2017年1月6月份上海市英语高考概括写作、作文题目及范文(2017.11.2)

2017年1月上海市高考英语写作题
假设你是明启中学的学生王磊,你的好友李宏今年暑期将赴英国参加为期两个月的海外交流活动。假设选择主办方安排的住宿,他需要额外支付较高的费用.但他也可以通过为当地养老院提供每月三十小时的义工效劳,获得在养老院免费住宿的时机.李宏通过邮件向你征求意见。写一封回信,内容须包括:
你对此事的明确的态度;
你的理由.
考生原作1
I'mgladtohearthatyouhaveaccesstoparticipatinginanoverascommunicationactivityinBritainwhichwilllasttwomonths。Isuggestthatyoushouldchooworkingasavolunteerthirtyhourverymonthforthelocalcommunityaging,hospitaltogainachancetostayinitforfree.Myreasonsareasfollows.(精品文档请下载)
Notonlycanyouenhanceyoursocialexperiences,butalsoyoucanreduceyourcosts。Contrarytotheaccommodationarrangedbythehost,youcansavealotofmoney。Undoubtedly,thecostmusthavebeenhighifyouchooit。Stayingintheaginghospital,thecontrastcouldn
’tbegreater。Ontheonehand,onlybyworkingasavolunteercanyougainafreestay。Itsoundsgreat!Yourarrivalwilladdcolorstotheatmospherethere。Ontheotherhand,duringoursparetime,wewillalsospendtimehelpingothersinthatoursocietyteachesustobeawarm-heatedperson.Yourarrivalwillalsoreducetheburdensthere。Asanoldsayinggoes,“Wecangainboththingsatthesametime。”Sowhynotchooit?(精品文档请下载)
Ihopethatyouwilltakemyadvi。Bestwishesthatyouwillhaveagoodtimethere。Itisagoldenchancethatyouwillgaininsummervocation.Inshort,enjoyyourlf。(精品文档请下载)
考生原作2
ItissaidthatyouwillgoabroadtoEnglandforatwo—monthoverascommunicationactivityinthissummervocation。Ihearthatyouarehesitatingwhethertospendhigherpricechoosingarrangeddormitoryortospend30hourverymonthrvingtheoldtogetafreeliving.(精品文档请下载)
Inmyopinion,Ithinkyoushouldchoothefirstone。Ifyouchoothecondoption,youwillutoomuchtimetodorviceinsteadofstudying
thelocalculture.Althoughcommunicationwiththeoldcangetalotoflivelyexperienceandavoidmanymistakesinlife,yourmostimportantresponsibilityistolearnhowoverasstudentsstudyandwhattheywilllearn。Arrangedroomcansaveyoutimeandhavemorechancestolivewithpeerswhomayhavethesameinterestwithyou.Bythis,youcanmakealotofyoungfriendsandifyouareintroubleinfuture,theymaygiveyousomesuggestionsandahelpinghand。(精品文档请下载)
IwishthatyouwouldtakemyadviceandI'mwaitingtohearfromyou。(精品文档请下载)
6月份高考英语写作题
假设你是明启中学的学生王磊,你校学生会将组织一次徒步活动,并在校园公布了如下方案,征求师生意见.写一封邮件给活动组织者,内容须包括:(精品文档请下载)
你认为方案中需要改进的地方及改进建议;
你的理由.
徒步活动方案
主题:发现上海
时间:5月1日(星期日)下午3:00
道路:从人民广场出发,途经南京东路,抵达外滩(theBund)后原路返回
考生原作1
I'mastudentnamedLeiWangofourschool.HearingthenewsthatourStudents’UnionwillorganizeawalkingprogramandhasputthedraftedplanontheInternet,I'llventuretoairmythoughtsaboutitasfollows.(精品文档请下载)
Tobeginwith,frommypointofview,thetimeplannedisnotappropriate。Asisknowntoall,thefirstdayofMayisthefirstdayofholidayinChinasothatthecentercityofShanghaiissuretobecrowdedonthatday.ToensurethatwestudentshaveagoodtasteofbeautyofShanghai,thedatehadbetterbeputofftilltheendoftheholiday.Besides,Iholdtheideathattherouteshouldberevid.
