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Waysofgettingalongwellwithyourroommates

Ifyouarelivingwithyourroommates,gettingalongwell

withyourroommatesisconsideredofimportance,becauyou

willspendmostofyourtimeinyourdormstudying,sleeping,

santwillnotonlymakeyourlife

influencedbutotherroommatesarealsounhappy.

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fall,youmustknowsomeinformationabout

gsomethingyour

roommatesdislikecouldhelpyoupreventsuchthingfrom

,ifyouhaveacommoninterestwithher,you

rgoodwayisthatyou

shouldbealwayswillingtohelpthemwhentheyneedyourhelp.

ably,wewillmeet

gyourroommatesis

utably,

communicationisabridgebetweenyouandyourroommates.

Spendingyourtimesharingyourdreamsandthoughtswithyour

roommateswillmakeyourrelationshipmuchclor.

Inaword,youshouldbetrustworthytoyourroommatesand

onywithyour

roommateswillhelpyoualot.

点评：本文行文流畅，结构严谨，按照总分总结构编排全

文，颇有条理。开篇以开门见山的方式直奔主题，中间主体

分成三大部分具体阐述了与舍友和谐相处的方法，有一目了

然的衔接词和衔接短语。最后总结全文，与开头相呼应。

不足之处：有少量语法及拼写错误。

望订正。