【主体段展开方法一:罗列法】
罗列法是英文写作中最基本的一种,掌握此方法有助于其他方法的掌握。要陈述一系列
的事实或观点时,可以把各项内容的相对重要性、危害性或利弊等按照逻辑顺序(重要性递
增或重要性递减)排列。为了避免句型的单调重复,需要采用句子的衔接与过渡手段
(transitionalsignals)。
一、有关事物的重要性
英美人士喜欢把最次要的放在最前面,最重要的放在最后面,这种递进法使展开部分
达到高潮,会给读者留下深刻的印象。
WhyWeNeedn’tWorryTooMuchAboutAids
NowadayspeopleturnpaleatthementionofAids,fortheythinkitismore
dangerousthancancerinthatcancerisnotinfectiousbutAidsisininfectious.
Actuallyitcanbepreventedandweneedn’remany
factorsthatmayaccountforthisstatement,butthefollowingarethemost
typicalones.
First,theAidsvirusisinfectedthroughblood,saliva(涎,唾液)andxual
aswedon’tabudrugthroughintravenousinjection(静
脉注射),kissorhavexualintercourwithanAidspatient,wecanprevent
s,he
humanbodyitwillsoondie,orewewillnotbe
importantofall,notbeinfected
somecountriesthereisnospecialisolationward(隔离房)forAidspatients.
Inconclusion,solongasweknowitsregularity(规律),wecanpreventAids.
Ifwetakeprecautions(预防措施),wewillnotcontract(感染)Aids.
衔接与过渡手段(transitionalsignals)
1)表示“首先”
first
firstly
firstofall
tobeginwith
inthefirstplace(后接inthecondplace)
foronething(后接foranother)
2)表示“第二”、“此外”、“其次”、“况且”
cond
condly
besides
what’smore
furthermore
inaddition
inadditionto+第一点(用名词短语概括的内容)
another+名词短语
anadditional+名词短语
besides+名词短语
3)表示“最后”
Finally
不可用atlast或intheend
(4)表示“最重要的是”
Themostimportantreasonis…
mostimportantofall
aboveall
themostesntial…
(5)表示“总之,总而言之”
onthewhole
inconclusion
inshort
inbrief
inaword
insummary
tosummarize
tosumup
(6)表示“纵上所述”
fromtheforegoing
fromwhathasbeendiscusdabove
fromtheaboveanalysis
【Assignment】QualitiesofsGoodStudent
二、有关事物的危害性
TheHarmfulEffectsofGlobalWarming
Itisreportedfromdifferentmediathatglobalwarmingcouldbringabout
anumberofriousproblems.
Tobeginwith,risingglobaltemperaturesareexpectedchangeprecipitation
ificreportshavealreadyproventhatrising
globaltemperaturescouldalterforests,cropyields,andwatersuppliesandthat
thereislikelytobeanoveralltrendtowardmoreintenrainstormsinoneplaceand
driersoilsinanother.
Tomakematterswor,as,not
justmajorcities,couldeanincreainthepollutantsandahigherfrequencyand
dalsoaffectanimalsandmanytypesof
fall,globalwarmingcouldcontributetotherisingofalevel,
endangeringordestroyingcoastalareaslikeIndonesia,wheremorethan45million
peopleliveatcoastalelevationswithinameterofalevel.
Therefore,globalwarmingisoneofthemostriouschallengesfacing
nomicandenvironmentalreasons,andabovealltosave
humanlives,weshouldtakedrasticmeasurestopreventthisproblem
becomingwor.
三、有关事物的利弊
讨论事物的利弊时,可采用以下套路:
【套路1】
Nowadays,所要讨论的话题_(_单词或短语____)_plays/playanimportant
role/partinpeople’erythingel,______所要讨论的话题_______
has/lly,theadvantages
canbelistedasfollows.
First,第一个好处(完整的句子)
______________________________________________________________
____________________.Besides,___第二个好处_(完整的句子)
______________________.Mostimportantofall,第三个好处___(完整的句子)
______________________________________________________________
_______________________.
avorableaspectsarealsoapparent.
Tobeginwith,第一个坏处__(完整的句子)_______________________.Tomake
matterswor,
第二个坏处__(完整的句子)___________________.Worstofall,第三
个坏处__(完整的句子)________________________________.
From/Throughtheaboveanalysis(Fromwhathasbeendiscusdabove),
Ibelieve/Iamconvincedthatthepositiveaspects/theadvantagesoutweigh
thenegativeaspects/ore,结论
_____________________________________________.
【套路2】
Recently,thereisconsiderablediscussionon/about/withregardto_
所要讨论的话题(_单词或短语____)_______.Likeeverythingel所要讨论的话题(_
单词或短语____)_______has/havebothfavorableandunfavorableaspects.
