recreational

大学英语四级写作续智贤

四级考试题型比例

听力（35%）阅读（35%）、完型填空或改错（10%）、作文和翻译（20%）。

四级考试各题型分值

听力249分，阅读249分，完型填空或改错70分，作文142分。

2020年6月四级范文

Recreationalactivities

1娱乐活动多种多样

2娱乐活动可能令人们受益，也可能有危害性

3作为大学生，我的观点。

Recreationalactivitiesneverfailtofascinatehumanbeings,wealwaysconsiderrecreational

activitiesassomethingtorelaxourlvesorsomethingthatcanaddcolortothedullroutineof

everydaylife.

Mostofus,however,ople

lneverfeel

fewillalwaysbecolorful.

holdtheopinionthatrecreational

activitiestakeuplimitedpreciousstudents’timewhichcanotherwibeudforstudy.

Therefore,resultsinpooracademicperformanceandlf-humiliation.

thoroughconsideration,for

mypart,hethingsthatfascinatesmemostabout

recreationalactivitiesisthepopularbeliefthatthey,byoccupyingsparetimeso

constructively,makesapersoncontented,withnotimeforboredom!

LimitingTheUofDisposablePlasticBags

1.一次性塑料袋曾被普遍的利用

2.造成的问题

3.限制利用的意义

eryouwanted

tobuysomething,

recentlytheproblemsofusingdisposableplasticbagshavebeenbroughtintopublicfocus.

Forastart,ourenvironmenthasbeengreatlypollutedbyso-called“whitepollution”,thetruth

reasonisnotfartoek,thebagsarethrownawayafterthefirst

u,andweoftenethebagsflyingintheskyinwindydays.

What’smore,plasticbagsmaydogreatharmtoourhealth,formostofthemaremadeofsome

hcasoftenappearinnews

broadcastorinnewspapers.

Inthelightoftheriousness,t

limitontheusingofdisposableplasticbagshasbeentakenofficially,notonlyinbig

supermarketsbutinsmallshopsaswell.

Admittedly,thislimithasmadeitpossibleforthepublictorealizetheimportanceof

environmentalprotectionandenableweChinepeopletocherishthebeautyofour

ile,tosomedegree,thechancesthatwewillbeknockeddownbysome

certainillnessareremote.

结构合理三段式;中心突出主题句；层次清楚导航语；辞汇闪光亮点句。

写作经常使用角度生活角度

wealwaysconsiderrecreationalactivitiesassomethingtorelaxourlvesorsomethingthat

canaddcolortothedullroutineofeverydaylife.

排列组合

Sthwillmakeourlifemoreenjoyable,thatistosay,sthcanaddcolortothedullroutineof

everydaylife.

生活的乐趣

Forthemajorityofpeople,readingorlearninganewskillhasbecomethesourceoftheir

happinessandcontentment

对大多数人来讲，阅读或学习一项新技术已成为他们欢乐的来源

Furthermore,studentslivingintheirownhomewouldhaveaccesstoacomfortablelifeand

havemoreopportunitiestocommunicatewiththeirparents,whichhavebeneficialimpacton

developmentoftheirpersonalcharacter.



而且，学生生活在自己家中，有舒适的生活，并有更多机遇和父母交流，这对他们个性的培

育是有利的。







时刻角度

Collecting,byoccupyingsparetimesoconstructively,makesapersoncontented,withnotime

forboredom.

Itprovidesrelaxationforleisurehours,asjustlookingatone'streasuresisalwaysajoy.

Aproperpart-timejobdoesnotoccupystudents’,itisunhealthyfor

dsayinggoes:AllworkandnoplaymakesJack

adullboy.

What‘smore,livinginschoolcansavethemagreatdealoftimeonthewaybetweenhomeand

schooleveryday,sotheywouldbeabletoconcentratemoretimeandenergyontheiracademic

work.



而且，生活在学校里能节省大量天天来回于学校和家的路上的时刻，这会使他们有更多的时

刻和精力放在学习上。





Furthermore,studentslivingintheirownhomewouldhaveaccesstoacomfortablelifeand

havemoreopportunitiestocommunicatewiththeirparents,whichhavebeneficialimpacton

developmentoftheirpersonalcharacter.



而且，学生生活在自己家中，有舒适的生活，并有更多机遇和父母交流，这对他们个性的培

育是有利的。



知识角度

Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatly

broadened.

