英文满分作文：减少成年文盲比教育年轻人要重要x

英文满分作文:减少成年文盲比教育年轻人要重要
作文题目:
Educationofyoungpeopleishighlyprioritizedinmanycountries.However,educatingadultswhocannotwriteorreadivenmoreimportantandgovernmentsshouldspendmoremoneyonthis.
Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
【话题分类】
教育类
【题目解析】
题目大意:年轻群体的教育在许多国家都是优先的。但教育文盲的承认更重要,政府应该投入更多的资金在这方面。
难点:本题将教育的课题上升到了教育公平性、被忽略的成年文盲群体上。看似是一道不容置疑的题目,但很容易写偏。一些考生会在文中讨论‘教育的重要性’,而非‘为什么减少成年文盲比教育年轻人要重要’。
【写作思路】
开头段:年轻一代的教育是社会普遍重视的,但成年人的教育几乎是盲点。有人提出这值得更重视。个人表示同意。
主体第一段:论述消除成年文盲对整体社会公平性的重要意义。
主体第二段:将议题深入到成年群体中的女性文盲是更值得关注的。
主体第三段:反驳一些人认为年轻人教育才是未来的观点。文盲的现象有逐代传递现象,并且成年文盲的存在必将阻碍教育普及的进程。
结尾段:总结个人观点,强调消除成年文盲在当下的紧迫性。
【参考范文】
Incontrasttotheworldwideawarenessofeducatingyounggenerations,adultilliteracyemsablindspotinmodernsociety.Therefore,somepeoplesuggestthatgovernmentfundingandattentionshouldbepaidmoreonreducingthenumberofuneducatedgrown-ups.Inmyopinion,itwouldbeanecessarysteptotake.
Ithastoberecognizedthattheeradicationofilliteracyrvesasakeylinkinthestruggleforsocialequity,butinmanycountries,largegroupsofadultshaveneverbeengiventhechancetolearn,toreadandwrite.Acountrycannottrulydevelopifsomepeoplearehighlyeducatedwhileothersarecompletelyilliterate.Thelatterwillneverbeabletoplaytheirfullpartasamemberofthesociety,whichcaneasilyresultinawideninggapbetweendifferentsocialgroups.Inturn,thestabilizationofourworldsuffers.
Besides,femaleeducationanddevelopmentshareanevenmorepowerfulrelationship,buttheparticularlyhighrateofwomenilliteracyisalarming.Thisadultgrouprequiresparticularattention,notjustbecauwomenneedtohavemoreparticipationinthelabormarket,butalsobecaueducatedmothersaremorelikelytoensurethewell-beinganddevelopmentoftheyounggenerations.Bycontrast,achildfromafamilywithoutbasiclevelofknowledgewouldpossiblyendupbeingunabletoaccesspropereducation.
Somepeoplewouldclaimthatthecoreoffuturedevelopmentultimatelylieswiththeyoungergenerations,andthatilliteracywouldeventuallybecomeaproblemofthepast,ifonlytheyoungcanacceptpropereducation.However,thissimplisticnotionfailstoconsiderasubstantialmechanism—thelackofeducationeasilypassdownthroughgenerations.Inevitably,adultilliteracywouldhindertheprogressofuniversaleducationfromgoingfurther.
Toconclude,governmentsmusttakethismattermoreriously,increasingtheirinvestmentsinadults’educationinordertoguaranteeeducationtoall.Afterall,wheneducatingyounggenerationhasmadesignificantachievement,itwouldbefrustratingtoeglobalprogressonreducingilliteracystagnating.