

table...

TherearemanyreasonswhyIwanttostud

yinyouruniversity.

Itistimatedthattensofbillionsofpound

sisspentoncigaretteveryyearinourco

untry,whichisahugewaste.

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4状语从句(时间，原因，地点，条件，让

步，转折等)

Whenthemaninjoyingthecigarette,the

smokebeesamonster(怪物)whichwilldev

ourhim.

Whateverthereason,therearestillsomepr

oblemswithstudentuofputers.

5分词短语做定语或状语

metoouruniversity,givingus

alectureonhowtoacquireEnglishbetter.

6倒装句

Onlythroughthemeasurescanwehopeto

solvetheproblem.

Scatteredaroundtheglobe（表语）aremore

than100smallregionsofisolatedvolcanic

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activityknowntogeologistsashotspots（主

语）.

7被动句

Somemeasuresshouldbetakentodealwith

theproblem.

Heissaidtohaveacplishedalotofgreatd

eeds.

Manypeoplebelievethat...(Itisbelievedtha

t...)

8设问句

Doyoustillremembertheboywhocriedwol

fforveraltimessonoonewouldtrusthi

m?

二固定表达篇

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1比较

1).Theadvantagesfaroutweighthedisadvanta

ges.

2).TheadvantagesofAaremuchgreatertha

nthoofB.

3).AmaybepreferabletoB,butAsuffersfr

omthedisadvantagesthat...

4).Itisreasonabletomaintainthat...butitw

ouldbefoolishtoclaimthat...

5).Forallthedisadvantages,ithasitspensati

ngadvantages.

6).Likeanythingel,ithasitsfaults.

7).AandBhasveralpointsinmon.

8).AbearssomeremblancestoB.

9).However,thesameisnotapplicabletoB.

10).AandBdifferinveralways.

11).Evidently,ithasbothnegativeandpositi

veeffects.

12).Peopleudtothink...,butthingsare

differentnow.

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13).ThesameistrueofB.

14).WonderingasAis,ithasitsdrawbacks.

15).ItistruethatA...,butthechieffaults

(obviousdefects)are...

2原因

1).Anumberoffactorsareaccountableforth

issituation.

2).Anumberoffactorsmightcontributeto(l

eadto/accountfor)thephenomenon(proble

m).

3).Theanswertothisprobleminvolvesman

yfactors.

4).Thephenomenonmainlystemsfromthefa

ctthat...

5).Thefactorsthatcontributetothissituation

include...

6).Thechangein...largelyresultsfromthefa

ctthat...

7).Wemayblame...,buttherealcausare...

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8).Partoftheexplanationsforitisthat...

9).Oneofthemostmonfactors(caus)i

sthat...

10).Anothercontributingfactor(cau)is...

11).Perhapstheprimaryfactoristhat...

fundamentalcauisthat...

3结果

1).Itmaygiveritoahostofproblems.

2).Theimmediateresultitproducesis...

3).Itwillexerciaprofoundinfluenceupo

n...

4).Itsconquencecanbesogreatthat...

4批驳

1)Itistruethat...,butonevitalpointisbei

ngleftout.

2)Thereisagrainoftruthinthestateme

nts,buttheyignoreamoreimportantfact.

3)Somepeoplesay...,butitdoesnothold

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water.

4)Manyofushavebeenundertheillusiont

hat...

5)Acloexaminationwouldrevealhowridi

culousthestatementis.

6)Itmakesnontoarguefor...

7)Toomuchstressplacedon...mayleadt

o...

8)Suchastatementmainlyrestsontheass

umptionthat...

9)Contrarytowhatiswidelyaccepted,Imai

ntainthat...

5举例

1)Agoodcainpointis...

2)Asanillustration,wemaytake...

3)Suchexamplesmightbegiveneasily.

4)...isoftencitedasanexample.

6证明

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1)Noonecandenythefactthat...

2)Theideaishardlysupportedbyfacts.

3)Unfortunately,noneoftheavailabledatas

hows...

4)Recentstudiesindicatethat...

5)Thereissufficientevidencetoshowthat...

