2013年英语四级作文

范例一

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:AttendYourClassRegularly。

Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChine.

1.现在大学校园里，迟到、早退、旷课是常见的现象

2.保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性

3.作为一个大学生应该怎样做

AttendYourClassRegularly

Nowadaysitisaverycommonphenomenonthatsomeuniversitystudentsarelatefororevenabntfrom

lltttendance

hasbecomeathornyproblemtoboththestudentsandteachers.

Infact,,itwillensureyoutocatch

veryhelpfultoyouifyouwanttodoagoodjobinyourstudy.

Second,attendingclassregularlyisawayofshowingrespecttoyourteachers,acherswillfeelbad

ifthestudentsdonotattendtheirclass,which,inturn,willaffecttheirteachingandbenogoodforthe

,attendingclassregularlywillhelptoformagoodhabitofpunctuality,whichisofgreat

importanceforthestudentstodoagoodjobinthefuture.

Therefore,weuniversitystudentsshouldformthegoodhabitofattendingourclassregularlyfromnow

edaywe’llbenefitfromit.

点评：2008年元月三日，中山大学博士发帖称遭导师虐待；2008年元月四日，中国政法大学爆“杨帆

门”事件；近几年，中小学老师或打学生或猥亵学生、体罚学生等各类新闻不断曝光，进而引发了师生

关系的大讨论。本范例题为四级考试传统的问题解决型的写作，与校园生活密切相关。

范例二

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:Students’RatingofTheir

Teachers。Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChine.

1.学生给老师打分已经普遍

2.人们对其持不同态度

3.我的看法

Students’RatingofTheirTeachers

Nowadays,ithasbecomeascommonincollegesanduniversitiesforstudentstogradeteachersasfor

universitiesstudents’ratinghavenbecometheonlysourceofinformation

onteachingeffectiveness..

This,however,einfavoroftheratingsystem,Theyholdthatsince

studentsattendtheteachers’clasveryday,theyshouldhavetheiropinionabouttheirteachers’effectiveness.

Others,onthecontrary,lievethatthereismuchmoretoteachingthanwhatis

shownonstudents’tsshouldnotbeexpectedtojudgewhetherthematerialstheyuareup

udgmentsrequireprofessionalknowledge,

whichisbestleftfortheteachers’colleagues.

Ithinkstudents’ratingoftheirteachersisnecessary,butitshouldbeconductedinawaythatcanreally

shedmeaningfullightonteachers’dofratingtheteachers’knowledgeonthesubject,

studentsshouldbeaskedtoestimatewhattheyhavelearnedinacour,andtoreportonsuchthingsasa

teacher’sabilitytocommunicatewithstudents,hisorherrelationshipwithstudents,andhisorherabilityto

aroustudents’interestinthesubject.

点评：越来越多的高校采取让学生给老师打分的形式来了解教学反馈，并以此作为促进教学质量的有效

手段。对此做法，管理部门及教学双方褒贬不一，看法迥异。本范例题为校园生活热议话题，值得关注。

范例三

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicOnaHarmonious

uldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChine:

1.宿舍生活有时会出现不和谐的情况;

2.一个和谐宿舍生活的必要性;

3.如何创造和谐的宿舍生活。

OnaHarmoniousDormitoryLife

etimestheharmonyinthedormitorybe

disturbedinonewayoranother.

Asisknowntoall,aharmoniousdormitorylifeisimportanttocollegestudentsandbenefitsallthe

and,therhand,wewillhavea

goodmoodandenjoybeingtogether.

y,youhavetoevaluate

yourlife-styleandtrytogetridofyourdirtyhabits,ly,whenanannoyingsituation

aris,you’y,you’llhavetosharewitheachother

andmakegoodfriends.

Inconclusion,weshouldtryourbesttobuildaharmoniousdormitorylifeforthesakeofgoodstudyand

goodlife.

点评：“和谐”成为我们当今社会词频概率最高用词，就社会而言，倡导建立和谐社会；就家庭而言，

提倡建设和谐家庭；就校园来讲，则要建立和谐校园；和谐两字似乎无所不在，大学生宿舍生活同样需

要和谐。本范例题与四级考试热点密切相关，又为典型的校园生活主题，值得关注。

范例四

Directions:Forthispart,uld

writeatleast120wordsaccordingtothefollowingguidelines:

假设你是一名学生志愿者，要给来你们学校参观的外国朋友介绍学校情况。内容应包括学校历史、规模、

教学现状以及未来目标等。

ABriefIntroductiontotheUniversity

Distinguishedguests,

youstarttolookaround,allowmetogiveyouabriefaccountofthe

school.

Foundedin1927,ouruniversityisoneofthiscity’affedwithan

excellentfaculty,andhasatotalenrollmentofover10,astyears,ithasturnedout

numerouswell-qualifiedstudentsandfounditsgraduatesactiveinprofessionsofallwalksoflife.

