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ildren

sufferbecautheydonotgetasmuchattentionfromtheirparentsaschildrendidinthepast.

Inthemodernsocietytoday,hissituation,

manychilIadmit

ofchildrengetmorecomfortablelifethanbefore,alsochildrenprobablyhavinghigherlivingstandardas

heless,whatarethechildrenreallywant?Isthemoney?Isthecomputer?Oristheattention

fromtheirdadormom?Theotherwi,whatdoestheparentswanttoleaveinthechildhoodoftheir

children?

Inmyopinion,Iagreewithmanychildrendonotgetmuchattentionfromtheirparentsaschildrendidin

tion,Iunderstandtheparentswishtogivingbetterlifetotheirchildren,therefore,they

workharderthanbefore,becauofthis,theparentslostthetimetoaccompanywiththeirchildrenand

unabletopayattentiontotheirchildrenasthechildrendidinthepast,butIthinkthemostimportant

thinkingis“therearenotthingimportantthantheattentionfromtheparentstochildren”.Weshould

knowtherichmateriallifecan’arents’responsibilities

istakegoodcaretotheirchildren,alsoparentsshouldspendmoretimetoteachchildren.

Inconclusion,modernlifestylechangedrelationshipbetweenparentsandchildren,manyparents

misunderstandthemeaningofbringupofchildren,theythought“bringupofchildren”meansgiving

moneytotheirchildren,uallyittotallywrong,themost

importantpartofbringupmustbepayattentiontochildren,carethem,teachthem,notonlyspendmoney

ofthem.

dmorequalifiedpeoplearemovingfrompoortorichcountriestofillvacanciesin

specialistareaslikeengineering,oplebelievethatbyencouraging

themovementofsuchpeople,feelthatthis

isonlypartofthenaturalmovementofworkersaroundtheworld.(braindrain)

Theso-called‘braindrain’frompoortorichcountriesisnowrobbingpoorercountriesofesntial

personnellikedoctors,nurs,engineers,andthetrendisttocontinue,ifnottogetwor.

Somtworkers

havealwaysbeenattractedbythewiderchoiceofemploymentandgreateropportunityinmajorcitiesin

ly,asthetechnologicalagehasadvancedandasrichercountries

findthemlveswithnotenoughworkerstofeedtheirdevelopment,theyhavehadtoruntootherpartsof

cherEuropeancountries,forexample,arenowtrying

toattractskilledITworkersfrommyhomecountryIndiabyofferinghighersalariesthantheycouldhope

eglobalisationoftheworld（加’s）economy,manypeoplefeelthatthe

processcannotbestopped.

Others,mylfincluded,areoftheopinionthatmeasuresshouldbetakentoaddresstheproblem,by

compensatingpoorercountriesfinanciallyforthelossofinvestmentinthepeopletheyhavetrained,like

edly,thismaybecumbersometoadminister,butanattemptcouldbemadeto

rstep,whichinparthasalreadybeguntohappen,istoutheforcesof

ncountriescouldencouragepeopletostayintheirowncountriesbydirect

investmentinprojectslikecomputerfactoriesorbyndingpatientsabroadfortreatment,asisalready

happening.

Itisobviouslydifficulttorestrictthemovementofpeoplearoundtheworldanditisprobablyfoolishto

trytostopit,butattemptsshouldbemadetoredresstheimbalance.

ersandmodemshavemadeitpossibleforofficeworkerstodomuchoftheirworkfrom

gfromhomeshouldbeencouragedasitis

goodforworkersandemployers.

Inrecentyearsthevastexpansionofinformationandcommunicationstechnologyhasmadeteleworking

ghinmanycasofficeworkerscouldbemadegeographicallyindependent

byusingmodems,faxesandcellphones,fewcompaniesoremployeestakefulladvantageofthis

possibility.

Therearycostsfor

employerswouldbereducedbecaubusinesswouldrequirelessofficespace,whichisoftensituated

ly,worker'

example,theywouldnotneedtotraveltogettowork,whichwouldgivethemmorefreetime.

Also,theycouldcombinetheirworkwiththeirfamilylife,whichisamajoradvantageiftheyareparents

therhand,travelingtoacentralized

stisthatmanyemployeeswouldmissthesocial

erpointisthatemployerswould

needtobeabletotrusttheirworkerstoworkatahighstandardandfinishtheirworkontime,since

supervisingteleworkersivenmorecomplicatedthansupervisingworkersinthesameoffice.

Finally,workingfromhomemightinhibitteamworkandcreativeworkandsoperhapssoonlyreally

suitableforpeopledoingroutineofficework.