Generallyspeaking,theadvantagescanbelistedasfollows.
First,第一个好处_(完整的句子)
_________________________________________________.Inaddition
/furthermore/moreover,第二个好处_(_完整的句子)_____________________.
Mostimportantofall,第三个好处__(_完整的句子)_______________________
______________________________________________________________
___________________.
avorableaspectsarealsoapparent.
Tobeginwith,第一个坏处_________________________.Tomakematters
wor,
第二个坏处
_____________________________________________________.Worstof
all,第三个坏处__________________________________.
From/Throughtheaboveanalysis,(或:Fromtheforegoing/Fromwhathas
beendiscusdabove)Ibelieve/Iamconvincedthatthepositiveaspects/the
advantagesoutweighthenegativeaspects/ore,
结论__________________________________________.
【套路3】
Nowadays/Recently,所要讨论的话题_(_单词或短语)____playsan
importantpartinourdailylife/ispopularwith/among/
everythingel,______所要讨论的话题_______has/havebothfavorableand
lly,theadvantagescanbelistedasfollows.
Inthefirstplace,第一个好处(完整的句子)
______________________________________________________________
____________________.Inthecondplace,第二个好处_(完整的句子)
______________________.Mostimportantofall,第三个好处___(完整的句子)
______________________________________________________________
_______________________.
avorableaspectsarealsoapparent.
First,第一个坏处__(完整的句子)_______________________.Tomakematters
wor,
第二个坏处__(完整的句子)___________________.Worstofall,第三
个坏处__(完整的句子)________________________________.
Nowtheconclusionislf-evident.所要讨论的话题hasbothproblemsand
benefits/(或:Alongwithitsbenefits,所要讨论的话题hasalsoanumberof
ore,结论_______________________________________
_____________.
【例文】
OntheInternet
Nowadays/Recently,theInternetplaysanimportantpartinour
dailylife/ispopularwith/among/erythingel,
lly,the
advantagescanbelistedasfollows.
Inthefirstplace,internethasgreatlyenhancedourworkefficiency,
especiallyinourdailybusinessactivities.
Inthecondplace,theInternetenablespeopletocollectmoreandmore
portantofall,it
istheInternetthatismakingourworldsmallerandimprovingtheunificationof
globaleconomy.
avorableaspectsarealso
,alotofstudentsspendanexcessiveamountoftimeonthe
Internet,matterswor,
fall,some
peoplemaycommitcrimesontheInternetandmakesomecompaniesoreven
somecountriessufferavereeconomicloss.
ernethasboth
problemsandbenefits/(或:Alongwithitsbenefits,TheInternethas
alsoanumberofproblems).Therefore,Itisadvisablethatsomerulesofthe
thiswaycanwe
enjoytheadvantagesoftheInternet.
【套路4】
陈述句,说明所要讨论的话题的重要性.Averycoinhastwosides,所要讨论
的话题llyspeaking,theadvantagesof所要讨论的话题
canbelistedasfollows.
Tobeginwith,第一个好处(完整的句子)
______________________________________________________________
____________________,andwhatismore,(【注】如果用Furthermore/
Moreover/Inaddition替换“andwhatismore”,习惯上将and前的逗号改为句号“.”)
第二个好处_(完整的句子)______________________.Mostimportantofall,第
三个好处___(完整的句子)
______________________________________________________________
_______________________.
Whilewementiontheadvantagesof所要讨论的话题,wecannotignore
y,第一个坏处__(完整的句子)_________________.
Tomakematterswor,第二个坏处__(完整的句子)
___________________.Worstofall,第三个坏处__(完整的句子)
________________________________.
Inconclusion,whethergoodorbad,thetendencythat具体说明什么趋势
ore,结论
______________________________________________________________
_______.
【例文】
OntheInternet
TheInternet,asasymbolofmoderncivilization,isplayingavitalpart
ycoinhastwosides,the
llyspeaking,theadvantagesofthe
Internetcanbelistedasfollows.
Tobeginwith,internethasgreatlyenhancedourworkefficiency,
rmore,theInternetenables
peopletocollectmoreandmoreufulinformationwithinaveryshortperiodof
portantofall,itistheInternetthatismakingourworld
smallerandimprovingtheunificationofglobaleconomy.
WhilewementiontheadvantagesoftheInternet,wecannot
,alotofstudentsspendanexcessiveamount
oftimeontheInternet,matters
wor,fall,
somepeoplemaycommitcrimesontheInternetandmakesomecompaniesor
evensomecountriessufferavereeconomicloss.
Inconclusion,whethergoodorbad,thetendencythattheInternet
isappealingtomoreandmorepeoplecannotbestoppedatleastinafew
ore,ItisadvisablethatsomerulesoftheInternetbelaid
wayalonecanweenjoythe
advantagesoftheInternet.
