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英语（一）短文写作“魔”板

一、图画描述段

(一)一幅图描述段

Asisvividlydepictedinthephoto,人/物+动作+情景,whichsuccessfullycapturesoureyes.

Afteraclowatch,itisnotdifficulttofindthat人/物+动作+情景.Apparently,what

thedrawinghassubtlyconveyedissuppodtobegivenfurtheranalysis.

1.整体描述替换句

1)Asisvividlydepictedinthephoto,fourpersonsareplayingafootballgame.

2)Thephotovividlydepictsthatfourpersonsareplayingafootballgame.

3)Itisvividlydepictedinthephotothatfourpersonsareplayingafootballgame.

4)Asisvividlydepictedinthephoto,fourpersonsareplayingafootballgame,which

successfullycapturesoureyes.

2.细节描述替换句

1)Ifwegiveitaclorwatch,itisnotdifficulttofindthatthefootballinthecenter

ofthefieldistheirownfather.

2)Afteraclorwatch,itisnotdifficulttofindthatthefootballinthecenterof

thefieldistheirownfather.

3.过渡句替换句

1)Obviously,thedrawingshouldbegivenmoreconcern.

2)Obviously,whatthedrawinghassubtlyconveyedshouldbegivenmoreconcern.

3)Obviously,thesubtlyconveyedimplicationthataschildrenweshouldsupportour

parentsshouldbegivenmoreconcern.

(二)两幅图（相反）

Asisvividlydepictedinthefirstphoto,人/物+动作+情景,whichsuccessfullycapturesour

ontrary,thecondpicturedescribesthat人/物+动作+情景,finally

ntly,whatthetwodrawingshavesubtly

conveyedbytheirstrikingcontrastissuppodtobegivenfurtheranalysis.

1.第一幅图描述替换句

Asisvividlydepictedinthefirstphoto,alittleflowerisblossominginthegreenhou,

whichsuccessfullycapturesoureyes.

2.第二幅图描述替换句

Onthecontrary,thecondpicturedescribesthattheflowerisremovedoutofthe

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glasshouandisdyinginthewindandrain,finallycompletingthecontrastofthetwo

pictures.

3.过渡句替换句

1)Obviously,thedrawingsshouldbegivenmoreconcern.

2)Obviously,whatthetwodrawingshavesubtlyconveyedbytheirstrikingcontrastshould

begivenmoreconcern.

3)Obviously,thesubtlyconveyedimplicationthatchildrenshouldnotbeover-indulged

shouldbegivenmoreconcern.

(三)两幅图（相似）

Asisvividlydepictedinthefirstphoto,人/物+动作+情景,whichsuccessfullycapturesour

ameway,thecondpicturedescribesthat人/物+动作+情景,finallycompleting

ntly,whatthetwodrawingshavesubtlyconveyed

bytheiranalogyissuppodtobegivenfurtheranalysis.

二、寓意阐释段

(一)社会问题

Theoretically,veralreasonsmaytriggertheproblemconveyedinthepicture,butfor

mypart,opoflististhat+原因一.

Inaddition,iversallyadmitted

that+原因二.NoothercacanbetterillustratetheconquencesofwhatIhavediscusd

thanthepictureabove.

原因分析

经济：Anybehaviorhasprofoundeconomicmotivations,andsodoestheperformanceofthe

characterinthedrawing.

法律：Thecurrentstateoftheaffairdepictedbythedrawermayhavebeenencouraged,though

notjustified,bythelackoflegalpenalty.

认识：Thegeneralpublichavefailedtorealizetheimportanceof……andabigpartoftheir

attentionhasbeendistractedbytheso-called“greatevents”.

教育：Oureducationtendstostresstest-takingandmechanicallearning,overtheability

toconfrontrealisticproblems,includingthe……

(二)社会现象

1.利>弊

Withtheincreasingpaceofmodernlife,perhapsnochangehascharacterizedthepastdecade

moredramaticallythanthewidespreadof……Naturally,itbringsusbothadvantagesand

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ypart,opoflististhat

+利一.Inaddition,iversally

admittedthat+利二.NoothercacanbetterillustratetheconquencesofwhatIhave

discusdthanthepictureabove.