Sinceitstablishment,theuniversityhasalwayssteereditlftowardtheobjectivethatitsstudentshave

ydoesitprovidethestudentswithbasicacademiccours,butit

s,studentsarefreetoparticipateincolorful

campusactivitiesandsocialpractice,whichareintendedforbroadeningtheirmindanddevelopingtheir

potentialtalent.

Currently,bothourfacultyandstudentsaremakingeveryefforttoimprovethequalityofoureducationin

ou.

点评：近几年，随着我国顺利加入世贸组织以及经济全球化步伐的加快，许多国内高校纷纷与国外大学

合作办学，教育走向国际化成为人们关注的热点，也是大学生门比较关心的热点问题。本范例题为热议

校园生活话题，与2004年旅游景点介绍2006年考查的名校校园开放如出一辙。

范例五

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritealettertoafriendwhowillcometoyourcityto

uldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChine:

假设你是李明,你的一个朋友张伟准备到你所在的城市来旅游，但你有事不能接待。写封信给他，解释

你不能接待的原因，并说明你所做的安排。

ALettertoaFriend

DearZhangWei,

I’mgladtoknowthatyouarecomingtomycityduringthesummervacation.

However,I’mafraidthere’ssomebadnews.I’mplanningtotakepartinaninternationalconferencetobe

topscientistsinmyfieldwillshowupatthe

portantly,I’mluckyenoughtohavebeenlectedtogiveaspeechonbehalfofmy

ycan’tmissit.

Iunderstandthatit’llbeyourfirsttimetothiscityandI’myouronlyfriendhere.I’veaskedmyroommate

tomeetyouattheairport,erynicepersonandhewillshowyouaround

utwowillgetonwellandhaveaniceholiday!

Yours,

LiMing

点评：本范例题与2001年6月考查的ALettertoaSchoolmate类似，所不同是写作提示有所不同，2001

年6月作文题是写信对校友来度假表示欢迎并在信中提出建议和注意事项，而本范例题是对朋友来访不

能接待，同时在信中说明原因及具体安排，内容不一，但话题相仿，写作思路相似，值得关注。

范例六

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:LivingaloneorLivingwith

Roommates?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChine.

1．有人认为大学里应独自生活

2．另一些认为大学里应与别人同住

3．你的看法

LivingaloneorLivingwithRoommates

Nowadays,therehasappearedaheateddiscussionamongthecollegestudentsastowhethertheyshould

livealoneoutsidethecampusorlivetogetherwithotherroommatesinthestudents’nsare

dividedoverthematter.

Thowhoareinfavn

nhavetheirowntimetablewithoutdisturbingothers.

TheyarealsofreetoequiptheroomwithapersonalcomputersothattheycanhaveeasyaccesstotheInternet.

veralstudentssharingthe

sameroom,eachperson’nlearnalotfromtalkingtooneanother.

Bylearningtotoleratethedifferencesbetweenindividuals,theycanbecomemoremature.

AsfarasI’mconcerned,s,

itisalotcheapertoliveinadormthantorentanapartmentoutsidethecampus.

点评：本文与校园生活密切相关，也是近年来出现的现象，人们对此的看法各异，2003年后，四级作文

考查加大了学校生活类题目的考查，因为这类题材不存在地域的差异，不同地域的同学都有话可说。本

范例题即为校园生活类话题，与刚考完的四级作文话题类似，符合命题者出题思路，值得引起重视。

范例七

Direction:Forthispartyouareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:

shouldwritenolessthan120wordsandbayourcompositionontheoutlinebelow:

1.描述上图所示的手机用户数的变化情况

2.出现这种情况的原因

3.对此现象作出评价

CellPhones

Asisshowninthechart,1999,thenumber

ofcellphonesinuwasonly2million,butin2002,heyear2005,the

numberhassuddenlysoaredto9million.

y,acellphonehasnowiresandcanbe

ly,acellphoneissomethingwonderfulthatwecanhavefunwithnews,

games,y,thedropinpriceandthesimultaneous

improvementinthefunctionshavemadeitpossibleforanaveragepersontomakeuofcellphone.

Thewideuofcellphoneshasmadethemmoreandmoreindispensableinpeople’

functionsofthecellphonehavemadecertainpeoplereluctanttoparatethemlvesfromtheircellphone.

点评：随着我国经济的快速发展，人民的生活水平不断改善，通讯业的日新月异的发展，使得手机使用

普及化，成为人们日常生活的必需品，对此的利弊人们看法各异。本范例题为热点话题，同样是年轻人

较熟悉和经常讨论的话题，值得关注。

范例八

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopic

uldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChine:

1.广告的作用

2.广告的形式多样

3.广告的夸张性

Advertiment

Advertimentsareforcingtheirwayintopeople’refertoadvertimentsintheirdailylives

ertirsareusuallymanufacturers,

mercarlyeveryproductis

geextent,goodadvertisingleadstosuccesswhilebadadvertisingcanmean

failure.

Therearemanywaystoadvertiand‘ads’perscarryadvertiments.

Someproductsaardsalso

isingisabigindustrynowandmanyagencieshavebeentuptofurnishavarietyof

forms..

