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论赞扬(OnPrai)

论赞扬(onprai)

1、⼈们都喜欢赞扬；

2、但⼈们却很少得到赞扬；

3、我们应该……

[范⽂]

everyonewatance,childrenwant

eeswanttobepraidbytheir

sthatpraiislikesunlighttous,wecan'tflowerandgrowwithoutit.

butitisapitythatwhilemostofusareonlytooreadytoblowthecoldwindofharshcriticismonothers,wearesomehow

mple,mostmothersarealwaysnotsatisfiedwiththe

progresstheirchildrenmadeatschoolmostteachersalwaysdrowntheirstudentscompositionsincriticalredink,insteadof

ployersarealwayscriticalaboutwhattheiremployeeshavedoneinsteadofgiving

,let'sbealerttothesmallexcellencearoundusandcommentonthem.

wewillnotonlybringjoyintootherpeople'slives,butalso,veryoften,addhappinesstoourown.

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⽂章⼀开始的主题句应点明主题，接着应⽤具体例⼦⽀持，即⽆论是谁，⽐如孩⼦、学⽣、雇员都希望得到赞扬。该段的

结尾句可⽤⼀个优美的⽐喻：赞扬犹如阳光，有了它，万物才能茁壮成长；第⼆段分析现状，可通过举例说明⼈们在⽇常⽣活

中不但不赞扬，反⽽常批评的做法；最后⼀段指出赞扬别⼈并⾮很难，只要⽤⼼去发现，努⼒去赞扬发⽣在⽣活中的值得赞扬

的事，⼀个精彩的世界就会呈现在你我的⾯前。