6)Accordingtostatisticsprovedby...,itcan

beenthat...

三结构篇

1开篇/中篇

1)Manynationshavebeenfacedwiththepr

oblemof...

2)Recentlytheproblemhasbeenbroughtint

ofocus.

3)Recentlythephenomenonhasbeeaheate

dtopic.

4)Recentlytheissuehasaroudgreatconc

ernamong...

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5)Nowadaysthereisagrowingconcernove

r...

6)Neverinourhistoryhastheideathat...

beensopopular.

7)Facedwith...,quiteafewpeopleargueth

at...

8)Accordingtoarecentsurvey,...

9)Withtherapiddevelopmentof...,...

2结尾

1)Fromwhathasbeendiscusdabove,we

candrawtheconclusionthat...

2)Itishightimethatstrictmeasuresweret

akentostop...

3)Itisnecessarythatstepsshouldbetaken

to...

4)Inconclusion,itisimperativethat...

5)Thereisnoeasymethod,but...mightbe

ofsomehelp.

6)Tosolvetheabove-mentionedproblem,w

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emust...

7)Insummary,ifwecontinuetoignorethe

above-mentionedissue,moreproblemswillcr

opup.

8)Withtheeffortsofallpartsconcerned,th

eproblemwillbesolvedthoroughly.

9)Wemightdomorethanidentifythecau

;itisimportanttotakeactionsto...

10)Takingalltheintoaccount,we...

11)Whetheritisgoodornot/positiveorne

gative,onethingiscertain/clear...

四段落篇

Manypeoplebelievethat...(Itisbelievedtha

t...)Thegovernmentandthepublicshouldp

ayenoughattentionto...(Enoughattentionsho

uldbepaidto...fromboththegovernmentan

dthepublic.)

vementionedissueresultsfromth

efollowingfactors./Manyfactorsarerespons

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nwith,________.

What’smore,_________.Lastbutnotthe

least,____________.

snodoubtthat…/Noonecanden

ythat.../Itgoeswithoutsayingthat....

estotheissue,differentpeopleh

avedifferentopinions.

ve

llowed

tomakeadecision,Iprefer_____to_____

__becau_______.

dispensablepartofsth.

cannotimaginetheworldwithout_

______./Peoplecannotimaginewhatthew

orldwouldbelikewithout_______.

ew,wehavetothinkcarefullybef

orewemakethedecisionto_____.Oneis

_____.Theotheris_____.Thequestionsn

eedtobeansweredbeforewemakethefinal

decision.

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五常用搭配篇

alksoflife在各行各业中；在生活

的方方面面中

dsayinggoes….俗话说

dofdoingsth./Weshould....ratherth

an我们应……而不能……

uethat...,but...诚然……但是……

greatimportancetosth.重视某现

象/问题/观点/措施

6....isahotissue……是一个热点话题。

y/meetone’sneedsanddesires满

足某人的需求与愿望

tsb.=tosb.某事

对某人有利/某人（通过某方法）从某事中获

利

tfromsth.

ebenefitfrom/bysth.

sth/ficialtosth./sb.

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rymeanstodosth./strivetodost

h.竭尽全力做某事

.,

某些人……，而另一些人……

ppodtodosth.……应该

是……

2012年考研英语写作模版及写作方法汇

总

一、文章结构用词表达

1．分点一：分层论证

Basictoanyunderstandingofthebenefits

wecangetfrom_______isthat__________/

Firstandforemost；

Ononehand_________,Ontheother

hand_________；

Besides/What’smore/Inaddition；

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Firstofall/tobeginwith/aboveall；

Inthecondplace/inthecond

instance；

Lastbutnotleast/insummary；

这一段主要说理，在分论点里可以加一

些小的例子细节，重点是要用一些精华句

子！

2．分点二：举例论证

Furtherlendingcredencetomypositionis

that____________（简单阐述/例子字不够就

多讲点废话）

/Icanthinkofnobetterillustrationthanthe

exampleof（典型例子）

/Acainpointisthat（不是很典型）

________,…..someexpertpiontsoutthat...

/take...ininstance...