Personally,afterapproachingattheBund,it'snotagoodchancetogobackaccordingtotheoriginalroute。Instead,westudentscangotootherplacesofinteresttogobacktoschool,whichguaranteesagoldenopportunityofwitnessingthebeautyofShanghai。(精品文档请下载)
Inanutshell,allthethoughtsabovearebadonmypersonalsuggestions.Iwouldbemuchobligedifmysuggestionsarefullyconsidered。(精品文档请下载)
考生原作2
Wordscomethatawalkingactivitywillbeheldinourschool。Aboutthisactivity,Ihavesomeideas。(精品文档请下载)
Ithinkwecanmakethesubject—findingShanghai。IhaveenthesubjectonourschoolInternet.Ithinkitisgreatfulandinteresting。Butinmyopinion,weshouldgotomorelocalandhistoricplaceinShanghai,suchasYuGarden.Becauthislocalplaceisrichofmanyhistoricalcultureandmeaningful。(精品文档请下载)
SomyplanisthatwecangotoYuGardenfirstandthenwecanaccepttheplanonschoolInternet-—-startinPeople’sSquare,NanjingRoad,endintheBund.TheanotheradviceisthatIthinkthetimeisnotfit.BecauonSundaythepopular
placewillattractmanytrouists,itisverydangerous。SoIsuggestthatweshouldholdtheactivityonworkday。(精品文档请下载)
That'sall,Ihopeyoucanacceptmyadvice。Thanks!(精品文档请下载)
考生2(修改版)
Towhomitmayconcern,
Wordhascomethatahikingeventwillbeheldinourschool。Andyouareekingforopinionsfromteachersandstudents。Ihavesomepersonalopinionsaboutthivent。(精品文档请下载)
Inthefirstplace,Ithinkweshouldstickclolytothesubject—FindingShanghai,whichmeanslettinghikersgettoknowmoreaboutShanghai.Weshouldgopastsomeuniqueplaceswhichreprentthecity’scharacteristics,suchasYuGarden,theOrientalPearlTVTowerandetc.TheplacesarefulloffactorsofShanghai’shistoricalcultureandclassicarchitecture。Inthecondplace,Ifeelthatthetimeisnotappropriate,foronSundaytherepopularplaceswillbecrowdedwith
touristsandpedestrians,whichisunfavorabletotheevent。Inthisca,Ipropothatweshouldholdthishikingeventonaworkdaytoavoidunnecessarycongestion。(精品文档请下载)
That’sallIwanttoputforwardtoyou,andIhopethatyoucanadoptmysuggestion.(精品文档请下载)
Yourssincerely,
WangLei
1月份高考英语概括写作题
Shyness
Ifyousufferfromshyness,youarenotalone,forshynessisauniversalphenomenon。Itisnotsurprisingthatsocialscientistsarelearningmoreaboutitscaus。(精品文档请下载)
Thefirstenvironmentalcauofshynessmanybeachild’shomeandfamilylife.Today'schildrenaregrowingupinsmallerandsmallerfamilies,withfewerandfewerrelativeslivingnearby。Growingupinhomesinwhichbothparentsworkfulltime
,childrenmaynothavethesocializingexperienceoffrequentvisitsbyneighboursandfriends.Becauoftheirlackofsocialskills,theymaybegintofeelsociallyinhibited,orshy,whentheystartschool。(精品文档请下载)
Acondenvironmentalcauofshynessinanindividualmaybeone'sculture。InalargestudyconductedinJapan,57percentofparticipantsratedthemlvesasshy.RearchersHendersonandZimbardosay,“OneexpectationisthatinJapananindividualperformancesuccessiscreditedexternallytoparents,teachers,andothers,whilefailureintirelyblamedontheperson."ThereforeJapanelearnnottakerisksinpublicandrelyinsteadongroup-shareddecisions.(精品文档请下载)
Technologymayalsoplayarole.IntheUnitedStates,thenumberofyoungpeoplewhoreportbeingshyhasrinfrom40percentto50percentinrecentyears。Duetoourhugeadvancesintechnology,watchingtelevision,playingvideogames,andsurfingtheWebhavereplacedrecreationalactivitiesthatinvolvesocialinteractionformanyyoungpeople.
Adults,too,arebecomingmoreisolatedasaresultoftechnology.Face—to-faceinteractionswithbankclerks,gasstationattendants,andshopassistantsarenolongernecessarybecaupeoplecanumachinestodotheirbanking,filltheirgastanks,andordergoods。Inshort,theybecomeshy。(精品文档请下载)
Itappearsthatmostpeoplehaveexperiencedshynessatsometimeintheirlives。Therefore,ifyouareshy,youhavelotsofcompany.(精品文档请下载)
参考答案:
Shynessiscommonandithanvironmentalcaus,includinghomeandfamilylife,cultureandtechnology。Firstly,withsmallerfamiliesandworkingparents,childrenlacksocialinteractions.Secondly,blamingfailureonindividualscauspeopleinsomeculturetobeshyinpublic.Finally,withthedevelopmentoftechnology,peoplehavefeweropportunitiestosocializeinperson.(精品文档请下载)
6月份高考英语概括写作题
LearningbyRoteintheDigitalAge
Rotelearninghasbecomeenasanoutdatedmethodofteaching。Thedictionarydefineslearning‘byrote’as‘frommemory’,withoutthoughtofthemeaning;inamechanicalway.(精品文档请下载)
Thedeclineofrotelearninghasbeenquickenedbytechnology.Nooneneedstomemorizefriends’phonenumbersoremailaddressbecausuchdataisconvenientlystoredandaccessibleelectronically.AndwhyrememberwhenandwhereWorldWarIIbrokeoutwhenyoucanfindtheanswerontheinternetinaboutsixconds?Butnowtherearevoicesforaneedtoreturntorotelearning。(精品文档请下载)
Infact,memorizingkeydataisntialtolearninganyskill。Doctoringrequiresknowledgeofmedicineandlawyeringrequiresknowledgeofcasandlaws.Ofcour,beingabletorecallthingswillnotfurtheryourunderstandingofthothings,butwithoutmemorizingthefoundationelements,youcannotprogresstoadeeperunderstandingofasubject.(精品文档请下载)
Whiletheinternetandcomputershaveweakenedtheneedforustorememberthings,itmaywellbethatmobilelearningcanhelpbringthisstyleoflearningbacktolifebymakingitmoreconvenientandmorefun.