Inconclusion,Ibelievethatwhilemanyworkerswelcometheopportunitytogoouttowork,others

ossible,Ithinkworkersshouldbe

offeredthechoice,butnotforcedtoworkfromhomeunlesstheywishto.

ysmanystudentshavetheopportunitytostudyforpartoralloftheircoursinforeign

tudyingabroadbringsmanybenefitstoindividualstudents,italsohasanumber

ofdisadvantages

Inrecentyearsther

ispartlybecaupeoplearemoreaffluentandpartyduetothevarietyofgrantsandscholarshipswhich

ghforeignstudyisnotsomethingwhichevery

studentwouldchoo，itisanattractiveoptionformanypeople.

y，itmaygivestudentsaccesstoknowledge

andfacilitiessuchaslaboratoriesandlibrarieswhicharenotavailableintheirhomecountry.

Furthermore，bylookingabroadstudentsmayfindawiderrangeofcoursthanthoofferedintheir

country'suniversities，andthereforeonewhichfitsmoreclolytotheirparticularrequirements.

Ontheotherhand，aybedividedinto

y，studentshavetoleavetheirfamilyandfriendsforalongperiod.

Furthermore，studyingabroadisalmostalwaysmoreexpensivethanstudyingatone'slocaluniversity.

Finally，studentsoftenhavetostudyinaforeignlanguage，whichmaylimittheirperformanceand

meantheydonotattaintheirtruelevel.

Inmyopinion，however，thedisadvantagesofstudyingabroadareusuallytemporaryinnature.

Studentswhostudyabroadgenerallybecomeproficientinthelanguagequitesoonandtheyareonly

rmore，manyofthebenefitslaststudentsall

theirlivesandmakethemhighlydesirabletoprospectiveemployers.

oplefeelthatcertainworkerslikenurs,doctorsandteachersareundervaluedand

shouldbepaidmore,especiallywhenotherpeoplelikefilmactorsorcompanybossarepaidhuge

sumsdo

youagree?Whatcriteriashouldbeudtodecidehowmuchpeoplearepaid?

Itisundeniablethatcertainjoboccupationssuchasnurs,doctorsandteacherscontributegreatlytoour

society,buttheirincomesemtobeundervaluedcomparingtofilmactorsorcompanybosswhoare

enomenonarouspublicdiscussiononwhatfactorsshouldbe

consideredtodeterminepeople’ssalary.

Somepeopleholdtheviewthatnurs,doctorsandteachersareunderpaidastheirimportanceofthe

workareunderestimated,butIdon’tagreewiththem.

Firstofall,frwords,

thowhoare

specific,numerouspeopledesiretobecomefilmstars,

onlydidtheyworkhard,butalsotheyneedgoodluck,opportunities,uationis

workasfilmsstarsandcompanybosshave

toendurehugepressure,irregularworkinghoursandinadequatesleeping.

Ontheotherhand,professionssuchasnurs,doctorsandteachersrequirecorrespondingeducation.

Withrelevantdegree,s,therisksandstressarequitemanageable.

Ithinktherearealotoffactorsthatshouldbetakenintoconsideratetodecidehowmuchpeoplearepaid.

Personalfactorsincludeeducationalbackground,relevantworkingexperience,skills,actors

areinclusiveofindustrydevelopment,workinghoursandintensity,inion,we

shoulddevelopamethodtomakeacomprehensiveasssonpeople’arnings.

communicationandtransportcontinuetogrow,societiesarebecomingmoreandmore

oplefearthatglobalizationwill

extentdoyouagreeordisagreewith

thisstatement?

Globalizationmeansthatinsomewayspeoplearoundtheworldarebecomingmoreandmoresimilar.

Weofteneatthesamefood,watchthesameTVprograms,listentothesamemusicandwewearthesame

thisatleastcanbeblamedonthespreadofmultinationalbrandsavailablealloverthe

world.

Onthesurface,i,the

argumentgoes,peopleinTokyoandLondonlookanddressthesame,thenthatmustmeanthatcultural

r,Iwouldarguethatthisisaverynarrowdefinitionofcultureand

thatinfactculturaldifferencesareasprentaver.

Culturalndation

ulookindetailatdifferentcultures,yourealizethatthe

thingsthatareimportanttooneculturecanbeverydifferentfromthethingsvaluedbyanotherculture.

Takemyownculture,India,asanexampleandcompareittoaverydifferentculture,gh

IhavenevervisitedJapanpersonally,Ibelievethatitisaculturewhichplacesalotofvalueonhardwork

ianpeople,incontrast,greatlyvaluetheirleisuretime

weconsumethesame

products,Iwouldarguethattherearestillsomeverydeep-rooteddifferences.

Tosummarize,Idonotacceptthatthattotallossofculturalidentityisinevitable,despitetheinfluence

oflargecompaniesandtheirproductsaroundtheglobe.

countriesyoungpeoplehavelittleleisuretimeandareunderalotofpressuretowork

youthinkarethecausofthis?Whatsolutionscanyousuggest?

vetherearetwomaincausof

stisparentalpressureandthecondiscompetitionforuniversityplaces.