/accordingtotheinvestigationconducted

thisyearindicatesthat.../(推荐，为神马，因为

句子长，废话多……)

somestatisticxpothat...

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一句话总结例子：Asaresult,强调句/倒

装句/表利弊的句型/反面论证如果没有会怎

样。

3．让步段：

Agreeordisagree:Admittedly,_____,to

someextent,maydirectlyorindirectly____/has

itsundeniabledetriments.

Forinstance,_______

However,thevaluablemeritsof_______

considerablyovershadowthedrawbacks/onno

account________./

（经典正反对比结构）

二选一：Admittedly,BBalsohascertain

example,____(字数不够就多讲点)

However，BB的缺点或AA也可以做到.

paredwithAA,（which可以总结所有优点或

针对BB的一方面,）itpales.

4．结尾段：

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Therefore,duetotheabovementioned

reasons,whichsometimescorrelatewitheach

othertoformanorganicwholeandthusbee

morepersuasivethananysingleoneofthem(字

不够了用),Ireinforcemystandpointthat.

5．改写题目

Onlyvia(by/through/with/when/after)

___canwe__________;

onlyvia(by/through/with/when/after)

___canwe________;

andonlyvia(by/through

/with/when/after)___canwe_______

Or

ItisAthat...;itisAthat...;anditisAthat...

（不好写或显得累赘就不要了）

二、语言结构用词表达

1．基本句型

A.因果

Onaccountof/owingto/dueto+N

Forthereasonthat/as/since+句子

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Itisdueto____that

eg:Itisduetohispersistenceand

perverancethatheeventuallyreachedhis

acme.(强调句)

derive/ari/stemfrom来源于

eg:Hissuccessderivesfromhispersistence

andperverance.

ascribeAtoB归结于

eg:Hissuccesscanbeascribed/attributedto

hispersistenceandperverance

B.条件

ArvesasacatalystforB(ourfurther

success)

If/onconditionthat/providedthat/aslong

as________

C.让步

Despitethefactthat/regardlessof

2．经典句型

A.倒装

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Onlyvia(by/through/with/when/after)

__do/did/canwe__

eg:OnlyaftergoingtothebeachofHawaii

willIknowaboutAmericantypicaltypeof

spendingleisuretime.

Hardly/Seldom/Scarcelycan__

eg:Hardlycanweimagineaworld/ourlife

without/devoidof

So+adj+主谓倒装+that__

Notonly主谓倒装butalso...

eg:Notonlyshouldeducationprepare

childrentopete

Notonlydopeoplecaretheireconomic

needs,theybutalsowanttomeettheirspiritual

needs.

Onnoaccount主谓倒装（决不....）

B.强调

Itis/was....that/who(m)....

限定性副词probably/directlyor

indirectly/tosome(alarge)extent

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3．经典中的经典

A.排比

1）Itistourismthatgivesmethe

opportunitytoknowthecultureofthisdynamic,

robustandalivecountry.

2）Itisputersthatmakeourlife

diver,convenient,dynamic/vibrant,without

whichourlifewouldprobablypale.

3）A/whichneedstobe/Inthisway,Acan

bereadilyaccepted,respected,appreciatedand

advocated.

4）Onlyviauniversityeducationcanwe

havesystematicknowledgeconcerningartsand

science.

Onlyviauniversityeducationcanweknow

theesnceofsymbiosisandcollaboration.

AndOnlyviauniversityeducationcanwe

meetthedemandsofsocietyandmakeourfuture

successinevitable.

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三、作文中的部分新颖表达及部分垃圾

词汇的替代

作文中想要拿到高分，就必须有一些与

众不同的词汇或表达方式，笔者在这里所说

的“垃圾词汇”并没有贬低这些表达的意

思，大家可以想象一个阅卷老师在阅几千份

试卷的过程中就看到几千次相同表达，分数

可想而知，所以如何取舍你懂的。

A、认为（尽量避免的表达，以下例句

同，不再重复说明：Ithink/Ibelieve/AsfarasI

amconcerned）

1.别人认为：assume,argue,contend,

maitain,holdtheperspectivethat…

2.我认为：Iaminclinedtotheview

that…(开头引入自己观点)

convincedthat…

Iawarethat…(比较弱)

Iclingtoabeliefthat…

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B、不同人有不同看法（Differentpeople

havedifferentopinions）

People’sperspectivedivergeonthis

controversialissue.

