adolescence

5月6日............................................................................................................1

犯罪类话题...............................................................................................1

小站版.......................................................................................................1

雅思哥版...................................................................................................2

唐老雅版...................................................................................................2

新东方版...................................................................................................3

5月13日..........................................................................................................3

社会类话题...............................................................................................3

小站版.......................................................................................................3

雅思哥版...................................................................................................4

唐老雅版...................................................................................................5

新东方版...................................................................................................5

5月20日..........................................................................................................6

犯罪类话题...............................................................................................6

小站版.......................................................................................................6

雅思哥版...................................................................................................7

小雅版.......................................................................................................7

5月6日

犯罪类话题

探讨年轻人犯罪如何处置

小站版

Nowadays,tr

todeterthistendency,somepeopleadvocatethatlikeadults,thoyoungoffendersaresuppod

sIamconcerned,thispracticeisfeasibleonthe

conditionthattheycommitcriminalwrongdoingsmorethanonce.

Itisgenerallybelievedthatmanyyoungpeoplegoastrayduetoalackofproperlegaleducation.

Obviously,someofthemdonothaveaclearunderstandingoftheconquenceofbehaviorswhen

uchacircumstance,enforcingthemtoattendlaw

coursratherthanstiffpenaltyrvesthepurpoofeducatingthemtheimportanceofobeying

ult,itislesslikelyforthemtopofuturedamagetothesocietyand

innocentcitizens.

Inaddition,lesareabletogainthe

nofachievementandenoughattentionthroughengaginginactivitiessuchasfendingforthe

elderlywhochildrenlivefarawayfromthem;doinglaundryandcleaninginnursinghomeorjust

urveyindicatedthatthemotiveofrepeated

juveniledelinquencyismainlytoprovelf-value,thissofterpunishmentenablesthemtobecome

productivesocialmembersandmakecontributionstothecommunitydevelopment.

Ontheotherhand,thatisnottosaythatthounderagecriminalswhocanneverlearnthelesson

andkeepc

fairnessofjusticesystemwillbedoubtedbypeopleifitforgivesalawbreakeragainandagain.

Therefore,nomatterhowyoungtheoffenderis,committingriouscrimescondlyderves

equivalenttreatmentasadults.

Inconclusion,Ibelievethatnaiveandyoungascriminalsare,rigorouducationandchances

r,ifonlytheybehavecriminallyagain,thereisnoexcuto

escapefrombeingpunishedasadults.

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雅思哥版

Juveniledelinquencyisbecomingincreasinglycommoninmanycountriesandhowtopreventit

inion,youngcriminalsshouldbepunishedbylaw,but

theirageandtherootcauofthisproblemshouldalsobeconsidered.

Itiscustomarypracticeinmanypartsoftheworldtotreatjuveniledelinquentsdifferentlyfrom

becauthesocietyismorelenientwithyoungpeoplewhomakemistakes.

Adolescenceisaspecialperiod,inwhichyoungpeopletendtolacklf-controlandtheabilityto

eygrowuptoadults,manyofthemwouldcometorealizehow

ore,iti'reasonabletomitigatethe

punishmentwhendealingwithyoungcriminals,sincetheirdamagetothesocietyisnotasrious

asthatofadultcriminals.

Inaddition,ifwelookintotheunderlyingcausofjuveniledelinquency,itisthefamilyandsocial

families,parentsare

toobusytosupervichildren'sgrowth,ortheirpermissivenesncourageschildren'swrong

_programsandvideogamesinundatedwithviolencealsocontributetotheincreasing

efactorstakenintoconsideration,itemsunjustifiedtotreatyoung

criminalsinthesamewayasadults.

