2015年中考英语作文(超精)

●2015 年上海市中考英语作文 Write at least 60 words on the topic "I want to invent ______" (以―我想要发明______‖为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格)

(注意：1.在答题纸上将题目补充完整。 2.短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) The folloing is for reference only.（以下表达仅供参考） can be ud to ... will be exciting/necessary/helpful ... 范文 1 及点评： I Want To Invent A Family Doctor Robot I want to invent a family doctor robot, which can be ud to cure the illness without going out of their home. As far as I’m concerned, it will be extremely helpful and uful becau of the following reasons: First, you can e the doctor immediately at home when you feel sick or get hurt. It can save us a lot of time, especially in emergency situations. Furthermore, hospitals today are always filled with patients, not everyone can be taken good care of. However, with the help of our robot doctors, you can talk to your personal doctor one to one whenever you want. In short, family doctor robots can make great contribution to our society. 精彩亮点分析： 亮点一：全文巧用―first, furthermore, in short‖ 等连接词，把家庭机器人医生的好 处写的非常清晰，让阅卷老师一目了然。 亮点二：全文采用了定语从句、状语从句、并列句等多种长难句，为文采分增色 不少。 亮点三：文中出现了―extremely, make contribution to‖ 这些超纲单词及词组，恰到 好处地强调了家庭机器人医生的重要性，且为文采再次进行润色。 范文 2 及点评： I want to invent a time machine If I have the ability to invent something that could make life better, the first thing that comes into my mind is a time machine. With its help, people could go back to the past conveniently. We unavoidably make some mistakes that we regret so much, it’s fantastic if we could get another chance to fix it. Besides, it is of great importance to the aged people if they are able toenjoy their youth for a cond time.
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x0cAlthough it sounds like an impossible dream to realize, I still believe with the rapid development of science and technology, my idea will become reality some day. 精彩亮点分析： 亮点一：the first thing that comes into mind 首先映入脑海的是。 亮点二：conveniently 方便地，便利地。 亮点三：be of great importance 名词结构更高端。 亮点四：使用 be able to 短语替换掉 could，避免重复。 亮点五：with the rapid development of science and technology 随着科学和技术的迅 速发展。 范文 3 及点评： I want to invent a kind of medicine If you ask me what I want to invent? I will say a kind of medicine which can cure we all know, many people suffer from cancer and die at a very young age the years. For this, countless families lost their beloved family mem

bers, then feel painful for the rest of their lives. What a terrible thing it is! So, doing something quickly for them is rather necessary, I’d like to devote my life to it! 精彩亮点分析： 亮点一：条件状语从句，主将从现，引出中心思想。 亮点二：at a very young age 在年轻时。 亮点三：beloved 挚爱的。 亮点四：for the rest of their lives 余生。 亮点五：What a terrible thing it is! 感叹句表达这种病的严重性。 亮点六：So, doing something quickly for them is necessary! 主语从句结尾，句式新 颖，点明主题。 亮点七： devote one’s life to … 把…献给，强烈表明作者的决心。 范文 4 及点评： I want to invent healthy cigarette There are a great number of people who smoke around us, including women and men, even some students. As we all know, a cigarette can contain plenty of toxic materials which are not only harmful to themlves, but also to others. Therefore,I think it is necessary to invent healthy cigarette. If people u it when they want to smoke, it can be ud to reduce the bad influence which is caud by the real cigarette. For our beautiful future and human beings, healthy cigarette should be made. When I grow up, I want to be an inventor. Healthy cigarette will be my first invention. 精彩亮点分析：
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x0c亮点一：考纲外语法定语从句使用 亮点二：not only…but also 不但…而且… 亮点三：宾语从句 亮点四：if 条件状语从句 亮点五：When 引导的时间状语从句 ●假如你是某中学初三 （1） 班班长李华， 请你为校报―英语园地‖写一篇短文； 记述前天主题班会―To be nt to school or not‖的讨论情况。 内容要点： 1.部分学生认为上学应该接送，省时又安全。 2.部分学生认为步行或骑自行车是最好的方式，环保又健身。 3.你的看法和建议。 注意： 1.词数：80-100； 2.可是当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不要出现真实校名和人名。 To Be Sent To School Or Not __________________________________________________________________ ________

【答案】 We had a discusion about whether we should be nt to school or not. We have two main ideas. Some students think that it can save the students’time if parents nd them to school. And parents want to make sure the students are safe, especially when the weather is terrible. However, our city is more and more crowded and polluted, so other students think going to school on foot or by bike is the best way. First of all, walking to school is a wonderful way to exerci and it’s good for our health. What’s more, if we walk,or ride a bike, there will be fewer cars in the city. More walking and less driving help make our city cleaner. The streets won’t be as crowded as they are now. I hope more and more students will go to school on foot or by bike. 写作亮点： 这篇短文系统、 全面地阐明了自己对于家长开车送孩