Forpeoplewhowanttoadoptahealthyandmeaningfullifestyle,itisimportanttofindtime

anoldsayinggoes:itisnevertoolatetolearn.

关于那些想过上健康而成心义的生活的人们来讲，找时刻学习一些新知识是很重要的，

正如那句老话：活到老，学到老

Themajorityofstudentsbelievethatpart-timejobwillprovidethemwithmoreopportunities

todeveloptheirinterpersonalskills,whichmayputtheminafavorablepositioninthefuture

jobmarkets.

大部份学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机遇进展人际交往能力，而这对他们以后找工作是

超级有益处的。

Manyparentsa

studies,theymaintain,theirchildrenareabletoobtainmanykindsofpracticalskillsanduful

knowledge,whichwillputtheminabeneficialpositioninthefuturejobmarketswhenthey

growup.

许多家长相信额外的教育活动有许多优势，通过学习，他们的小孩能够取得很多实践技

术和有效的知识，当他们长大后，这些对他们就业是大有益处的。

E角度

Bytakingamajor-relatedpart-job,studentscannotonlyimprovetheiracademicstudies,but

gainmuchexperience,experiencetheywillneverbeabletogetfromthetextbooks.

通过做一份和专业相关的工作，学生不仅能够提高他们的专业能力，而且能取得从讲义

上得不到的体会。

Nowpeopleingrowingnumbersarebeginningtobelievethatlearningnewskillsand

knowledgecontributesdirectlytoenhancingtheirjobopportunitiesorpromotionopportunities.

此刻愈来愈多的人开始相信学习新的技术和知识能直接帮忙他们取得工作就会或提升的机

遇。

健康角度

Nowpeopleingrowingnumbersarebeginningtobelievethatsomecertainsportscontribute

directlytoourbodyhealthbygivingussomephysicalexercis.

主题句的写法

Manypeoplebelievethatinternationaltourismproducepositiveeffectsoneconomicgrowth

andlocalgovernmentshouldbeencouragedtopromoteinternationaltourism.

许多人以为国际旅行对经济进展有踊跃作用，应鼓舞地址政府进展国际旅行。

主题句一

Sthisveryimportant.

Sthisofgreatimportance.

Sthplaysanimportantroleinpeople’slife/study

主题句二

Sthcanproducepositiveeffectson…inmorethanoneway.

Sthmaybringaboutnegativeimpactson…

全能理由之坏处

TVtakesuplimitedpreciouschildren’stimewhichcanotherwibeudformorevaluable

ore,resultsinpooracademicperformanceand

lf-humiliation.

现在，很连年轻人沉醉在电脑游戏中，以至于夜以继日，产生了许多消极结果。

Manyyoungsterstodayaresopreoccupiedwithcomputergamesastoforsakefoodand

sleep,resultinginahostofadverconquences.

坏处之---压力

…Underconsiderablepressurefrom…therefore…willonlyaddtotheirburden.

坏处之---钱，精力

…callsformoneyandenergy,bothofwhicharenotaffordableforus.

坏处之---环境污染

Pollutionposagreatthreattoourexistence.

污染对咱们的生存造成庞大要挟。

Someofthe…arepoisonousanddangeroustohealth.

坏处之---犯法

…arelikelytocommitacrime

个性，技术，孤僻，心理

Moreover,childrenwillhavelesstimetoplayandcommunicatewiththeirpeersduetoextra

studies,conquently,itisdifficulttodevelopandcultivatetheircharacterandinterpersonal

ybecomemoresolitaryandevensufferfromcertainmentalillness.



而且，由于要额外地学习，小孩们没有多少时刻和同龄的小孩玩耍和交流，很难培育他们的个

性和交际能力。他们可能变得孤僻乃至产生某些心理疾病。

全能理由之重要性

Ptit,nothing

couldeverbebroughttoaconclusion;everythingwouldbeinastateofchaos.(抽象)

Keepingmentalhealthisanimportantconditioninallpublicaffairsincivilizedsociety,

titnothingcouldbebroughttoaconclusion,everything

wouldbeinastateofchaos.

Andrecentlytheissueofdisorderinbrainshasbeenaroudwideconcernoncampus.

具体

Itiswidelyacknowledgedthatcomputerandothermachineshavebecomeanindispensable

partofoursociety,whichmakeourlifeandworkmorecomfortableandlesslaborious.