Overall,youngoffendersshouldbepunishedbylaw,particularlywhentheircrimespoathreat

r,theminors'rightsneedtobeprotectedandthepunishment

onthemshouldbedifferentfromthatonadults.(268words)

唐老雅版

Itisarguedthat,whenateenagercommitsacrime,evenariouscrimesuchasrobberyorxual

molestation,dofbeing

putintoprison,asthepeoplewouldsuggest,theyoungcriminalshouldbeorderedtodosome

ontrarytothispopularbelief,

Ithinkallcriminals,nomatterhowyoungtheyare,shouldbeputintojailandhowlongtheyshould

staytheredependsontheverityoftheircrime.

Firstly,prisonisagoodplaceforyoungpeopletothinkagainwhatwrongtheyhavedonetoother

tintojail,theyoungpeoplewillhavelittletodobutreadandthinkabouttheir

realsomanypeoplewhowillhelptheyoungpeopleunderstandwhywhattheyhave

way,theyoungcriminalswillhaveabetterchance

ontrary,iftheyarejustorderedtocommunityrvices,they

mayverylikelyenduprepeatingtheirmistakes.

Secondly,fortheyoungcriminals,theirexperienceinprisonmayhelppreventthemfrom

eyhavebeenputintojail,theywillneverforgetthixperience.

So,nexttimewhentheythinkofdoinganythingwrong,theirmemoryoftheprisonwill

oryofdoingcommunityrvices,Ibelieve,

doesnothavethisfunction.

Therefore,myopinionisthat,likeanadultlawviolator,theteenagershouldalsogotoprisonhe

commitsriouscrimesbecauthixperienceinprisonmayenablethemtobecomeabetter

ormsofpunishmentmaybeuful,yetIdonotthinktheyareaffectiveasprison.

新东方版

Itissonally

believethatthisispartlyreasonable.

Ontheonehand,thowhoparticipateinviolentcrimesshouldnotbetreateddifferentlythan

becaumostcrimes,suchasrapeormurder,arethoughtful,deliberate

ourtstrendtowardamorelenientposition,then

thult,

teenagersarelikelytocommithorriblecrimessincetheyareawarethattheyhavelegalprotection.

What’swor,cas,the

lighterntencingmightalsoleadtorentmenttowardsthejudicialsystemasvictimsmightargue

uldalsoresultinincurity

inoursocietyeventually.

Ontheotherhand,thecircumstancesofacrimeanditsmotivationshouldbetakeninto

mple,becauofdistressandhunger,

his

circumstance,harshpunishment,ew,

mostoftheyoungoffenderslackparentingandlf-discipline,whichwouldmeanthatother

alternatives,suchascommunityrviceandrehabilitationmightbebetteralternativesforthem.

Inconclusion,Ifeelthatitisvitallyimportantforjudgesandstatelegislatorstoensurethejustice

equalityregardlessofthecriminal’sage.

5月13日

社会类话题

探讨进口食品利弊的问题

Insomecountries,itispossibleforpeopletohaveavarietyoffoodimportedfromalloverthe

extentdoyouthinkitsbenefitsoutweighthedrawbacks?

小站版

Thankstothedevelopmentoftransport,consumersnowadayscanpurchanumerouskindsof

mmyperspective,themeritsofthistrendoutweigh

thedemerits.

分析利弊型文章，建议同学们首段改写题目后直接提出自己的观点，不仅可以让考官快速地

把握住整篇的中心思想，也更加符合英文思维习惯。

Thispracticedoesbringaboutdownsides,

weallknow,thealienfoodsaremostlytransportedbyplanesandplanesarepoweredbyfossil

fuels,uently,themoreexoticfoodpeople

consume,irpollution,theemissionsfromaircraftshave

becomeaverepollutionandoneoftheemissions,greenhougashavebuiltupinthe

atmosphere,contributingtothealreadyvereglobalwarming.

