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2013上海中考英语作文

【篇一：2013年中考英语作文案例】

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earthquakes.7+8+4

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asnaturaldisaster,,it’s

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8+8+3

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thingsmentionedabovecanigetmylfoutofdanger.8+8+3

lifeiscolorfulbutfullofdanger,soourstudentsmust

tance,

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tisoutofcontrol,imustdial119toaskfor

dstaycalmandtellthefiremenwhere

’du

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toprotectourlvescorrectly,andthenwecanliveahappier

life.8+7.5+3

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si’mconcerned,it’snecessaryfor

teenagerstolearnhowtoprotectourlves.

forexample,whenthereisanearthquake,pleacalmdown!

it’etoutofthebuildingandkeep

’sbynomeans

frighteningbecauyouarenotalone.

toputeverythinginashell,ifyouareindanger,bebraveand

lievethat

everyonewillbesafe.8+8+3

recentlysomanyearthquakeshappenedallovertheworld

’snecessaryandimportantfor

si’mconcerned,the

mostimportantthingweshoulddoistokeepcalmwhenan

’reathome,hideinthebathroom

wherehasplentyofpipesbecauitcanmakesureyour

tion,trytoaskothersforhelpandnevergiveup.

onlyinthewayscanwepreventourlvesfrom

danger.8+7+4

nowadays,

greatharmcomesfromnaturaldisasters.i’dliketotakean

earthquakeasanexampletoexplainhowtoprotectourlves.

first,we’resuppodtocalmdownwhenanearthquakestrikes.

cond,stayunderapieceofstablefurnituresoastoprevent

portantly,whenwe

hearrescuerscome,makesomenoitocatchtheirattention.

tosumup,whenwefindourlvesindanger,weoughtto

protectourlvesoraskothersforhelp,forwehaveevery

reasontosaveourownlives.8+7.5+4

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’m

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insomens,trustingothersisnotsuggested,especially

nall,it’snevertoomuchtobecarefuland

that’sthekeyofprotectingmylf.8+7+4

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caraccidents,losingmyway,y,ishould

’smore,

ifican’tsolvetheproblemsbymylf,iwillaskothersforhelp.

portantly,if

i’mindanger,i’llcalmdownassonsaspossibleandthink

tingmylfasmuch

aspossible,lifewillbebetterandsafer!howimportant

protectingmylfis!8+7.5+3

thereisnodoubtthatnothingelismorepreciousthanlife,

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ldomgotoplaceswherei’’salsowi

tohangoutwithfriendsorparentsinsteadoftravelingalone,

s,iaskthepoliceforhelpif

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playsarole.8+7.5+4

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phonecallsmustn’tbetrustedwithoutcertainchecks.

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ary,onlybyraising

theawarenessofprotectingourlvescanweavoidbeing

’slearntoprotectourlves!8+7.5+4

nowadays,thethingswhicharepaidmostattentiontoare

teenagers’hedevelopmentof

technology,morethingsmayfascinateteenagersdeeplyand

ile,teenagersaremorelikelytobehurt

turbingit

is!

topreventourlvesfrombadpeople,thefollowingtipsare

y,nevertalktostrangersunlessit’

reducesthechancesofbadpeopletogetclotous.

condly,nevershareourpersonalinformationonthe

internet,sothatwecanbesafefromonlinecriminals.

lastbutnotleast,staycalmandcallthepoliceifwefind

ourlvesbeingfollowedbystrangers.

can’twebesaferwiththetipsabove?8+8+3

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protectmylfinmydailylife?

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adoctor.

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holdfirmbelievethatnothingismoreimportantthantoprotect

mylfindanger!6+4+0

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waterit.

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askpoliceforhelpme,condimayhave

willpreventtomyfather

teasybecauiknewmyindangerto

’sagoodideatomyopinion,atlastiprotect

mylf.3+2+0

【篇二：上海市历届中考英语作文题目】

上海市历届中考英语作文题目

2002myfavoritething(s)我的心爱之物

2003tobealovelyshanghaine做一个可爱的上海人

2004leaveschool毕业时分

2005growingpainsandgains成长的烦恼

2006ihaveadream我有一个梦

2007astoryaboutmyparent(s)”一个关于我父/母的故事

2008lovearoundme爱在我身边

2009iwanttodosomethingformyschool我想为我的学校做点

什么

2010improudofmylf我为我自己感到自豪

2011i’mamemberof....我是……的一员

iendbettyisuptbecaushecares

toomuchabouttheresult.写给一个考试焦虑考生的一封信，并给

予建议

2013howtoprotectmylf如何保护自己

2014thistimenextyear明年此时

【篇三：上海中考英语作文】

上海中考英语作文学习资料

一.评分标准

上海中考英语作文总分为20分，其中内容分8分、语言分8分、组

织结构分4分。以下为上海中考英语作文官方评分标准：

1.内容分8分。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚完整。

2.语言分8分。学生需用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误，

词汇拼写正确，句型使用恰当。首先是字数，少于60字的作文要酌

情扣分。

3.组织结构分4分，也就是我们常说的文采分。根据学生使用复杂

句型/单词和谚语/俗语的情况来加分。

二.注意点：

每少5个词扣0.5分，拼写错误每处扣0.5分，标点，大小写错误

每2处扣0.5分3内容和语言表达总分达15分及以上，得2~3分

内容和语言总分13~14分，如确有好句型或表达用语，可酌情给

1~2分通篇句型，句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，也不

给分开头句+给的几个参考点+结尾句+亮点。

先划档次：a档18~15分b档14.5~12分c档11.5~8分d档

3.5~0分然后再仔细批阅看有否语法错误,最后给出总分。

三.学生常出现的问题：

1.内容空洞，没有清晰的思路，表达能力不强，总是用一些不合适

的句子内容来表达，所

以可能让老师觉得理由或是内容太假，当然也就得不了高分。

2.议论过多，描写不足。大多数情况下，我们把议论当成的作文的

重点，所以常常会跑题。应当多描述提示的内容或加以想像，不能

只翻译了事。

3.总是使用同一个主语写句子，重复太多。尽量使用不同的主语来

表达，比如：imustlearnenglishwell.就可以换成：itis

importantformetolearnenglishwell.