人们普遍以为运算机和其他机械已经成为咱们社会必不可少的一部份。它们使咱们的生活更

舒适，减少了大量劳动。

机遇

Assheisnotrich,thechancesthatshewilleverbeabletoaffordsuchpurchasareremote.

2020年12月四级

Thechancesthatwewillbeknockeddownbysomecertainillnessareremote.

2020年12月六级

Therefore,thechancesthatIwillsufferfrommentaldiaareremote.

全能理由之喜爱

Catsneverfailtofascinatehumanbeings.

Thelatestsurveysshowthatquiteafewchildrenhaveunpleasantassociationswith

homework.

最近的调查显示相当多的小孩对家庭作业没什么好感。

Aninvestigationshowsthatfemaleworkerstendtohaveafavorableattitudetoward

retirement.

一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。

全能理由之阻碍

Antiqueshopxertagreatfascinationonagreatmanypeople.

2020-6四级写作

Recreationalactivitiexertagreatfascinationonagreatmanypeople.



2007-12六级写作

Digitalproductshaveexertedaprofoundinfluenceonusinmorethanoneway.

2020-6六级写作

Additionally,e-productxertasubtleinfluenceontheteenagers,becauofthis，theyoften

prefertochoomoderne-booksthantraditionalbooks

全能理由之表示结论

Fromwhathasbeenmentionedabove，wecancometotheconclusionthat...

Fromwhathasbeendiscusdabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthat

Fromwhathasbeendiscusdabove,Iamfullyconvincedthat



从上述讨论中，咱们能够自然地得出如此的结论_______

Fromwhathasbeendiscusdabove,wemayreasonablyarriveattheconclusionthat

_________.

单一内容，论述好坏

Fromwhathasbeendiscusdabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthatadvantagesof

bicyclefaroutweighitsdisadvantagesanditwillstillplayesntialrolesinmodernsociety.

通过以上讨论，咱们能够得出结论：自行车的优势远大于缺点，而且在现代社会它仍将发挥

重要作用。

单一内容，趋利避害

Computersdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople’lives,despiteasliceof

ld，therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheopposite

facet.（有替换表达）

Whatwemustdoistoencouragethestrengthanddiminishtheweaknesstotheleastextent.





咱们必需尽可能发挥其优势，趋吉避凶。

单一内容，无伤无害

Inaword,digitalproducts,likeeverythingel,havebothfavorableandunfavorableaspects.

Whatevereffectstheyhave,onethingiscertain:digitalproductsinthemlvesareneithergood

eustowhichitisputthatdeterminetheirvaluetothesociety.

单一内容，发表观点

Fromwhathasbeendiscusdabove,wemaysafelydrawaconclusionthatpart-timejobcan

produceafar-reachingimpactonstudentsandtheyshouldbeencouragedtotakepart-timejob,

whichwillbenefitstudentsandtheirfamily,eventhesocietyasawhole.