主体段第一段先让步，承认这种现象会带来弊端，本段从两方面分析了弊端，一是能源消耗，

二是空气污染，注意两个层次之间要自然的衔接(第二项评分标准高分段的要求)。第一点很

好理解，没有做过多的论述，第二点运输过程中导致的空气污染有很多，本段举了一个例子，

飞机飞行中产生的温室气体。

Ontheotherhand,ifresidentshaveeasyaccesstomorekindsoffood,itwillimproveindividuals’

sly,localswillhavemorechoicesoffoodwithsomanycategoriesofvegetables

mple,asidefromlocalfruitslike

applesandstrawberries,nowinhabitantsinEnglandcanenjoyduriansplantedinSoutheastAsia,

ult,peoplecanenjoyahigher

standardofliving.

主体段第二段转折，论述好处之一，人们可购买的食物总类的多样性增加了人们的幸福感。

接下来再次使用举例论证，说明英国人民吃到了热带水果榴莲后如何地幸福感爆棚(注意这

里用的是canenjoy，并没有很绝对，毕竟并不是所有的腐国人民都热爱榴莲的)。再次强调，

建议同学们多使用举例论证，举例论证真的是人见人爱，花见花开，可易可难，可接地气可

装逼，适合所有分数段学生的完美论证方法。

Apartfromthat,theintroductionofalienfoodcanalsoboosttheagriculturaleconomic

edwithlocalprotectionism,competitionisabetterapproachtoinject

vitalityinthelocaleconomy,whichmeansstiffcompetitiondrivesthemerchanttokeepoffering

betterproductswithlowercosts.

第三个主体段和上一段是并列关系，介绍第二个好处，促进当地经济发展，这段的观点相对

深了些，如果同学们考场上时间富裕，可以多论述一些的。但笔者比较懒，看字数够了，就

没再写了，毕竟用了对比论证，比较了地方保护主义和引入外来商品，再阐述了一番也是可

以论证充分了。

Inconclusion,whilethispracticegivesritoenergyconsumptionandairpollution,the

problemscanbesolvedwiththeadvanceoftechnologyinthefutureandthebenefitsitbringsare

morefar-reachingfromallaspects.

结尾段总结自己观点，建议同学们在表达观点时一定不要含蓄，要简单粗暴地清晰地告诉考

官你的观点是什么!让步状语从句是个好的选择，既总结了全文的三个点，又表达了自己的

倾向。

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雅思哥版

Thedays,peoplefinditeasytohaveaccesstoawiderangeoffoodproducedfromotherareas.

Toalargeextent,thephenomenongeneratesmorebenefitsthandrawbacks.

Intermsoftheadvantages,themajoroneisthatpeople'shealthconditionwouldbeimprovedby

ast,thowholivedininlandareaswerenot

theycanoftenreplaceredmeatwith

radvantageistheexchangeoffood

betweendifferentareashelpsbreakdownprejudice,Forexample,cheeudtobeenas

Asiancooksandchefsaddcheeinlocal

cuisinesandcreateanewriesOfdishes,socheegraduallybecomesacceptableforindividuals

andfamilies

Astothedisadvantages,

days,youngAsiansaremorefascinatedbysnackslikechocolate,icecreammadeinothercountries,

andtheynolongerpayattentiontothetypesofsnacksthattheyudtobuyfromlocalproducers.

However,companiestakeadvantageofthetrend

andpromotetheexchangeproperly,therewillbeaprosperousfutureahead.

Inconclusion,itismorebeneficialtoencourageinter-regionalfoodbusinessascustomersaregiven

ghtheremightbeconcerns

aboutpotentialthreatstolocalfoodproducers,Ibelievethetrendwillnotcontinueandadaptation

isneeded.279words

唐老雅版

30yearsago,AmericanfastfoodsuchasMcDonald,KFC,andSubwaywasbasicallyunheardofin

China,butnowtheyhavebecomeeverydaywordstomostChinepeopleandChinahasprobably

theintroductionof

foreignfoodisnotwithoutnegativeeffects,Idothinkitispositivetoboththeindividualconsumers

andthefoodindustryasawhole.