However,ertirexaggerates

,sumerfallsvictimto

nsofpeoplehaveboughtadvertidproductsandhavebeendissatisfiedwiththem。

点评：这是一篇说明文，用说明的表达方式来解说事物，阐明事理。写好说明文，不仅要抓住特征，注

意条理，而且要巧妙运用说明方法，像下定义、举例子、作比较、分类别、列数字、打比方等

范例九

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:ALettertothe

Pruldwritenomorethan

120words,andbayourcompositionontheoutlinegivenbelowinChine:

假设你是李明，请你写一封信给校长，建议改善本校体育设施状况，内容应涉及体育设施对大学生的重

要性，对目前学校体育设施的状况可以表扬，可以提出批评建议，也可以兼而有之。

ALettertothePresidentoftheUniversity

ent,

Iamwritingthoticed

thatouruniversityhasverylimitedresourcesintermsofopportunitiestoparticipateinsports,especiallygiven

thatthenumberofstudentsoncampusisincreasingeveryyear.

Aswebothknow,haveaccessto

qualitysportsfacilities,youngpeopleareabletochooahealthierlifestyle,toboostlf-esteemand

confidence,andtobuildapositiveoutlookandnofachievement.

ldbedesignedwithsoccerplayers,basketballplayers,

ldhaveadifferentctionforeachactivityandbeavailabletostudents

vesuchfacilitieswillmeetoursportingneeds.

Thankyouforyourreadingthisletter.

Yoursfaithfully,

LiMing

点评：本范例题仿真度颇高，为校园生活话题，与在校大学生日常生活密切相关，是最近几年侧重考查

的题材。2002年1月考查了就本校食堂状况给校长写一封信.

范例十

Directions:Forthispart,uldwriteat

least120wordsbadonthechartandoutlinegivenbelow:

下图是2007年1-10月中国博客服务人均月度有效浏览时间及增长率，描述变化，说明原因。

Blog

Thishistogramsh

wecanethatthenumberofursincreadmonthlyfromJanuarytoAugust,wopeak

months,JulyandAugust,thenumberdroppedslightlyinSeptember,whileinOctoberitpickedupagain.

Possiblereasonsforthechangesarefirst,inFebruaryChinepeoplecelebratedthemostimportant

festival——ansmorepeoplespentmoretimewiththeirfamiliesandfriends,and

thereforetheydidn’ly,collegestudentsarethemainursofblog

nJulyandAugust，theyhadsummerholidays,whichenabledthemtohavemoresparetime

y,withimprovementsofblogrvicesandtheinfluenceofsome“star

bloggers”,mostofwhomarecelebrities,blogsarebecominganimportantwayforpeopletoexpressthemlves

andmorepeoplearestartingtouthervices,whichhelpexplain

theoverallincreashownhere.

点评：这是一篇图表题。可以看出，整体呈增长趋势。但是，二月和九月有所下降。所以，分析的时

候要照顾各个方面。整理

范例十一

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicCollegeStudents’Job

uldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.近几年出现了大学生就业难的现象

2.产生这种现象的原因（如大学生追求的目标过高，专业不对口等）

3.如何解决这一问题（改变就业观念，大学生再培训等）

CollegeStudents’JobHunting

Inrecentyears,dsstrangesinceyoung

collegestudentsareusuallyintelligent,well-educatedphenomenon,aspirantandeagertobringtheirtalentinto

atunderliesthestrangephenomenon?

nwith,ywant

are“good”jobswhichcouldoffergoodsalary,comfortableworkingconditions,highsocialstatusamongothers.

Conquently,mostcollegestudentsareunwillingtoacceptvacantjobstheyconsidernot“good”enough.

Anotherreasonisthatthereisabiggapbetweenthemajorssomestudentsstudyinschoolandthedemandsof

aniesthinksomestudentsarenotfitforthejobs.

Sopaniesshouldvalue

thestudents,taouldbe

down-to–rmore,theyshouldfacetheirweakpointssoastoimprove

themlvesandbemorecompetent.

点评：本范例题为社会热点话题。近年来大学生就业难日益成为各级政府及社会各方面关注的焦点，媒

体也广泛报道了大学生就业形势严峻，呼吁全社会共同努力；此外，该范例题也与大学生就业密切相关，

也是四级作文选题重点之一。

范例十二

Directions:Forthispart,

shouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

１．在现代社会，城市交通问题变得越来越严重

２．城市交通问题的表现以及对人们生活的影响

３．解决的方法与措施

TrafficJam

Thereisnodoubtthattrafficcongestionbecomesagrowingworryfortheresidentsofmosturbanareas.

itedtransportcapacitycontributes

olvetheheadache?.

Theexistingsolutionstotrafficjammainlyaimatcreatingmetrobussystemsandbroadeningmajorroads.

gcarownershipcompoundsthe

chronicannoyingproblem,sowemustsharplyreducetheheavyrelianceoncarsanddriveashifttothemass

reateasystemofcustomizedbusroutesandhighlightthe

developmentofsubways,ectivecombinationofthesolutionswillenablethe

urbanareastoposssasmoothtraffic.