1)关键句

Withtheincreasingpaceofmodernlife,perhapsnochangehascharacterizedthepastdecade

moredramaticallythanthewidespreadof……Naturally,itbringsusbothadvantages

ypart,theformeroutweighsitslatter.

2)具体影响

➢Onthetopoflististhat+利一.Inaddition,thereistheotherpointthatnoone

iversallyadmittedthat+利二.

➢Tobeginwith,itisuniversallyadmittedthat+利一.Solongasyouregardthisanalysis

reasonable,rspecialconsiderationinthisca

3)结果分析

➢NoothercacanbetterillustratetheconquencesofwhatIhavediscusdthanthe

pictureabove.

2.弊>利

Withtheincreasingpaceofmodernlife,perhapsnochangehascharacterizedthepastdecade

moredramaticallythanthewidespreadof……Naturally,itbringsusbothadvantagesand

ypart,opoflististhat

+弊一.Inaddition,iversally

admittedthat+弊二.NoothercacanbetterillustratetheconquencesofwhatIhave

discusdthanthepictureabove.

(三)抽象品质

Whatthedrawerhasconveyedinthepicturecanbeclearlyandaccuratelysummarizedas

following:……withoutsayingthat

anyonewhoisinposssionofthequalityislikelytoovercometheobstaclesoflifeand

unately,thelackof……mayleadtothefinalfailure

injob,rcacanbetterillustratetheconquencesofwhatIhave

discusdthanthepictureabove.

1)关键句

➢Whatthedrawerhasconveyedinthepicturecanbeclearlyandaccuratelysummarized

asfollowing:……playsavitalroleinourdailylife.

2)作用分析

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➢Itgoeswithoutsayingthatanyonewhoisinposssionofthequalityislikelyto

unately,thelack

of……mayleadtothefinalfailureinjob,eveninlife.

3)结果分析

➢NoothercacanbetterillustratetheconquencesofwhatIhavediscusdthanthe

pictureabove.

三、个人评论段

(一)社会问题

Accordingtotheanalysisabove,itisadvisableforustotakestepstoreverthivil

hesteps,this

waycanweresolvethisproblemandembraceabrightfuture.

(二)社会现象

Accordingtotheanalysisabove,itisadvisableforustotakestepstomaximizeitspositive

hesteps,massmediatendstofunction

thiswaycanwemakethebestofthevalueof……andembrace

abrightfuture.

(三)抽象品质

Accordingtotheanalysisabove,itisadvisableforustotakestepstocarryforwardthe

hesteps,

thiswaycanwemakethebestofthevalueof……andembraceabrightfuture.

英语（二）短文写作“魔”板

一、图表阐释段

(一)柱形图

Itgoeswithoutsayingthatthechartrecords+标题,whichsuccessfullyarousour

earlyreflectedbythechart,指数havewitnesdsomechanges时

间.Especially,某指数haxperiencedthemostdramaticchange,jumping/dropping

from数字to数字from时间to时间.Obviously,theinclinations,clearlyreflected

bythechart,shouldbegivenmoreconsideration.

(二)表格

Thereisnodenyingthatthechartrecords+标题,whichsuccessfullyarousour

earlyreflectedbythechart,指数showtotallydifferentattitudes

towardstheissueof话题.Especially,某指数showsthemostobvioustendencythat具体

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表现.Obviously,thevariousinclinations,clearlyreflectedbythechart,shouldbegiven

moreconsideration.

(三)饼图

Asisclearlyreflectedbythechart,整体iscompodofveraltotallydifferent

portions,ally,部分gainsthepercentageof,

ally,部分gainsthepercentageof

andsodoes部分,whichalreadyoutweighsthatofalltheothers.

二、个人评论段（1）

Theoretically,veralreasonsmaytriggerthetrendthat最大变化/差异，butformy

part,opoflististhat+原因一.In

addition,iversallyadmittedthat

+原因二.

二、个人评论段（2）

Accordingtotheanalysisabove,itisobviousthatthetrendreflectedbythechart

intoaccountwhathasbeendiscusdabove,

wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthatthecurrentsituationwillcontinueinthe

forthcomingyears.