Withgreatervarietyoffoodcomingfromoutside,wecanenjoyabetternutritionalstructureand

llknowthateggplantsandpotatoesare

vitaltoourhealth,butveryfewknowtheywereoriginallygrowninMexicoandIrelandandwere

mportedfoodhasofferedusmore

dofjusttakingsoybeanmilk,manypeopletodayhavecowmilk;instead

ofjusttakingbreads,manypeoplenowhavesandwichesaswell.

Somepeoplemayarguethattheimportationofforeignfoodmayimpairthelocalfoodindustry.

enmanylocalfoodbrandsbecomeobsoletewhen

r,Ibelievetheintensified

competitionresultingfromthearrivaloftheforeignfoodisbeneficialtothelong-term

developmentofthelocalfoodindustry,becauitwillcompelthelocalfoodcompaniestoimprove

thequalityoftheirproducts,whichinturnwillmakethemmorecompetitiveintheglobalmarket.

Thus,thepossibilityofhavingagreatvarietyofimportedfoodisafavorableopportunitytoboth

,therefore,advisableforustoembrace

thisdevelopment,ratherthanrejectingit.

新东方版

Theadvancedtransportationandmorediverfoodpreferencerenderitpossibleandnecessary

lartosomeextentitmightbe,

Idonotsuppothatitisawichoicetofollowthistrendwithoutcondthought.

Thefood,cultivatedandntfromotherplaces,canoffermorechoicesfortheordinarycustomers

becautheiroptionsforfoodarenotonlyconfinedtotheirhome-produced

vegetables,fruitsandmeat,

cansubquentlyintensifythecompetitionbetweenthefoodsuppliers,andthecustomerscan

enjoyarelativelylowerprice.

However,comparedwiththebenefitsthispracticecanprovide,leadingalifethatdependsonfood

fromotherareascan

localfoodmeansthatthedistancefromfarmtotableisshorterandrendersthetransportation

tlongdistancetransportationoffood,theemissionofexhaustwillbecutdown

eantime,delivering

foodfromoneplacetoanotherwillconsumeahostoffuelsbecaulorriesorvansaredrivenby

energies,itisreallynotsoinsightfultoputsuchaheavyburdenonthetransportationonlyforthe

enjoymentofmorefood.

Inconclusion,thelocalfoodissufficienttosustainthelocalstohaveabalanceddietandhealthy

life,moretransportedfoodcandolittleelandevenbringaboutsomeenvironmentalproblems.

5月20日

犯罪类话题

探讨暴力犯罪的预防方法

Thegovernmentshouldcontroltheamountofviolenceinfilmsandontelevisioninorderto

extentdoyouagreeordisagree?

小站版

Itisundeniablethatmassmediageneratesignificantimpactsonpublicthoughtsandbehaviors,

thereforeviolent

ordertoresolvethissocialissue,somecitizenspropothatitisthegovernmentthatshould

regulatetheamountofviolenceinthoprograms.

oughthereisnoscientificevidence,

itiscommonnthatbeingexpodtoaplentyofcriminalwrongdoingsportrayedinfilms

’swor,offendervenlearncriminalmeansfromthe

movies,suchashowtokillvictimsinoneshootaswellashowtoabuthehostageinmostcruelest

soworthmentioningthatadolescentswhoareattheagewhichfeaturesthestrong

abilityofimitationandalackofawarenessofabidingbylawstendtogoastrayorbeinvolvedin

sly,undersuchacircumstance,thereisnodoubtthattheauthoritymust

shouldertheobligationtocensorthofilmsorTVprogramswhichcontainexplicitscenesof

a,thispracticeisstrictlyimplementedanddoesrvethepurpoofdiminishing

thenumberofcrimeincidents,especiallyinmetropolis.

Converly,itisunderstandablethatgovernment’sinterferenceexploitstherightoffreespeech

rwords,directorsorscriptwritersaretheones

wr,as

ThomasHobbes(aBritishpoliticianandphilosopher)explainedthattheattainmentoflibertyis

badontheguaranteeofcommonbenefits,sothisviewdoesnotwithstoodthescrutiny.