通过上面的讨论，咱们不宝贵出结论：业余工作对学生们会产生深远的阻碍，咱们应鼓舞学

生从事业余工作，这将有利于学生和他们的家庭，乃至整个社会。

二、全能短语

欣赏大自然的风光

toappreciatethesceneryofnature

欣赏古典文学

toappreciatetheclassicalliterature

开拓视野

tobroadenthehorizon

开拓心胸

tobroadenthemind

扩大知识面

expandone’sofknowledge

graspgoodcommunicationskills

把握良好的交流技术

启发心灵

toenlightenthemind

陶冶道德

tocultivatethecharacter

培育公德心

tocultivatethepublicmindedness

cultivateastrongnofresponsibility

培育了强烈的责任感

undertakethedueobligations

承担责任

promotesocialskillsandcompetence

提高了社会能力和竞争力

保护健康

tomaintainhealth

松散身心

torelaxonelf

调剂生活

tomakelifepleasant

提升生活质量

topromotethequalitiesoflife

提升生活的水平

toraithestandardofliving（比较少）

增加生活的乐趣

toincreathepleasuresoflife

解除紧张和焦虑

torelievethetensionandanxietybothfromthesocietyandtheschoolwork

lightentheburdenof

减轻了…的负担

financialburden

burden

经济/心理负担

较好地驾驭生活

beabetterpilotofone’slife

关切社会

tobeconcernedaboutthesociety

奉献国家

tocontributeonelftothecountry

adaptonelftothedevelopmentof

使自己适应…的进展

面临困难

tobeconfrontedwiththedifficulty

克服困难

toovercomethedifficulty

注意卫生

toemphasizetheimportanceofhygiene

重视：

attachmuchimportance/significanceto

对．．．有利

tobebeneficialto

对．．．有害

tobeharmfulto

采取步骤

totakesteps

totakemeasures

有很深的了解

tohaveadeepunderstandingof

有普遍的知识

tohaveawiderangeofknowledge

giveabigpushtothedevelopmentofeducation

给予教育极大的推动

扮演重要角色

toplayanimportantrolein

强烈愿望

expressastrongdesireto

Accordingtoarecentsurvey,agrowingnumberofpeopleexpressastrongdesiretotake

anotherjoborspendmoretimeontheirjobinordertogetmoremoneytosupporttheirfamily.

依照最近的一项调查，愈来愈多的人表达了想从事另外的工作或加班以赚取更多的钱来补助

家用的强烈愿望。

不遗余力

tosparenoeffortsto

不辞辛劳

totakethepainsto

竞争与合作精神

nofcompetitionandcooperation

经不起推敲

cannotbearcloranalysis

cannotholdwater

社会进步的反映

mirrorofsocialprogress

提高公共的环保意识

promotethepublicawarenessofenvironmentalprotection;

aroupeople’sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection

考虑到诸多因素

takemanyfactorsintoaccount/consideration

从另一个角度

fromanotherperspective

在人类生活的方方面面

inallaspectsofhumanlife

社会进步的表现

asymbolofsocietyprogress

社会进步的反映

mirrorofsocialprogress

科技的飞速更新

theever-acceleratedupdatingofscienceandtechnology

日趋猛烈的社会竞争

theincreasinglyfiercesocialcompetition

有其自身的优缺点…

hasitsmeritsanddemerits

advantagesanddisadvantages

把时刻和精力放在…上

focustimeandenergyon…

许多问题：

ahostofproblems

接触社会：

comeintofrequentcontactwiththesociety

全能模板对立观点型

背景句

展现问题

问题的经常使用词：question,problem,issue

第一段

,theissueof......hasbeenbroughtintopublicfocus.

近来，_______的问题引发了社会的普遍关注。

Recentlytheissueof(whether…ornot)hasbeeninthelimelight（成为引人注目的中心）and

hasaroudwideconcerninthepublic.

近来，是不是_______的问题已经超级明确而且引发了社会的普遍关注。

Alongwiththeadvanceofthesocietymoreandmoreproblemsarebroughttoourattention,

oneofwhichis....

随着社会的不断进展，显现了愈来愈多的问题，其中之一即是____________。

Nowweareenteringabrandnewerafullofopportunitiesandinnovations,andgreat

changeshavetakenplaceinpeople'sattitudetowardssometraditionalpractice.

此刻咱们进入了一个充满机缘和创新的崭新时期，很多人对某些传统的观点也发生了专门

大改变。

______已成为人的关注的热点话题，专门是在年青人当中，将引发猛烈的辩论。

______hasbecomeahottopicamongpeople，especiallyamongtheyoungandheateddebates

arerightontheirway.

改写题目

“花开两朵”句型

Mostofus，however，haveformedanunrealisticpictureoflifeonadertisland.

Mostofus，however，haveformedadifferentpictureof…somepeoplethinktheyare

beneficial,whileothersholdtheoppositeview.

第三句

Andwerarelyreachanabsoluteconnsusonsuchacontroversialissue.

关于这种极具争议的话题，咱们很难作出绝对的回答。

Peoplefromdifferentbackgroundswouldputdifferentinterpretationsonthesameca.





不同行业的人对同一种问题的说明不尽相同。

第二段

Somepeopletaketheattitudethat…canproducepositiveeffectsonus

Thowhohavealreadybenefitedfrompracticingitsinghighpraiofit.

Firstofall…

Furthermore…

What’smore…

第三段

Theothersideofthepictureisquitetheopposite.

Othersharbortheideathat,…maybringaboutnegativeimpactsonus.

Thowhostronglydisapproveof...havecogentreasonsforit.



Foronething,

Foranother,

第四段

第四段

Perhapsthereisanelementoftruthinboththepictures.

AsfarasIamconcerned,Iaminclinedtobeonthesideoftheformerview.

在我眼里，我较同意前一种观点。

Afterathoroughconsideration,formypart,Iaminfavoroftheformerview.



