完成的英文

英文满分作文：男女平等完成工作

作文题目：

Alljobscanbedoneequallywellbybothmenandwomen,towhatextentdoyou

agreeordisagree?

题目大意

所有的工作都可以由男性和女性平等地做好，你在多大程度上同意或不同意？

雅思高分范文

Theutterancesandexpressionsregardingtheclaimthatmenandwomencandoall

thejobquallyaretoovague;Iwouldargueinthissaythatsomedefinitions

shouldbeclarifiedtoqualifytheasrtion.

Toassswhether“jobs”arecorrelatedtogender,Imightfirsthavetodefinewhat

theso-called“job”recertainlypeopleoutthereclaimingthatjobsshould

notbeprovidedintermsofwhatxoneis,butthisopiniononlydependsonthe

universaldefinitionof“jobs”,tingofall

thereisaneedthatemergesinthemassmarket,thereisatypeofjobdemand

sthatwhatajob

requiresisjustapersonwhoiscapableenoughofdoingsomethingregardlessofx.

Inthatca,onlythefactorssuchastheexperti,theworkingenthusiasm,orthe

moralobligationsshouldbeconsideredtotestifywhetherornotoneiscompetent

enoughfora“job".Eveniftheremightbestereotypesnotingthatsomeoccupations

requireapersontoberelatively"masculine"whileotherstobe"feminine",itisthe

requirementson,say,physicalstrengthorthewomanlynaturelyingbehindthe

considerationbutnotone'sgender.

However,thethinkinglistedaboveisjustanoccasiononwhichtheterm"job"is

definedcommonly;thereisalsoapossibilitythatwhenwearetalkingaboutjobs,we

oughalltypesofcareershaveagenerally

inclusivecriterioningender,wehavetoadmitthatwhenparticularlyspecified,some

realwaysjobsouttherethat

are"maleorfemale-only"sinceitwouldbeextremelyinconvenientwhenthewrong

npointisthefemaleprivatenursingjobthatneedsoneto

takecareof,say,cupationsoundsmoresuitable

forthefemaleratherthanthemale;theformercangetintouchwiththeircustomer

muchmoreintimatelythanthelatter,notablyinsomeprivate,personalareas.

Besides,thereisnosuchcrediblemeasurementforustotestifywhetherornotall

jobscanbedone"equallywell"bybothgendersnomatterhowconclusivelywe

immight,

therefore,beanovergeneralization,sincethecriteriainvolvedinquantifyingthe

wesaywhetherthejobscanorcannotbe

accomplishedequally?Wecanneitherknowtheworkloadofaparticularjobexactly

nortestifyhowmuchmenandwomencandoandiftheyhavereachedthesame

oughsomemaygiveoutageneralideasayinghowjobscan

beequallyallocatedtobothxes,itwouldstillbeunpersuasiveifwithoutany

systematicschemexaminingtheamountofwork,thedegreeofcompletion,or

otherrelatedcontexts.

Inconclusion,becauoftheobscurityinvolvedintheclaim,Imaydisagreewiththe

ideathatmenandwomencandoalljobqually;onemustclearlydefineallterms

thatmaycaumisunderstandingsbeforemakingtheultimateconclusion.

相关词汇和语法结构

Vague模糊的

Workingenthusiasm工作热情

Competent胜任的

Stereotype刻板印象