Everyparentwant

meansthatthen

ncountry,itisnotuncommonforyoungpeopletospend

anotherthreequence,

theirleisuretimeixtremelylimitedandthepressureonthemisconsiderable.

ar,therearemanytimesmore

ultofthisisthatonlythostudentswith

ntributestothepressureonteenagerssincetheymust

worklonghourstohaveanychanceofsuccess.

Onesolutiontotheproblemisforparentstobemadeawareoftheeffectsofthepressuretheyputon

sshouldinformparentsthattoomuchpressurecanleadtoanxiety,stressand

ouldbeshownwaysinwhichtheycanhelptheirchildrenleadmorebalancedlives

withareasonableamountofleisuretime.

Anothereffectivemeasurewouldbeforthegovernmenttoinvestinthecreationofmoreuniversity

uldhave

theeffectofeasingcompetitionforplacesgivingteenagerssomeoftheirpreciousfreelimeback.

istsandthenewsmediaareprentingevermoreevidenceofclimatechange.

eresponsibilityofindividualsto

eyourviews?

Recentlyscientistsworriedaboutclimatechangehaveurgedgovernmentstointroducemeasuresto

aneously,politiciansand

envarguethat

governmentsandindividualsshouldtakejoinresponsibilityforthisproblem.

Firstly,industryaccountsforalargeproportionofthegreenhougamissions,andthiscanonlybe

escouldbetakentodiscouragepollution,suchaslimitingor

atively,subsidiescouldbeofferedtoindustriestocleanuptheir

eideaswereadopted,Ibelievethatbusinesswouldregardpollutionasa

financialissue.

Secondly,onlyto

agreement,forexample,tsuchco-

operating,itemstomethateffortstoreducefuelconsumptionareunlikelytobeeffective.

However,nationalandinternationalpolicieswillonlysucceedifindividualsalsochangetheirlifestyle.

Forexample,gless

electricity,installingenergy-efficientlightbulbsandelectricalappliances,orinvestinginsolarpanels,

individualscanmakearealdifference.

Inaddition,dofmakingshorttipsbycar,

peoplecouldchootowalk,cycle,arsareamajorsourceoftheproblem,changing

ourbehaviourinthisareawouldhaveamajorimpact.

Inconclusion,Iwouldmaintainthatonlyacombinationofinternationalagreement,nationalpolicies,

andchangesinindividualbehaviourwillsucceedinpreventingfurtherdamagetotheenvironment.

havinganalarmingeffect

rsneedtoavoidusingcomputersintheclassroomatallcosts

greeordisagree?

countriesstudentsno

longerhavetocopynotesbyhandfromtheblackboard;insteadtheteachergivesthemaphotocopy.

Ratherthanmessyinkandpen,omputer

,somepeoplebelievethatmoderntechnologydoesalotof

ourthinkingforusand,asaresult,wearegoingtoloourabilitytothinkforourlves.

Inmyopinion,youngpeopleu

mobilephonestondtextmessageswherespeedandconcinessaremoreimportantthanspellingor

acherscomplainthatthestudentstakethesameattitudetowardtheirassignments.

Ontheotherhand,y,Ifind

s,forexample,havea

reputationforillegiblehandwriting,sitistime

wefocudnotonhandwritingbutonprentinginformationasaccuratelyaspossible.

OneadvantageofcomputersisthataccesstotheInternethasopenedupanewworldoflearningforus.

Wenolongerhavetowaitforabookthathasalreadybeenborrowedfromthelibrarybeforewedoour

,theInternetcanclearlybeudtorearchinformationinthesamewayasalibrarybut

moreconveniently.

Onthewhole,ratherthanholdingstudentsback,Ibelievemoderntechnologyhasactuallyimproved

standardsofeducationconsiderably.

essuchasChina,many

expertsareoftheopinionthatthepopulation‘explosion’whichisnowaveryworryingconcern,is

mesuggestionstoaddressthisproblem.

Itistruethatthepopulation‘explosion’whichhastakenplaceoverthelastcentury,isaveryrious

hemainreasonsforthisunacceptablepopulationgrowthisalackofunderstanding

-populationisthemajorreasonforwater,so

shaveputforwardmanysuggestionstoaddressthis

lowingarejustafewofthe.

ouldstartatavery

oonsandchildren’sprogramscanbeudto

schoollevel,

universitylevel,scholarshipsshouldbemadeavailabletostudentswhowishtostudyfurtherinthisfield.

Internationalexchangegroupsmayalsohelptoincreaawareness.

Anotherimportantmeansofcontrollingpopulationgrowthistodisadvantagepeoplewhohavemorethan

nbedone,asitisinChina,ghitis

controversial,lsobe

possibletomakeitadvantageousforpeopletohaveonlyonechildbygivingsuchcouplesaspecialtax

deduction.

Itshouldalsobepossibletomakecontraceptiondevicesfreetothepublicandeasilyobtainable.

Thisprobremany

otherproblemswhicharerelatedtoover-populationsuchasincreasingcrime,

byaddressingoneproblemwewouldbeaddressingtheothersaswell.