点评：交通话题一直是四级作文命题话题之一。1990年6月考查过HowtosolvetheproblemofHeavy

Traffic,1994年1月考题TheWorldIsGettingSmallerandSmaller也与交通有关，近年来，随着私家车的

日益增多，城市交通拥堵凸显，出行难越来越成为人们关注的焦点。

范例十三

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicEnvironmental

uldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.全球变暖对地球环境造成了很大影响

2.引起全球变暖的原因

3.我们需要采取的措施

EnvironmentalProtection

Noone，regardlessofrace,religionornationality,candenythattheworldweliveinisbecoming

ingtomanyexperts,evengreater

impactsarestillontheway.

and,human-relatedemissionsofcarbonintothe

atmosphereiscausing,andwillinthefuturecau,

otherhand,thelackofknowledgeabouttheimportanceofprotectingenvironmenthindersthesolvingofthe

problem.

I,moretreesneedtobe

s,stricterlawsconcerningglobalwarmingand

irresponsibd,thereisalong

waytogobeforewecantakeacomfortableworldforgrantedagain.

点评：环境问题也是四级作文命题重点话题之一。大学英语(Q吧)四级考试曾经考过MakeourCities

Greener.近年来，全球气候异常，造成许多自然灾害的频繁，保护环境刻不容缓，已成为全社会乃至全人

类共同关注的热点。

范例十四

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicof

uldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChine:

1.越来越多的人使用信用卡，信用卡有哪些好处

2.信用卡的弊端

3.你自己的观点

CreditCards

ndotherfinancialinstitutionsare

cards,otherwiknownas“plastic

money”,erswillbeableto“buynow,

paylater”,andmanyethisasanadvantage.

oplefinditvery

etemptedtopurchagoodsthattheydonotreallyneed,andcanbecome

ditcardsoftenchargeahighrateofinterest,whichexacerbatesthe

problemsforthepeople.

However,udwilycreditcardscanimprovethequalityofpeople’ngivepeopleaccess

lyhandled,theycanletpeoplecontroltheirexpenditure

andthemonthlystatementsprovidearecordofwheretheirmoneyhasgone.

点评：这是一篇议论文，关于信用卡的利弊。可以分成三部分：第一部分，信用卡的好处，比如说应

急等；第二部分，信用卡的一些弊端，比如说鼓励一些无用的消费；第三部分：你自己的观点，理性使

用。

范例十五

Directions:Forthispart,

shouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChine:

1．有些人喜欢养动物作为宠物。

2．有些人反对圈养动物作为宠物。

3．你的观点。

PetRaising

Nowadays,withtheimprovementofthepeople’slivingstandard,somepeopleformahabitofraising

ismalldogsorcatsastheirpetswhileothersraivariousbirdsor

fishesastheirpets.

However,,animalshavetheirownright

therhand,thewaypeopleraianimalsaspetshaveanegative

influenceonthesurroundings,forexample,dogs’’smore,some

animalswilltransmitsomedias.

Inmyopinion,ldnotdeprivethemoftheirnatural

way,wewillliveinapeacefulworldinharmonywiththeotherlivingcreatures.

范例十六

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowPeopleSpend

uldwriteatleast120words,andbayourcompositiononthetableandtheoutline

givenbelow:

1、根据上表，简要描述1990年、1995年、2000年某城市人们度假方式的情况及其变化；

2、请说明发生这些变化的原因；

3、得出结论。

HowPeopleSpendTheirHolidays

Asisclearlyshowninthetablethattherewasadramaticchangeinthewaypeoplespenttheirholidays

ally,in1990,63%ofpeoplespenttheirholidaysathome,whilethefigure

decreadconsiderablyto24%rethreereasonsforthisphenomenon.

Tobeginwith,withthedevelopmentofmarket-orientedeconomy,peopleearnbyfarmoremoneythan

theyudto,tion,peoplerealizetheimportance

ofgettingwell-infmple,a

travellermayencounterortalk

butnotleast,bytravelingoutside,peopleareclotonature,whichisnotonlybeneficialtoboththeirhealth

t,moreandmorepeopletaketheoccasionofholidaytotraveloutsideandrelax

themlves.

AsfarasIamconcerned,ne

hand,therhand,itisagreedthattheworld

brief,Ihavebenefitedalotandwillbenefitmorefromtravelingduringtheholidays.

点评：该篇作文属图表作文，命题思路与四级真题图表作文一致，仿真度高。本范例题关于人们旅游度

假方式的变化，也是社会热点话题，2006年1月就考过名校校园该不该成为旅游景点话题；2004年6

月也是关于旅游景点的介绍。

范例十七

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:

shouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinebelowinChine.

a)社会实践的作用

b)可能产生的问题

c)提出建议

SocialPractice

Stsareaskedtoenter

y,socialpracticecanoffer

waystudentscangainsome

valuablesocialexperience,ly,studentscanapplywhatthey

havelearnedinclasstopracticalwork,y,socialpracticecanbring

themsomefinancialrewardandmakethemmoreindependentoftheirfamily.