通过沉思熟虑，我较支持前一种观点，

Oneofthethingsthatfascinatesusmostaboutcatsisthepopularbeliefthattheyhavenine

lives.

处置方式二

Frommyownperspective,computersdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople’

lives,ld，therefore,takeadvantageofthefruits

andavoidtheoppositefacet.

Whatwemustdoistoencouragethestrengthanddiminishtheweaknesstotheleastextent.

问题解决型

注意：

该题目不是针对问题的争议性，针对问题产生的缘故和解决方法

背景句相似，二三句不同

Whatarethecausandsolutionsoftheproblemofthescarcityofwaterresource?

背景句：

Recentlytheissueof(whether…ornot)hasbeeninthelimelightandhasaroudwide

concerninthepublic.



改写题目：关注缘故：

Anumberoffactorscouldaccountfortheproblem,butthefollowingarethemostcriticalones.

或

交待讨论内容：

Therearesomefactorsleadingtothisproblem.

Anumberoffactorsareresponsibleforthisproblem.

Someofthemostcommonfactorswillbediscusdbelow,followedbysomeresponsible/reasonable

solutions.

Firstofall….

Furthermore…

What’smore….

法律，意识

Inviewoftheriousnessofthisproblem,effectivemeasuresshouldbetakenbeforethings

getwor.

Foronething,itisntialthatlawsandregulationsbeworkedoutandenforcedto

ban/reduce…

Foranother,thepublicshouldenhancetheirawarenessoftheimportanceof….

Withthemeasurestaken,itisreasonableforustobelievethattheproblemcaudby…

willbesolvedinthenearfuture.

给定观点型

一种观点或观点

一

Nowadays,with现象，peoplearebecomingincreasinglyawareofthesignificanceof主题辞.

Inmypointofview,改写题目.

Therearenumerousreasonstosupportmypointofview,andIwouldexploreonlyafewof

themostimportantoneshere.

Oneoftheprimarycausisthat支持论点的理由

Anotherreasonthatcanbeenbyeverypersonisthat支持论点的理由，论述理由

Takingintoaccountofallthefactors,wemaydrawtheconclusionthat重述题目.

Therefore,提出意见或建议

TheImportanceofKeepingaGoodMood

Nowadays,withthesurgingcasofmentalproblem,committingsuicide,orkillingreported.

Peopleint

ofview,re

numerousreasonstosupportmypointofview,andIwouldexploreonlyafewofthemost

importantoneshere.

Oneoftheprimarycausisthatkeepingagoodmoodhelpsyoutogetalongwellwithothers.

ayinggoes“Abad

workmanalwaysblameshistools.”

Anotherr

uareintroubleoffrustration,youshouldtakeitina

reasonablewayandovercomeitassoonaspossible.

Takingintoaccountofallthefactors,wemaydrawtheconclusionthatkeepingagoodmood

bringsyounotonlyfriendship,ore,weshouldlearntolookatthings

fromapositiveangle,facechallengeandpressurewithoptimisticattitude.

图表型

依照图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图能够看出______。很显然

______，可是什么缘故呢？

Accordingtothe

figure/statistics/percentagesinthechart

itcanbeenthat______.

butwhy?

Anumberoffactorscouldaccountforthechangeinthechart,butthefollowingarethemost

criticalones.

Anumberoffactorsareresponsibleforthis.

Firstofall…

Furthermore…

What’smore…

Inaword,thischartisaperfectindicatorof…Althoughariesofproblemshavearinin

theprocess,itisreasonableforustobelievethattheycanbesolvedinthenearfuturewith

effectivemeasurestakenbyboththegovernmentandthepublic.

Fromwhathasbeendiscusdabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthat...

Itishightimethatweplacedgreatemphasison...

Thereislittledoubtthatfurtherattentionmustbepaidtotheissue.

若是咱们不能采取有效的方式来操纵时态，一些不行的结果就会显现，因此咱们应该做的是

_______。

Ifwecannottakeufulmeans,wemaynotcontrolthistrend,andsomeundesirableresultmay

comeoutunexpectedly,sowhatweshoulddoisto_____.

解决_______问题的简易方式不是唾手可得。可是对_______的普遍熟悉可能是超正确方向迈出

的第一步。

Noeasymethodcanbeathandtotheproblemof________.Butthecommonrecognitionof

theimportanceof______mightbethefirststepontherightway.

只有含泪播种，才能含笑收成

坚决你一切的道，修平你脚下的路