4.结构散漫，想哪儿写哪儿，乱七八糟。应该使用总分或总分总的

结构。

5.都是简单句，缺少复合句。多用状语从句，宾语从句，定语从句

及一些重要的句型，也人教版新目标初二下英语同步辅导（一）初

中二年级下un...初中二年级下un...可以用用被动语态。

6.连词的使用较少，句子之间的连接很生硬。可以加入一些：比如:

tomysurpri(让我惊讶的是),what’smore（而且，还有）等，

让上文与下文衔接更紧密。意思也能更流畅地表达。

四．中考写作高频使用词组、句法

1.作文开头的有用句

asweallknow,asitisknowntoall,it’sknowntoallthat…

it’scommonknowledgethat…it’scommonlyacceptedthat…

thereisnodenyingthat…howtimeflies!inablinkofaneye,

timeflieslikeaspeedingarrow,timegoesliketheflowing

water.

2、中间分层部分的有用结构:

分正反两面论述:ononehand,ontheotherhand分两点：for

onething,foranother,分三点：firstly,condly,lastbutnot

least

3、结尾部分

allinall,inaword,inconclusion,inbrief,inshort,toput

everythinginashell,概括的说，简单的说lastbutnotleast

组织语言发表观点的inmyopinion,frommypointofview,in

myeyes,asfarasiamconcerned,believeitornot,

表示递进的inadditionfurthermoremoreimportantlywhat’s

moremoreover其他与“我”有关的写作材料1、重点句型it`s+a.

+a./cha+a.+o?todo

not?.untilthat’swhy+句子那是。。。的原因it’ssaidthat+句

子

4、增添亮点使用复合句和谚语谚语举例ifirmlybelievethat“a

foreignlanguageisaweaponinthestruggleoflife”.asa

famoussayinggoes,“amanbecomeslearnedbyasking

questions.”it’scommonknowledgethattheroadtosuccess

ayinggoes,“nothingis

impossibletoawillingheart.”

五．2002-2013上海中考英语作文题目集锦

2002myfavoritething(s)我的心爱之物

2003tobealovelyshanghaine做一个可爱的上海人

2004leaveschool毕业时分

2005growingpainsandgains成长的烦恼

2006ihaveadream我有一个梦

2007astoryaboutmyparent(s)一个关于我父/母的故事

2008lovearoundme爱在我身边

2009iwanttodosomethingformyschool我想为我的学校做

点什么

2010improudofmylf我为我自己感到自豪

2011myfavouritething（s）我的心爱之物

iendbettyisuptbecaushe

carestoomuchabouttheresult.写给一个考试焦虑考生的一封信，

并给予建议。

2013writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“howtoprotect

mylf”．(以“如何保护自己”为

题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文)

六．近5年上海中考英语真题范文分享

2009命题作文

writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“iwanttodosomething

formyschool”.(以“我想为学校做件事”为题写一篇不少于60个词

的短文，标点符号不占格。)

(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予

评分。)

uthefollowingpointsasareference.(以下内容仅供参考)

lwhatdoyouwanttodoforyourschool?

2whydoyouwanttodoit?

3howareyougoingtodoit?

例文1：

thinkitisverysimple.

chersaid,schoolisyourhome,you

veneverdoneanythingtomake

mple,ihavenevertoldmyclassmateto

hrewthe

ttomakeschoolcleansothat

thissummerholiday,iwillgo

,iwilldoitwithmy

makeschoolcleaneveryweekendsnext

,

doyouthinkitissimple?

2onepossibleversion

iwanttodosomethingformyschoolimleavingmyschool.i

oundthereare

toomanybuildingsandfewtreesinourschoolyard,soiwant

nt

atreethere,

theirsparetime,thestudentscanreadunderthetrees.

2010命题作文

上海中考英语作文题:improudofmylf

1、whatkindofpersonareyou?

2、whatmakesyouproudofyourlf(givean

example/examples)

3、whyareyouproudofyourlf?

要求：至少60字

范文：1

e

allknow,thestudentsofgradeninehavetotakepartinthe

moment,

parentncouragedme:impossibleisnothing,youcould

challengeyourlf!sowiththeencouragementofthem,itried

ottothe

finishingline,ifeltproudofmylf,thoughididntgetthegood

mark,iknew,edamiracleformylfandiwasso

proudofmylf!

udofmylf

thewheeloflifehasrolledfastthroughthepastfifteenyears.

bylookingbackwards,i’msoproudofmylfbecaui’ve

hefirsttimeforme

t,ifeltmybodywas

wentby,tirednessmademystep

ytimes,theideaofgivingupthejourney

saying“accumulatedwater

becomesariver.”thepowerof

onestepemedsoweak,iinsistedonclimbingtothetop.

whenisucceeded,ifeltihadreachedanewheightinmylife.

howproudi’mofbeingastrong-mindedperson.