However,mple,somestudentsgetoverly

interestedinsocialpracticeandwanttoworkfull-timeandearnmoney,e

studentsarelikelytogetintouchwiththedarksideofsociety,whichwillaffecttheirfuturestudies.

Inordertocarryoutsocialpracticesmoothly,ouldput

theirstudiesinthefirstplaceandesocialpracticejustasaufulsupplement,sotheyoughttotrytostrikea

balancebetweensocialpracticeandtheirstudies.

点评：本篇文章属于解释性说明文。就业市场的竞争要求大学生具有丰富的社会实践，才能适应就业市

场的竞争，所以现在在校大学生参与社会实践活动频繁，但如何处理好学业和社会实践的关系成为人们

关注的话题。本范例题与大学生生活密切相关，也是四级作文关注的重要话题。

范例十七

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:

shouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinebelowinChine.

a)社会实践的作用

b)可能产生的问题

c)提出建议

SocialPractice

Sntsareaskedtoenter

y,socialpracticecanoffer

waystudentscangainsome

valuablesocialexperience,ly,studentscanapplywhatthey

havelearnedinclasstopracticalwork,y,socialpracticecanbring

themsomefinancialrewardandmakethemmoreindependentoftheirfamily.

However,mple,somestudentsgetoverly

interestedinsocialpracticeandwanttoworkfull-timeandearnmoney,e

studentsarelikelytogetintouchwiththedarksideofsociety,whichwillaffecttheirfuturestudies.

Inordertocarryoutsocialpracticesmoothly,ouldput

theirstudiesinthefirstplaceandesocialpracticejustasaufulsupplement,sotheyoughttotrytostrikea

balancebetweensocialpracticeandtheirstudies.

点评：本篇文章属于解释性说明文。就业市场的竞争要求大学生具有丰富的社会实践，才能适应就业市

场的竞争，所以现在在校大学生参与社会实践活动频繁，但如何处理好学业和社会实践的关系成为人们

关注的话题。本范例题与大学生生活密切相关，也是四级作文关注的重要话题

范例十八

Directions:

1．上图所示为我国吸毒者年龄分布情况，请描述其变化

2．请说明发生这些变化的原因

3．这一变化对社会和个人的影响

Ascanbeenfromthegraph,

concrete,theteenageaddictsonlymadeup10percentofallthedrugstersin1982whiletheratioroupto65

in2002.

,teenagers’fearlesscuriosityabouteverythingnewhasled

,manyoftheyoungaddictsturnedforthefirsttimetodrugsforescape

eitherfromtheirfailureinthenationalentranceexamsorfromtheirparents’veall,our

educationintheharmfulnessofdrugshasbeenfarfromadequatetobuildteenagers’soundresistancetodrugs.

Tosumup,thecausmentionedabovemustcallformoreofourconcern,andeffectivemeasuresshouldbe

takentocheckthetrend.

Obviouslythedrasticchangewillexertgreatimpactonindividualsandthewholesociety.

Foronething,drug-takingdoesgreatdamagetothehealthofdrugurs..Foranother,somedrugurs

commitrobberyorevenmurdertheirparentsandrelativestogetmoneytobuydrugs,whichposagreatthreat

ore,itishightimewedidsomethingtoputanendtothis

trend.

点评：该范例题为社会热点话题，四级考试命题作文常考题材。本文属于图表作文的写作。根据四级图

表作文命题规律，第一段文章描述了图表中所反映的我国吸毒者年龄的分布最近二十年的变化情况，；第

二段说明了产生这种变化的原因；最后一段陈述了吸毒无论是对个人的身体健康和社会的安全和稳定都

构成了巨大的威胁，呼吁全社会共同努力消除这种不良现象。

范例十九

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:HowtoKeepPsychologically

Healthy?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChine.

1．心理健康问题往往是导致疾病的原因

2．分析人们产生心理健康问题的原因(可从失业、压力过重、缺乏支持、缺乏人际交往能力等方面分析)

3．你认为人们应如何保持心理健康

HowtoKeepPsychologicallyHealthy?

Oneinfoufailto

managetheproblems,theyarelikelytocauvariousmentalillness.

y’ssociety,agood

tion,alotof

peopleareignorantofpsychologicalknowledgeabouthowtokeepmentallyfit.

Therearealy,findthe

realcausly,learnto

,youmayfindithelpfultotalktoyourpartneror

friendaboutyourproblem,oreksupportandadviceformapsychologicalconsultant

点评：据报道北京高校100多万名在校大学生中，已经有14名自杀身亡。而去年全年，北京自杀死亡

的学生为19人。社会对于大学生心理健康问题越来越关注，如何保持心理健康成为社会关注话题。本范

例题与校园生活联系紧密，是四级考试关注度较高的话题，值得重视。

范例二十

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposi-tiononthetopicAidEducationin

uldwriteatleast120wordsf-ollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChine:

1.每年，高校许多大学生受到鼓舞去贫困地区支教。

2.支教活动的意义。

3.我的看法。

AidEducationinChina

Eachyear,collegestudents,encouragedtoaidstudentsinthepoverty-strickenareas,volunteerthemlves

inpoorvillagesforayearandtrytoimproveeducationinpoorareas.

nehand,collegevolunteersarereallydevotedto

veopenedtheeyesofstudentsinunderdevelopedregionstotheoutsideworldbybringing

ult,

otherhand,collegestudentshavereceivedarigoroustrainingbyadaptingtotheharshlivingconditions.