Inconclusion,asfarasIamconcernedrigorouscensorshipshouldbeenforcedbygovernmentso

s,large-scaleeducationalcampaigns

aimedatenhancingpublicawarenessofobeyinglawsandregulationsaresuppodtobelaunched.

Onlyinthisway,canthesocialcuritybestrengthened.

(343words)

雅思哥版

watchTVore

r,somecannothelpwonderingwhethertheincrea

inthecrimeratesisresultofviolenceportrayedinmoviesorTVriesandwhetherthe

governmentshouldintervene.

PeopleagainstanyformofcontrolWthegovernmentmightappealtotherightoffreespeech.

Theirviewisthatpeopleshouldbegiventherighttodowhatevertheylikeaslongastheydo,not

somightarguethatmediaarefreetoplaymoviesOrTVriesrelated

toviolenceandcrimesaslongasthereisnoconcreteevidencetosuggestcrimeactsportrayedin

r,thisviewdoes

notwithstandcloscrutiny.

Evenifthereisnoiscommonnthatmostcriminalsmusthavebeenexpodtoagreatdeal

emoviessomeOfhavelearnttou

rwords,eventhough

criminalactsarenotthedirectresultofviolentendcriminalmovies,mediaareanindirectfactor.

ttheabilityto

distinguishtherightfromthewrong,

conqountryin

thewtrauma

thatcriminalscauvictimscanbynomeansbecompensated.

Inconclusion,Iagreewiththeviewthatthegovernmentshouldtakemeasurestocontrolthe

amountofviolenceinmoviesorTV,becauthemoviesdoexertnegativeinfluenceonthepublic

andthevereconquencesofcrimesmakeitnecessaryforthegovernmenttakemeasures.

小雅版

Violentcrimeisasocialillthathasnoeasycure,whereassomesuggestthegovernmentcanreduce

reewiththisviewandinsteadIwillargue

thatviolenceonscreensdoesnotnecessarilycontributetoviolenceinreallife.

somepeoplevoicealarmeingmoreandmoreviolentscenesdisplayedinfilmsorTV

heirargumentsmaybethatthe

bombardmentsofromantidviolencemayndawrongmessagetothemassthatviolenceis

rpossibleargumentisthatsomewannabe

offendersmayuwell-craftedviolentdetailsassomekindoftextbooks,guidelinesandsourceof

alcagoesasfollows:agangcopiedthecruelbut

cunningtricktomakemoneyoutofinnocentlivesfromapublicreleadfilminChinaabouttwo

professionalkillersmurderingfellowminers,disguisingitasamineaccidentandswindlinga

fortunefrommineowners.

Butasweapproachthisissuemorecloly,infact,filmsandTVaregreatmediumtoinformand

educateaswellantertain,erwaythanavividscreen

depictionofviolencecanteachusthebarbarityandnlessnessofitlf,andthetragicoutcome

soaneffectivedeterrencetocrimesincemoreoftenthannot,violenceon

rnotablepointislifeon

screenscanofferavaluablevicariouxperienceandthusmakeupforthesorrinessfelton

ingtheimaginedviolence

audiencedofindanopeningtoventtheirnegativefeelingsandthatcatharsiffectisrealgood.

Therolethegovernmentshouldplayhere,Ibelieve,istheintroductionandenforcementofa

untrieshavealreadyestablishedproperonesandIsuggestthe

mofartisticcreatingandaworthyconcernforviolencecontentson

susceptibleaudiencelikeyoungchildrencaninclusivelycoexist.

Inconclusion,violenceonscreensisnotblameforviolentcrimesinoursocietyandwhatthe

governmentreallyshoulddoisformulatinganeffectiveratingsystemandrevisingitcontinuallyto

thebestpossibleversion.