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高考英语一轮复习短文改错练习3

【英语卷(解析)·2015届河南省顶级名校高三入学定位考试（201408）】A

Once,ehedidnotwanttopay,sohehidin

pedthepersoninfrontofheronthe

shoulderandsay,“There’ebusdriver.”Themessage

ewherealongtheway,itwaschanged.

diatestoppedthe

epolicecame,theytoldthepasngersto

ult,atraffic

elpofadog,thepolicearchedfor

theyfoundnotomb.

【答案】【知识点】E1短文改错记叙文

【思路点拨】该题重点考查基础知识的应用，注意名词单复数，动词人称，形容词和副词的

变化，时态、语态等基础知识。

【答案解析】

去掉。becau为从属连词，不与并联连词so连用，故去掉so。

→him前文讲述的aman，故此处用him。

→said并列的谓语动词应用同样的时态，此句前谓语动词用过去时，此处也应用过

去时，故say改为said。

前加the此处toilet是双方都明白的，故用定冠词the修饰。

g→pasd句中的主语message为pass的动作承受者，故passing改为pasd。

dtell后跟双宾的及物动词，tellsbthat-clau，tell后无间接宾语，故

用被动语态。

ate→immediately。副词修饰动词stopped，故immediate改为immediately。

→and。并列的不定式，表示肯定含义用and连接。

→miles15修饰mile，故应用复数形式。

→with。在某人的帮助之下withone’shelp或者withthehelpofsb。

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【英语卷(解析)·2015届河北省唐山市高三9月模拟考试（201409）WORD版】

第一节短文改错（共10小题：每小题1分，满分10分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

ItwasayearagowhenJoshuagotabikeforChristmas,butherodeiteveryday．One

morning,hesuddenlyfoundthebikegone．Rantohisfrontyard,hesawamanloading

itintohiscar．Heshouted,butthemandriveoff．AsadevotedChristian,he

toldhisdadherealforgavethethief．What'smore,hewantedthethiefknowhe

wasforgiven．Sothenextday,hepostedthemessageonaposter-boardandputit

inthefrontyard．"Tothepersonwhostolemybike:Youhurtmyfeeling．ButI

amaChristianandIforgivehim!"Whenheleftforhomethenextmorning,atthe

endofthedriveway,thebikewasbackwithnewbrakes．

【答案】【知识点】E1短文改错记叙文

【文章综述】本文讲述一个善良的人用爱心感动盗贼的故事

【答案解析】

–that考查强调句。句意：一年前因为圣诞节周华得了一辆自行车。强调一

年前。

—and考查连词。句意：一年前因为圣诞节周华得了一辆自行，并且每天都

骑着它。两个句子之间是并列关系。

—Running考查非谓语动词。句意：他跑到前院，看到一个男人正在把他的自行

车装到他的车上。两个句子共用一个主语，he与run之间是主动关系。

—drove考查动词的时态。句意：他叫喊但那个男人开车跑了。But连接的两

个句子时态保持一致。

---really考查副词句意：作为一个虔诚的基督徒，他告诉父亲他真的原谅

了那个小偷。

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ef后面加to考查动词用法。Wantsbtodo想让某人做某事。

sage—a考查冠词。句意：因此第二天，他前院的海报上写一个短信；因为

第一次提到故用a.

g---feelings考查名词。句意：你伤害我的感情。Feelings表示感情。

—you考查代词。句意：但我是个基督徒，我原谅你。

r去掉for考查动词。句意：当他第二天早上离开家时。LeaveAforB离开

A地去B地。

短文改错

Iwasahighschoolstudentthen,fromlow-income76._______

77.__________

firstonejobwastocleantablesinasmallrestaurant.78.__________

Istillremembergoingthereearlyandfeltanxiousabout79.__________

dharderbecauIwasafraidof80.__________

t,Iwassometimesverytiredtodo81.

__________

metounderstandthatwasnot82.__________

easytoearnmoney,andknowledgecouldchange83.__________

Ilearnedfromthejob,inahard84.__________

way,wasmuchmoreimportantaswhatIearned.85.

__________

【参考答案】

Iwasahighschoolstudentthen,from∧low-income76.____a______

77.___had____

firstonejobwastocleantablesinasmallrestaurant.78.____去掉one___

Istillremembergoingthereearlyandfeltanxiousabout79.____feeling______

dharderbecauIwasafraidof80.___hard_______

t,Iwassometimesverytiredtodo81.