Theyar’smore,theyaregreatly

inspiredbythemovingandtirelessspiritofthechildren.

Inmyopinion,China’ducationaldevelopmentcan’tbeisolatedfromeachindividualandwecollege

studentsshouldtaketheleadinrespontotheappealforofferingaidtochildreninpoorareas.

范例二十一

Directions:Forthispart,uldwriteatleast120words

followingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.现在某些高校校园禁止车辆驶入，

2.这种规定的考虑，

3.谈谈你的看法。

ShouldcarsbeallowedintoCollegeCampus?

Withtherapiddevelopmentofournationaleconomy,privatecarshavebecomeinlargenumber;ofcour,

quiteafewcarsareheavilydrivenintoCollegeCampus.

Inasignificantway,thecarsdonottakeupstudents’placesforstudy,butactuallyaffecttheirdailylife

andstudy--forinstance,

campusisjammedwihave

sthatthisisnotconveniencetosomepersons,

indeed,ensomeoneenjoysconveniencefrommoderntools,don't

ore,Iagreethatcarsarenotallowed

intoCollegeCampus.

Byandlarge,withthepriceofcarsfallingsignificantly,carswillenteraveragefamilies,andmostChine

r,theyarestillprohibitedtodrivetheircarsintoCollege

Campus,which,Ithink,isahardtruthintheeyesofmostpeople.

点评：随着人们物质生活的提高，私家车发展迅猛，越来越多的私家车停放在校园，由此产生了一些问

题，如空间被占、噪音污染、环境污染等，为此许多学校禁止车辆驶入校园，本范例题与2006年1月名

校校园是否对外开放相仿，值得关注。

范例二十二

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:uld

writeatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChine.

1.信息安全问题日益重要

2.信息安全事故可能导致的危害

3.如何做到信息安全

InformationSecurity

ormationindustrydevelopsvery

rapidly,sodothehackers,trick-playingteens,exploringchildren,fraudsters,andriouswhite-collarcriminals.

Thus,informationcuritybecomesanimpendingimportantissue.

Incaofinformationbreach,thevictims-----governmentdepartment,anorganizationoraninstitution,or

mentmaybethreatenedwithnationalcurity.

public’sandurs’confidencewillbe

damaged.

Thenhowtodealwiththisissue?’s

moreimportantisthatorganizationsandcompaniesshouldpromotetheawarenessoninformationcuritytoits

r,sincenosystemcaneverbe100percentcure,aprevention-onlyapproachtoinformation

iesandorganizationsshouldadoptadualapproachtoinformation

curitymanagementbycombingpreventionanddetectiontechniques.

点评：随着我们步入信息社会和计算机应用的普及，利用计算机犯罪案件不断上升，信息安全事故频繁

发生，媒体也不时有大量相关报道，如何保护信息安全成为人们关注的焦点，本范例题为社会热点，值

得关注。

范例二十三

Directions:ttoapplyforajobasapersonalcretarytotheGeneral

uld

bayourcompositionontheoutlinegiveninChinebelow.

1.简要介绍自己并说明应征该职位

2.告知公司为什么对此感兴趣

3.简述你为何是合适人选

AnApplicationLetter

DearSirorMadam,

IamLiMing,hthejob

advertiment,IhavelearnedthatyouarehuntingaqualifiedindividualforapersonalcretarytotheGeneral

lyconvincedthatIamtherightpersonforthejob.

r,itixactlythechallengeofmyprospective

ethatmyhonesty,carefulness,patience,experti,commitmentandextensive

knowledgewillproduceanexcellentjobperformance.

Nextmonth,IamgoingtograduatefromtheEnglishDepartmentofNanjingUniversity,andIhaveover

nclodthedetailsofmyacademicrecord,skills,andlanguage

ouforyourtimeinconsideringmyapplication.

YoursSincerely,

LiMing

点评：本文属于书信体应用文，要求写一封求职信。找工作是四级命题作文关注的话题之一，2001年1

月和1995年6月都考查了求职面试的话题，本范例题要求写一封求职信，既与求职话题相关，又是书信

体作文，符合四级作文命题思路和考查重点。

范例二十四

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:Nopains,nogainsYou

shouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinebelowinChine.

1.为什么说“不劳就无获”

2.试举例说明

Nopains,nogains

Nearlyeverycivilizationhasitsownequivalenttotheproverb“Nopains,nogains.”Itmeansthatnothing

canbegainedwithoutpainstakingeffortsandthatnoknowledgeorskillcanbeacquiredwithoutsweatortoil.