四、解决问题的方法(Howto…题型)
【套路1】
目前的现象及存在的问题(2至3个句子)
______________________________________________________________
__________________________________.
Manywayscancontributeto要解决的问题,butthefollowingonesmay
bemosteffective/ofall,第一种方法__(完整的句子)
__________________________________________________________.In
addition,第二种方法(不定式短语)_____________.Finally,第三种方法__(完整
的句子)_________________________________________
Tho/Thearenotthebestandtheonlythreewayswecan
houldbenotedthat使用这些方法时要注意的事项
____________________________________________.
【例文】
HowtoEliminateFakeDiplomas
Nowadays,injobmarkets,employersinallwalksoflifelay
great/considerableemphasisontheircandidates’educationalbackground.A
growingnumberofcandidates,however,areusingavarietyoffakediplomas.
It’sunfairthatonefailstogethisjobjustbecauhisrivalhasgotafake
ore,fakediplomasdogreatharmtothejob
market.
Manywayscancontributetosolvingtheriousproblem,butthe
followingonesmaybemosteffective/fall,companiesand
universitiesshouldhaveaclocontactsothatfakediplomascannotplaytricks.
Inaddition,theonewhofabricatesthefakediplomasshouldbeverely
y,theoneusinga
fakediplomainekingemploymentshouldbedisqualifiedfromthejobmarket
yteachalessontoothers.
Tho/Thearenotthebestandtheonlythreewayswecanadopt.
Butitshouldbenotedthatweshouldtakestrong/vigorous/effectiveactionsto
prohibitfakediplomas.
【例文】
HowtoEliminateFakeDiplomas
Itisreportedthefloodingoffakediplomasisbecomingariousproblem
ployerslaymuchemphasisontheircandidates’education
background,avarietyof/differentkindsofdiplomamerge/appearinsociety.
Itisunfairthatonefailstogethisjobjustbecauhisrivalhasgotafake
ore,fakediplomasdoharmtothejobmarket.
Manywayscancontributetosolvingthisproblem,butthe
followingones,inmyopinion,fall,
companiesanduniversitiesshouldhaveaclocontactsothatthefake
tion,thowhofabricatethefakediplomas
y,
thowhoturnto/u/resorttofakediplomasinfindingjobsshouldbe
ygive
alessontoothers.
Thearenotthebestandtheonlythreemeasureswecantake.
Butitshouldbenotedthatweshouldtakestrongactionstoprohibitfake
diplomas.
【套路2】
目前的现象及存在的问题
.Inordertosolvethisproblem,veralmethods
mightbeadopted.
Oneoftheis第一种方法
.Anotherapproachis__
第二种方法.Themosteffective
methodis第三种方法
.
Inconclusion,themethodsIhavementionedaboveshouldneverbe
paratedfromeachother.希望
.
.
【例文】
HowtoSolvetheHousingProblem
ordertosolvethisproblem,veralmethodsmightbeadopted.
Oneoftheisthatmorehousshouldbeconstructedtosatisfythe
,however,thereisnotenoughspacein
thecenterofcities,rderforsuburban
houstobecomebetterplacesforpeopletoinhabit,itisnecessary/advisable
Toestablish/build/tupcorrespondentfacilitiessuchasbuslines,schools,
rapproachistorenovatealltho
metoenhancethequalityofhousandtoimprovethe
teffectivemethodistheimprovement
ansforbuyinghousshouldbeaccessibleto
governmentshouldmakerulestodecreatherentso
thatvacantroomscanbeavailabletolow-incometenants.
Inconclusion,themethodsIhavementionedaboveshould
relyhopethateffectiveactions
ner,thebetter.
【Assignment】
HowtoSolvetheProblemofOverpopulation
【作文预测】
HowtoEliminateFalAdvertiments
Nowadays,someadvertirstakeadvantagesofnewspapers,radioand
televisionprogramstodofaladvertimentswhichboasttheirproductsby
dvertiments
misleadconsumersanddamagethecreditofbusiness.
Manywayscancontributetosolvingthisriousproblem,butthe
fall,beforetheyare
published,alltheadvertimentsmustbecensoredbytheauthorities
ertiments
mustbeobjectiveandscientificandirrelevantpropagandamustbeforbidden.
Besides,themassmediashouldbeadvidnottoacceptanyadvertiments
ouldbelectiveanddiscriminatingin
y,lawsshouldbepasdtorestrainfal
rpublishesfaladvertimentsmustbearthelegal
responsibility.
shouldbenotedthatweshouldtakestrongactionstoeliminatefal
advertimentsandprotectconsumers’interests.
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