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英文满分作文：城市居民缺乏锻炼的原因及解决

题目：

Youshouldspendabout40minutesonthistask.

Writeaboutthefollowingtopic:

Itisdifficultforpeopleincitiestogetenoughphysicalexerci.

Whatarethecausandwhatsolutionscouldbetakentosolvetheproblem?

Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourown

knowledgeorexperience.

Writeatleast250words.

【话题分类】

社会生活类

【题目解析】

题目大意：城市中的人们得不到足够的锻炼。题目要求考生1）列出城市中的人

们得不到足够的锻炼，以及2）如何解决这一问题。

这个题目是“two-questionessay”题型，故全文需要四段，1）开头段（题目改

写+文章结构概述），2）主体1（回答第一个问题，2个点），3）主体2（回答

第二个问题，2个点），4）结尾段（总结全文）。

注意：主体两个段的篇幅需要基本一致。

【写作思路】

Para1=开头段–题目改写+文章结构

Para2=主体1

1）工作繁忙，2）运动设施不够

Para3=主体2

1）雇主提供工作生活平衡的工作模式，2）政府在社区修建更多运动设施

Para4=总结全文

【参考范文】

Nowadays,residentsinurbanareasfinditchallengingtoparticipateinphysical

saywillinitiallyexplainwhythisishappening,followedbysome

strategiestotacklethisissue.

Thereareprimarilytwofactorsbehindwhypeopledonotdosufficientphysical

nwith,more

moneyandgainpromotion,employeesalwaysworkextrahours,feelingexhausted

weekendsandholidays,theyprefer

onally,freesportquipmentinthe

neighbourhoodcannotsatisfyresidents’dincitiesismainly

occupiedbycommercialbuildingsandresidentialblocks,leavinglimitedspacefor

,theyarereluctantto

payforamembershiptoagymandthus,cannothaveenoughexerci.

Toresolvethisproblem,stoneisthat

er

words,ifindividualsdonotworklonghours,theyaremorelikelytosparesometime

todosportsonaregularbasis,insteadoffocusingmerelyontheirworktasks,which

rimportantpoint

toconsideristhatthegovernmentshouldallocateaproportionofthebudgettothe

llconsiderably

encouragemoreresidentstobewillingtotakepartinsomesportsactivitiesasit

makesitfreeforthemtoexerciaswellasmoreconvenient.

Inconclusion,beingoccupiedbyworkandalackofexerciequipmentarethetwo

mr,

ifpeoplecanenjoyabalancebetweenworkandlife,andsufficientexercifacilities

canbemadeavailablenearwheretheylive,thisissuecanbecopedwithinan

effectivefashion.