高中英语读后续写讲解及练习ppt课件

读后续写基本流程
Tipsforwriting:
1.Thoroughreading
2.Creativeplotting(构思)
3.Swiftdrafting
4.Carefulpolishing
5.Neatcopying
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读后续写基本要求
requirements
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续写
WritingPractice
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读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇
完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Ourunplannedtravelswerepurejoyuntilthisday.ItwasdayeightofafamilytriptoGermanyforOktoberfest,atwo-weekfestivalheldinMunich,Germany,andSwitzerlandforAlpshiking.WewantedtobooktworoomsinMunich.Knowingnonewereavailable,wechototryourluckandfindahotelalongthefreeway.
AtFreiburg(aGermancity278kmwestofMunich),wefoundthelocalhotelroomswereallbookedforafestival.Sowejourneyedmerrilydowntheroadtofindrooms.Tooursurpri,allthehotelswecontactedwerebookedup.TherewasnoroomforusinGermany.SowewentacrosstheborderintoSwitzerlandtoBal.Alargecityinanothercountrywouldprovidetworoomsforus,wethought.
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ItwasinBalthatourbadluckbegan.Idrovewhilemywifeandsonburneduptheirphonesinbrokenlf-taughtGermanlookingfortworooms.IrolleduptoastopsignandtheGPSsaid,"Turnleft."Lookingattheroadsigns,Iscratchedmyhead(挠头)becausomethingdidn'temright.But,ofcour,IfollowedthecommandofmyGPSpilot.
Quicklyitwasclearthatwewerenolongeronaroad,buttraintracks.“Calmdown,”Iinstructedmywifeandson.“I’llsimplydriveabituntilIcangetoffthetracksandbackonaroad.”Thiscalmwasshort-livedasourteenageson,Mitch,noted,“Dad,there'satrainbehindus!”Whilewewereprocessingthisdilemma,anothertramappearedinthedistance.
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Ourcarwasnotpresdflatlikeasodacan.Ieaditoffthetramtracksontoacrowdedpedestrian-only(行人专用的)square.Hundredsofpeoplewereenjoyingtheirweekendoutdoors.Weweresafe,butobviouslynotwherecarswereallowed.ThebestplanIcouldthinkofwasto(丢弃)therentalcar.Whatastupididea!
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Paragraph1:
Aboutthattimeanelderlygentlemanapproachedandknockedonthewindowofourcarwithhisstick._____________________________________________________________________
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Paragraph2:
Wewerefreedfromourpainfulexperience,butstillhadnoplacetosleepforthe
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写作过程
WritingProcess
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体裁:记叙文
时态:一般过去时
原文核心内容解读:一家人外出旅行去参加慕尼黑啤酒节,路途困难重重,很难预定到房间的故事。
1.解题思路
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When:ItwasdayeightofafamilytriptoGermanyforOktoberfest.
Where:Munich(Germany)Freiburg(Germany)
Bal(Switzerland)
who:I/mywife/myson,Mitch/anelderlygentleman
2.文章脉络
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