____too______

metounderstandthat∧wasnot82.____it______

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easytoearnmoney,and∧knowledgecouldchange83.___that____

Ilearnedfromthejob,inahard84.____√______

way,wasmuchmoreimportantaswhatIearned.85.___than____

短文改错

MycousinXiaoHongandIwentontriptomyuncle’s76._____________

ridingalongahillsidethensuddenly77._____________

somebigstoneswererolleddownandknockedusoffourbikes.78._________

XiaoHong’79._____________

couldn’ately,Isawsomefarmersahead.80.____________

Wavingourhand,ing81.____________

us,to82___________

theirhelp,wewereallnttoanearbyhospitalandreceived83.____________

ghwedonotknowabouttheir84.________

names,wefelltheylikeourdearbigbrothersandsisters.85._______

【参考答案】︿→when78were去掉

79rious→riously80.正确→→ran

→去掉︿are

短文改错

Oneday,Iwascookinginthekitchenas76．_______________

oanswerimmediately.77．_______________

Shewasmyclofriend,weretalking78．_______________

onaphone,cktothe79．_______________

mfullofsmokeandbeefwasbadly80．_______________

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lyturnedoffthegas,openingallthe81．_______________

windows,82．_______________

surpri,twofireengineswereoutsidemyhou.I83．_______________

boutthefirementhatit84．_______________

wasmycarelesscookingwhichcaudtheheavysmoke.85．_______________

【参考答案】

76．as→When77．answer后加it78．She→It

79．a→the80．room后加was

81．opening→opened82．With→To83．√

84．去掉about85．which→that

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在答题

卡该行右边横线上画一个勾（J）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横

线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横

线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改

正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。

George,

It'sbeenaweekafterweleftyourfamilyandwearenow76._______

ouverymuchforshowingthemaround77.______

78._______

wesaidgoodbyetoyou,wewenttoWashingtonD.C.,79._______

herwassomuchfond80._______

ofthemuumstherethathebeggedmyparentstostaying81．________

r,myfatherhadtoreturnto82.________

83．________

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'dliketomaketripto84._______

ourcitysomeday,Iwillbebetterthanhappytobeyourguide.85._______

Yours,

Mike

【参考答案】

---with79.正确

80.去掉---flew

前----more

(2013·甘肃省部分学校第二次联考)

I'maniorstudentfromChina,urfingtheInternet,

eatly

interest,I'dliketoapplyforthem.I'manoutgoinggirlwholikecommunicating

tenEnglishixcellent,either.

thing,I'mwillingtointroduceChinato

otherstudentsfromalloverworld;foranother,Iexpecttolearnfrommoreabout

tion,I'nceissoprecious

asI'mreallylookingforwardtoyourapproval.

答案：

I'maniorstudentfromChina,aging

aged

urfingtheInternet,

greatly

great

interest,I'dliketoapplyforthem

it

.I'manoutgoinggirlwholike

likes

can

tenEnglishis

excellent,either

too

.thing,I'mwillingto

introduceChinatootherstudentsfromallover∧

the

world;foranother,Iexpectto

learnfrom＼tion,I'dliketomakefriend

friends

.The

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chanceissopreciousas

that

I'mreallylookingforwardtoyourapproval.

短文改错

en76.

realllefthome77.

atearlyage,78.

hadtodothewashing,r,79.

yedourhappylife.80.

Atweekends,wewouldplaybasketball,swimminginthepool81.

t82.

neofushadany83.

difficultyinourlifeandstudy,theotherwouldhelphimout.84.

Ithasbeenfiveyearswhenwegraduated,butthomemories85.

areassweetaverbefore.

【参考答案】

at∧earlyage,

hadtodothewashing,r,79.

ourlves

yedourhappylife.80.

helpless

Atweekends,wewouldplaybasketball,

t82.

treated

neofushadany83.√

difficultyinourlifeandstudy,theotherwouldhelphimout.84.

others

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Ithasbeenfiveyearswhenwegraduated,butthomemories85.

since

areassweetaverbefore.

短文改错

over

76._______

theworldmenandwoman,77._______

longago,manyadultsandchildrencalledtheirfriends

together

78._______

tospendhours,hereasons

whypeople

79._______

otherwords,

80._______

ople

are

81._______

playinggames,howsportsaregood

activities

82._______

funwiththeirfriendsmakethem

happy.

83._______

American

84._______

bigcities,thousandsllticketstowatchfootballor

basketballgames.

85._______

【参考答案】

－－前加had

9

-playing80．正确

-why

-makes84.去掉-buy