子上学和步 行上学的利弊，表达出了自己的最终倡议，文中包含了提纲的基本信息，并发挥 了适当的想象。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语，包含形容词比较级和非谓语动 词的准确使用为文章增色不少.文中句与句和段与段的衔接和过度更加自然，如 First of all What’s more,学习中再注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可 以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。 【考点定位】提纲作文。
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x0c●良好的习惯成就美好的未来。作为青少年，如何培养良好的习惯呢？请根据 以下内容提示以 ―How to Develop Good Habits‖为题写一篇英语短文。 词数 100 左 右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 内容提示：1．上课认真听讲，做笔记； 2．每天按时完成作业； 3．闲暇时多读课外书籍； 4．每周锻炼 3 至 4 次； 5．多吃蔬菜、水果，少吃垃圾食品； 6．补充一至两点良好的习惯，并谈谈它们对身心健康的影响。 要求：1. 要点齐全，条理清楚，语句通顺，不要逐字翻译。 2. 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名，否则不予评分。 How to Develop Good Habits It’s very important for us to have a good habit.

书面表达 (one possible version: ) It’s very important for us to develop good habits. As teenagers, what should we do? In my opinion, we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary. It is a good habit to finish the schoolwork on time every day. In spare time, we had better read some books to get more knowledge. Also, we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables and less junk food. It’s necessary for us to take exerci for three or four times a week. What’s more, to get enough sleep, go to bed early and don’t stay up late. Always remember to wash our hands before meals to keep clean. Exerci is fun and relaxing. It’s healthy for the mind and body. Healthy lifestyle helps us get good grades and live happily. 对比两座城市信息选择暑假旅游目的地 更新:2015 年 6 月 23 日 2015 年杭州市中考英语作文 根据下表用英语写一篇 80 词左右的短文，内容须包括：对下表中关于（City A 和 City B）的全部信息 进行比较，分析利弊，确定其中一个城市作为你的暑假 ．．．． 旅游目的地。 City A City B Flying 2 hours 4 hours Temperature 30℃ 18℃ Hotel ★★ ★★★★ Things to do ★★★★ ★★ Food ★★ ★★★★ is he better place to spend my summer holiday.

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x0cIn my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less comfortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choo City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it ta

e; houwork; be afraid; share; take an active part in; 写作要求： 1.词数不少于 90（开头已给出，不计入总数）; 2.内容完整，语言流畅，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥； 3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。 Hello! My name is Xiao Ming.I’m studying in No.1. Middle School. Our school had an activity ―Learn from Sunshine Teenagers‖. From then on, there are many sunshine teenagers around us. Xiao Hui is one of is honest and kind. He gets on well with is always ready to not only help others but also go to the old people’s homes to do something for the reads newspapers for them, cleans their rooms and washes their clothes. Also, he is warm-hearted, active and always shares all kinds of his parents ’houwork, like doing the dishes, sweeping the floor and making dinner. He is never afraid of different difficulties. He works very hard and he likes reading. And he takes an active part in all kinds of school, he plays football with his teammates. And he joins the school clubs, like music,art and chess. He learns a lot from his all activities. Xiao Hui is my good sunshine teenager.I should learn from him. 提醒王明改正不良习惯做个文明室友
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x0c更新:2015 年 6 月 21 日 2015 年长沙市中考英语作文 假设你是李华，现就读于某寄宿制中学。你的室友王明经常违反寝室 （dormitory） 规定， 如不整理床铺， 休息时间大声拨打电话， 未经许可 （permission） 动用他人物品，离开寝室不关灯等。为了提醒他改正不良习惯，做个文明室友， 你决定写一封电子邮件给他。 要求：（1）包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯； （2）字数：60-80 词（信得开头和结尾已给出，不介入总词数）； （3）信中不得出现你的真实姓名，学校名和地名。 From：lihua2758@ To: wangming63@ Subject: To be a great roommate Dear Wang Ming, I’m writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules. Best wishes, LiHua

【解析】此次考查的是―应用文---书信体裁‖，难度为★★。根据要求，需要告知 室友必须遵守寝室规矩，而题目中恰好给出了足够的提示，并不需要学生 再花时间去思考，例如：1.不整理床铺 2.休息时间大声拨打电话 3.未经许 可（permission）动用他人物品 4.离开寝室不关灯等。基本只要能够把这 四个点用正确的句型翻译出来并稍加修饰，加上连接词，整篇文章就成形 了。 【参考词组】 respect each other 互相尊重 therefore 因此 obey the rules 遵守规定 without permission 未经允许

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【范文】 Dear Wang Ming, I’m writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules. As we live in the same room, we are like families thus we should love each other and respect each other. What’s more, we should make our room clean and tidy. Theref

ore, I hope you can read the following rules and obey them. Rule No.1 When you get up in the morning, remember to make the bed. Rule No.2 Don’t make phone calls when we are sleeping. Rule No.3 Don’t u others’ things without permission. Rule No.4 Turn off the lights
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x0cbefore you leave the room. I hope all of us can obey the rules and make our room more and more comfortable. Best wishes, LiHua How Can We Protect Ourlves? 更新:2015 年 6 月 21 日 2015 年安顺市中考英语作文 学会自我保护是青少年需要具备的一种意识和能力。请根据以下提示，并结 合自己的观点，以 "How Can We Protect Ourlves?"为题，写一篇不少于 80 词的 短文，谈谈在生活中青少年应该怎样自我保护 (lf-protction)。 提示: 1. never swim alone; 2. be careful to make friends; 3. call the police when you are in danger; 4. eat healthy food; 5. don't crow (go upstairs and downstairs) 要求: 1.句子结构准确，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯; 2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名、地名。