Thereisnoconnsusamongpeople

concerningthiscontroversialissue.

C、举例（forexample/forinstance/letme

giveyouanexample）

ng/telling/apt/strikingexampleis

that…

npointisthat…(口语常用)

rlendingcredencetomypositionis

theexampleof…(***倒装)

nbeaptly/wellexemplifiedand

illustratedbythecaof+n.

thefactthat+句子

thefollowingca

inkofnobetterillustrationthanthe

exampleof…,who….(***最高级)

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estomusictalent,eminent

individualsrangingfromMozarttoBeethvoene

immediatelytome.（***此处也是细节）

stratethis,weneednolookfurther

thanthecaof……(举例)

e/Visualize/Picture/Suppo……

D、迷恋，喜欢，上瘾（少用具体多用抽

象）

Iaminvariablyfascinated/captivated/

enchantedwith/by…

HardlycanIresistthetemptationofsth.

beobsdwith/by…

E、数据引用

Statisticfiguresshow/manifestthat…

Manysurveys/investigations显示that越

来越多的universitieshave重视thecredit

system,whichpeobablywould带来不好的呃影

像.（中文从一下中选词）

显示：manifest/illustrate

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重视：placeagreat/considerable

emphasison

attachgreatimportanceto(不用换词)

/turnablind

eyetosth.(***倒装)

越来越多的：aincreasingnumber

带来不好影：exercianunpredictable/

unforableconquence(不好的结果都用这个)

upon

F、正反论证

Itisnotdifficulttoimaginethatif……

Itismoderntechnologythatmakesourlife

simple,healthyanddynamic/vibrant/fantastic/

active/alive,withoutwhichourlifewould

probablypale.

HardlycanIimaginetheworldwithoutthe

fascinationof……which……

G、然而(引出事物的反面)

onthecontrary/

converly/

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bycontrast

H、利弊及其影响

利：merits/benefits/advantage

弊：drawbacks/risks/disadvantage

弊：

exercianunforableandunprediactable/

adver/unfavorable/deleteriousconquence

on…

undoubtedlyandundeniablysoundanalarm

tosb.

putaenormouspressureupon

putapotentialandprobablethreaton…

adverlyaffect…

undermine

利：

afar-reachinginfluenton…

2.…undoubtedlyrvesasa

catalyst/enzymefor…

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a(n)irreplaceable/crutial/indispensablerolein…

lidfoudationfor…

To：假条是递给谁的

From：请假人

Date：写假条的日期(注意不是请假的日期)

Subject：写上请假字样

假条抬头例如下：

To:PeterStone,Manager

From:LynnChen,FinancialDepartment

Date:April2nd,2004

Subject:CasualLeaveofAbnce

其次，在您的请假信第一段，应该开门见山

但是有礼貌地提出请假。第一段要中心明

确，写清您要请假的日期。

第一段例如下：

Peter,IwouldliketoknowifIcouldaskfora

casualleaveofabnceforonedayonApril4th,

thisWednesday.

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然后，在假条的第二段，您应该简单明了述

请假的原因事由。注意叙述清楚明白，并尽

可能表示对此带来工作不便的歉意。

第二段例如下：

ThismorningIreceivedatelephonecallfrommy

dentist,urgingmetoetohispracticefor

een

experiencingastingingpain,deprivingmeofmy

uation

couldworn,shouldinfectionoccur.

Concerningmyworkload:AsWednesdayisnot

asbusyastheotherweekdays,Ithinkaone-day

leavethisWednesdaymaybethebestsolution.I

apologizefortheinconveniencemyabncefrom

workmaycau.

接着，在假条的最后一段，应写上您希望获

得准假的句子，或者具体等候答复的时间。

最后一段例如下：

allyouat1:ancall

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meatanytime.