Youdon’’sgreatdiscoverywasnotthe

workofamomentbutwasprecededbyyearsofpatient,wasnotanaccomplished

Edisonmakehimlfthe

greatestinvends“Genius

is99percentperspirationandonepercentinspiration,revealsthecretofthousandsofsuccessfulmenand

omplishmentsandsuccesscomefromsustainedendeavor.

Althoughitisanoldsaying,“nopainsnogains”hasitsprofoundandrealisticsignificanceinourcollege

ireknowledgeinaparticularfieldandtoattainanyacademicgoals,greatexertionand

persistenteffortareundoubtedlyrequiredbecauweallknowthat“Nopains,nogains.”

点评：该范例题与四级1997年1月作文命题类似，属于论证道理性的解释性说明文写作，已有多年未

考，值得关注。根据此类作文命题规律，第一段对这一格言所蕴涵的意义做了解释和界定。第二段举例

说明了其哲理性；最后一段说明它的现实意义，重述主题。

范例二十五

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:Lecturesor

uldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChine.

1．一些学生赞成讲座式教学

2．另一些学生偏爱讨论式教学

3．你的看法

LecturesandDiscussions

Thereioplebelieve

rast,othersholdthatdiscussionscanstimulate

studentstolearnbythemlves.

Trview,bygiving

lecturesteachershelpstudentsmastertheknowledgethey’veaccumulatedoveryearsofstudyandrearch.

However,othersthinkthatinadiscussion,theteacherusuallyguidesthestudentsinsteadofdominatingthem.

Theyarguethattogetinvolvedinadiscussion,studentshavetodeveloptheirabilitytoanalyzeproblems

independently.

Inmyopinion,fall,eithermethodhasitsdisadvantages.

Furthermore,y,lecturesatepreferabletodiscussionsinthe

teachingofsciencesubjects,andonthecontrary,discussionsarepreferabletolecturesinstudyingthe

ore,weshouldadoptdifferentteachingmethodsaccordingtodifferentsubjects.

点评：2007年12月考查了大学生选修课话题，再次证明四级作文命题自2003年以后侧重于校园生活话

题，该范例与校园生活联系紧密，为四级作文命题经常关注的话题。本文属于对比观点加作者态度型的

议论文写作。

范例二十五

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:Lecturesor

uldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChine.

1．一些学生赞成讲座式教学

2．另一些学生偏爱讨论式教学

3．你的看法

LecturesandDiscussions

Thereioplebelieve

rast,othersholdthatdiscussionscanstimulate

studentstolearnbythemlves.

Trview,bygiving

lecturesteachershelpstudentsmastertheknowledgethey’veaccumulatedoveryearsofstudyandrearch.

However,othersthinkthatinadiscussion,theteacherusuallyguidesthestudentsinsteadofdominatingthem.

Theyarguethattogetinvolvedinadiscussion,studentshavetodeveloptheirabilitytoanalyzeproblems

independently.

Inmyopinion,fall,eithermethodhasitsdisadvantages.

Furthermore,y,lecturesatepreferabletodiscussionsinthe

teachingofsciencesubjects,andonthecontrary,discussionsarepreferabletolecturesinstudyingthe

ore,weshouldadoptdifferentteachingmethodsaccordingtodifferentsubjects.

点评：2007年12月考查了大学生选修课话题，再次证明四级作文命题自2003年以后侧重于校园生活话

题，该范例与校园生活联系紧密，为四级作文命题经常关注的话题。本文属于对比观点加作者态度型的

议论文写作。

范例二十六

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:MyViewonOnline

uldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChine.

1.目前网络教育形成热潮

2.你认为这股热潮形成的原因

3.你对网络教育的评价

MyViewonOnlineEducation.

extent,ithasbecomepartofour

oalotofthingsonline,suchasarchingforinformationandcommunicatingwithfriends

entlyanotherhelpfulonlineactivityhasbecomevery“in”.Thatisonlineeducation.

Whycouldonlineeducationbesopopularwithinsuchashortperiodoftime?Amongotherreasons,the

quickdevelopmentoftheInternetshouldbeanesntialone,whichmakesallourdreamsofattendingclassin

runderlyingreasonisthequickdevelopmentofbothsocietyandtechnology.

Today,hupwiththisdevelopment

r,duetothegreatpaceofmodernsociety,manypeople

educationjustcomestotheiraid.

Personally,’sindeedahelpfulcomplementtothetraditional

ro

all,withonlineeducation,wecansticktoourjobsandatthesametimestudyandabsorbthelatestknowledge.

点评：英特网的迅速发展改变了人们的生活和学习、工作方式，现代生活节奏快、工作忙导致人们没时

间全日制的学习，网络和远程教育正好满足了人们的学习需要，许多大学生利用因特网学习知识，它成

为传统教学的有益补充。本范例题贴近时代，也与大学生校园生活相关，值得重视。

范例二十七

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:Pollution:An

IncreasingConcerninChinaYoushouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinebelowinChine.