How Can We Protect Ourlves Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourlves? Here are some suggestions. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on , if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourlves safe. Also, we should eat healthily and safely. Besides, we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school. Last, summer is coming, we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone. In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourlves and stay away from danger.(102 words – ) 如何保护视力 更新:2015 年 6 月 21 日 2015 年青岛市中考英语作文 现在，很多中学生被近视困扰，请就此现象写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。 内容包括： 1.造成近视的原因； 2.近视对学习或生活的影响； 3.你认为应该如何保护视力（至少两条建议） 要求： 1.字数：80-100 字。开头已给出，不计入总字数。 2.文中不得出现真实的校名与人名。 参考词汇： eyesight n.视力 nearsighted adj 近视的
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x0chave good eyesight 视力好 have bad eyesight 视力差 Quite a lot of students have become nearsighted now._________________

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x0c文明社会,从我做起 更新:2015 年 6 月 20 日 2015 年嘉兴中考英语作文 文明社会， 从我做起。 请就下图的不文明行为和所产生的后果用英语写一篇短文， 向校刊 English Garden 投稿，倡导做文明人。

注意：（1）短文必须包括所给图片的信息，合理想象并补全第 3 幅图片的内容。 （2）必须谈谈你对此事的看法。 （3）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。 （4）词数：80~100.短文首句 仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。 短文首句：Last Sunday afternoon,I went to the park with my cousin. 参

语写一篇发言稿。要点 提示如下： （1）几个月前，奶奶晚饭后去跳广场舞。 （2）从那时起，奶奶喜欢上了广场舞。 （3）现在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友。 （4）有些邻居有意见，认为音乐很吵，无法入睡。 （5）你认为人们可以跳广场舞，但…… 参考词汇： 跳广场舞 do square dancing （对某人） 有意见 have a complaint (against sb.) 要求： （1）词数：80~100 个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Boys and girls, I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.

That’s all. Thank you!

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x0c参考范文： Boys and girls, I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma. A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What’s more, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night. In my opinion, people can do square dancing becau it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn’t make a lot of noi. That’s all. Thank you! 根据调查问卷谈谈你在英语学习方面的一些情况 更新:2015 年 6 月 19 日 2015 年济宁市中考英语作文 美籍教师 Frank 应邀将在暑假后来济宁一所初中学校任教。 为了解初中生英 语学习的一些情况，他设计了以下调查问卷。请你根据调查问卷，用英语写一篇 短文，谈谈你在英语学习方面的一些情况,以帮 助他完成该调查。

注 意： 1. 文中不得出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息； 2. 可依据问题适当发挥，以使意思连贯，行文流畅； 3. 100 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数） 。 I am Li Hua, a junior middle school student of China.______________________ Possible version 1: I am Li Hua, a junior middle school student of China. I began to learn English 7 years ago, but became really interested in when I entered junior middle school. My new English teacher was a beautiful young lady. She had a sweet clear voice and spoke English like a native speaker. She made her lessons interesting and easy to understand ,she emed to enjoy her job above everything el and was always nice to every one of us. I think I am very lucky to have such a good teacher. I wish to become a teacher like her in the future! (91 words)
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x0cPossible version 2: I am Li Hua, a junior middle school student of China. I began to learn English 7 years ago. But to tell you the truth, now I don’t like English at all although I was interested in it at primary school. After I entered junior high school, my English teacher kept explaining the rules of grammar in clas s. Tha

t made me feel English was boring. And also there were so many new words in the texts. My English teacher asked me to copy them again and again. I remembered but soon forgot. I hate copying! I couldn ’t remember the new words! I couldn ’t understand the texts! Finally I lost my interest in English. (102words) 根据图表信息介绍你家的情况 更新:2015 年 6 月 19 日 2015 年江西省中考英语作文 英文有句谚语‖East, west, home’s best.‖某英文报以此为标题，向广大中学生征 文。请根据下面图表信息写一篇短文，介绍你家的情况。内容包括：你家的居室 及居住环境、家庭成员及家庭成员之间的关系，并谈谈如何让你的家更美好。 提示：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯； 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3.词数不少于 80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

East,West,Home’s Best There’s an old saying,‖East,west,home’s in ……_____________________ 根据图片描述毕业聚会的过程 更新:2015 年 6 月 19 日 2015 年宜宾市中考英语作文
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x0c初中生活即将结束，6 月 6 日下午，你班的班长方华组织了一次毕业聚会：话友 谊、忆过去、签名留言、拍照记念。请根据图片的先后顺序描述此次即会的过程。

注意： 1.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校的名称。 2.至少用两句话描写每幅图画的内容，可以适当发挥。 3.首句已给出，不计入总词数。词数 80 词以上。 4.参考词汇：签名 sign one’s name, 班长 monitor, 心形的 heart-shaped As the junior life is ending, our class decided to have a party to celebrate it. _______________

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