1．中国的污染的现状

2．造成污染的原因

3．解决的办法

Pollution:AnIncreasingConcerninChina

ItisreportedthattenbigcitiesinChinaarebeingrankedamongthetoptwentycitieswiththehighest

ansitishightimewedidsomethingtobringthesituationundercontrol.

Manyfactorsarecontributingtothedeterioratingsituation:industrialwastespumpedintotheair,thelakes

andrivers;aincreasingnumberofautomobilescrowdingintothestreets;thewidespreaduofplasticbagtc.

Tomyview,riesthatrelea

ouldbeequippedtominimizetheexhaustthey

’smore,the

mediashouldplayanimportantroleinimplantinganofenvironmentalconsciousnessintopeople’smind.

Ifeverybodyworkstowardacommongoalofmakingtheenvironmentbetter,wecancreateacleanerand

lovelierworldforusandforthecominggeneration.

点评：该范例题为社会热点话题，也是四级命题作文经常关注的环境问题，值得引起重视。本文属于解

释性说明文的写作，主题是“污染”。

范例二十八

Forthispart,youarerequiredtowriteacompositionabout120wordsonthetopic:ChangesinPeople’sDaily

mpositionshouldbewrittenonthefollowingtableandChinegivenbelow.

1.描述图表中人们每天开支变化情况

2.请说明发生这些变化的原因

3.结合图表对未来作出合理的范例

ChangesinPeople’sDailyExpens.

Whatisshowninthetableaboveindicatesthatdramaticchangeshavetakenplaceinthepeople’sdaily

ensonfoodhavedeclinedby30%whilethoonclothingand

recreationhaveincreadrespectivelyby9%and7%.Thestatisticsofriandfallemtoexistinisolation

butclolyrelatedtooneanother.

pmentineconomyisanesntialoneinthefive

readincomeresultingfromeconomicgrowthplaysanimportantpartinthelesxpenon

,roneisthechangesin

odprentsnoworrytotheaverage,peoplebegintofocusmoreofinterestonhandsome

ultofsuchashift,spendingonclothingandrecreationincreas

yearafteryear.

Fromtheanalysmadeabove,wemaycometotheconclusionthatpeople’slivingstandardshavebeen

efurthergrowthineconomyandmorechangesinlife

style,thetendencyindicatedinthetablewillcontinueinthebetterdirection.

点评：该范例题属于图表作文写作，与社会生活密切相关，与1991年6月份四级考试人们饮食结构的

变化图表作文写作类似。根据四级图表作文命题规律，第一段描述人们1995到1999年日常开支所发生

的巨大变化；第二段分析产生变化的原因；最后一段依据图表所示变化作出了合乎逻辑的范例。文章紧

扣主题，条理清楚，语言连贯，表述准确规范，结论合理。

范例二十九

Directions:Forthispart,

shouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChine:

1.表明你的身份和事件

2.对到场领导老师的支持予以感谢并阐述体育运动所带给大家的好处

3.宣布运动会开幕并预祝此次运动会取得成功.

AnOpeningSpeech

LadiesandGentlemen,

Goodmorning!IamOscar,thespokesmanoftheStudents’lfoftheStudents’Union,the

mainorganizeroftoday’ssportsmeeting,womonths’

preparation,ourannualsportsmeetingisheldonschedule.

theyhavemanyschool

responsibilities,’sgivethemabighand.

Throughsports,wecannotonlydevelopourphysicalprowess,butalsopromotesocialandemotionalskills,

andevenintellectualskills,everybodyherecherish

thisopportunityandenjoyit.

Atlast,bestwishesforthesuccessofthesportsmeetingandbestwishesforthegoodresultsofour

ouandgoodluck!

点评：本范例题是一篇开幕词，与2005年1月竞选学生会主席演说词相仿，运动会也是在校大学生校

园生活必不可少的一部分，是在校生比较熟悉的话题，有话可说，便于发挥。

范例三十

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicChoosingan

uldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChine:

1.选择职业是一个人要面对的众多难题之一。

2.需要花时间去选择职业。

3.选择职业时可以向多人寻求建议和帮助。

ChoosinganOccupation

Oresomepeople,

ofcour,whofromthetimetheyaresixyearsold“know”thattheywanttobedoctorsorpilotsorfirefighters,

butthemajorityofusdonotgetaroundtomakingadecisionaboutanoccupationorcareeruntilsomebodyor

somethingforcesustofacetheproblem.

Choosinganoccupationtakestime,andtherearealotofthingsyouhavetothinkaboutasyoutryto

findthatyouwillhavetotakespecialcourstoqualifyfora

particularkindofwork,oryoumayfindoutthatyouwillneedtogetactualworkexperiencetogainenough

knowledgetoqualifyforaparticularjob.

Fortunately,there

schools,thereareteacherswhoareprofessionallyqualifiedtogiveyoudetailedinformationaboutjob

cantalkoveryourideaswithfamilymembersandfriendswhoarealwaysreadyto

listenandtooffersuggestions.